aiight the rules
10-14 lines
we both have to drop in 2hrs
5 votes win
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Eki
Tolerant Level
aiight the rules
10-14 lines
we both have to drop in 2hrs
5 votes win
plz sign in
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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//
yeh am here.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ................................................
Am sick of these puppets, with pre-sets
Behaving like muppets, children with no facts
Mature up, understand, You still have time to grow,
To lyrically and physically, become a man
You want hours to bust a couple of lines?
Give me 10 minutes, wanna borrow some of my rhymes?
I know this shit is complicated, Skippy*
Your getting sun cancer, your skin looking freckly , freaky
You cant flow , this shit is deadly, rather extreme
You redneck, isn’t your country still under the Queen?**
Why are you Australian’s natural followers, it makes me vomit
Go learn your history, you came to that island as Convicts***.
I know you dont understand history,
and there is still things in this world you haven’t yet seen
relax, you just into puberty, your only sixteen
*Skippy – Australian Show About kangaroo called skippy
Also the kid there is very fracly because there is no ozone layer above Australia
So there is skinn disorder
** Australia is still a colony under England and the Queen
*** ages ago Australia was like a jail for convicts from england.. THats how they started off. and turned into a nation
Ps no hard feeling towards aussies…… Just spitin
hey comeon man... am sure you dont REALLY need 2 hours.. or do you?.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......................
no worries about dissin aussies im use to it
Eki u was feel the ~Power and Wrath~ im the man who brang the ~Towers to Crap~ and i snaped ur ~spine in Half~ cause when i read ur verse i ~Cryied and Laughed~//
listen ur ~Twisted Paragraghs~ cant complete the system of u getting ~Fisted to first Class~ and my verses demonstrate and u ~admitted ur Last~//
the interventions ~trick ur mind~the games comence when u dumb and ~Thick u cant ryhme~//
as ur body and organs decide to ~Chrode Instantly~and ur intestines churn in a matter of seconds and ~Erode Constantly~//
when u ~Turtore ur Lungs~ like in the states in NY is look once and u will get a ~puncture from Guns~//
man u wanna talk about ~Borrowing Rymes~ man u being beggind me to be ~loaning my crimes~//
if u could just think...and do some ~Connecting Punches~mayber u might win a battle instead of ~infecting Kids Lunches~ and maybe u will live another day but now... ur ~Creamating ur Dead Hunches//
killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//
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Eki riped it from tha gate... Tolerant level came back with shit...And still is shit...Eki all tha way
eki, u broke the rules. u upped over 5 times. read the rules or i will prosecute your ass next time. this has been a message from your public health following moderator.
lol ^
anyways, Eki took this battle, he had a better flow, better structure, creativity and some-what sort of disses...which gets him this win, the opponent has a newbie strucutre, with all those stupid squiggly lines and such. so overall Eki gets the vote.
vote - Eki
vote on this battle in return.
Banishment Battle
punches- Tol(harder....more thougth put into them)
flo- tie(both had bad flo)
structure- eki(tolerance has the wakest multi structure ive seen)
multi's-Tol(what can i say....it's all he had)
meti4's-eki(close but he seemed more original with his)
personals-eki(tolerance didnt have any at all)
overall-eki(close but that wak over-multi structure doom'd tolerance...)
had he not over done it...he mighta won this.
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