12-16 lines
No crew votes
No hate votes
Regular Rules....
Spit A.S.a.P
No unexplained votes, and remember to poll vote.
G'luck
Peace
High Class
rule
12-16 lines
No crew votes
No hate votes
Regular Rules....
Spit A.S.a.P
No unexplained votes, and remember to poll vote.
G'luck
Peace
Soft Focus
..Returns..
My verse...drop soon man...good luck
Ya leader an mine clashed emotionaly whydja get involved
Say'n ya battle Deacon Ls promised no problems resolved
Your either dead an gone or gone an dead take your pick
Tryin to go higher in ranks for D.O.I so you ride WL dick
Judgin by your character ya got terets speakin disabilities
You idlize my crew thats why you diss for hibitie jibatees
In school you dissed to flirt an flirten turns to harrasment
We all no ya queer now ya can come out the basement
High Class couldn't exscalate to my level if riden astroid
You try clinging to my ass..annoying like a fuckin hemroid
Battle you topical next an write about your death granted
You should of kept your mouth closed took life for granted
Now I suppose you didn't mean to purpose to this penalty
You broke Rules when you came into SF's lyrical facility
Frustrated and obligated to kill you..HC..lyrically paralized
Couldn't move to the future ahead of ya
....I see death in ya eyes
Soft Focus
..Returns..
Aight, Im checkin in. Ive been on writers block. ANd im startin to come out of it... So, Checkin In BIaTch
Your punches are glares, Mine leaving you Lyrically Impared
Think your so hot, Me winning this battle is your only ' NightMare '
Fake keepings leave you sleeping , ya Crews Bitchen Repeating
Your crew claims ' Topical ' Cause other-wise you take beatings
This is just the start, I impart death and strain into your heart
You might tell ' The Weather ' But Rap is Not your ' Art '
Annoying like locus, Rhymes you write continou to be hopeless
You cant win, You punches are to ' Soft ' and lost ya ' Focus '
Your line now rope-less, Flow is Leak'n... Rap not worth keepin
Who U ganna Dick-Ride next, Allready Been Edicuos and Deacon
Bitch, Learn your lesson... Your just a left out Blessin
This battle will have you running back to ' Soft Focus Confessions '
Im a seal to your fate, 0 your rate, just take your place
Next tell ' File ' to Re-write ya verse, cause spelling aint your only mistake...
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- Conclusion on Punches -
Line 1-2 ( Nightmare was a rap of his )
Line 3-4 ( His crew is Topical, and never wants to Battle )
Line 5-6 ( 'The Weathers Art' is a rap of his, You know what it means LOL )
Line 7-8 ( Im Clown'n on the Crew Name ' Soft Focus '
Line 9-10 ( He seems to always Dick-ride them and Crew )
Line 11-12 ( File- A Crew Member... Fixed spelling mistakes in his rap, befor he put it into Open Mic )
---> Well, thats my verse. I know I won because of major personals. Or thats just my opinion on this match. G/L Rule
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
good verse...lets get some votes in now...pz
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Soft Focus
..Returns..
Sorry bout this everyone, I fucked up on this shit...
Lines 1-2 ( ' Nightmare ' was a rap of his )
Lines 3-4 ( His crew is Topical, and never wants to Battle )
Lines 5-6 ( ' The Weather Art ' was a rap that he wrote )
Lines 7-8 ( Im clowning on there crew name of course ' Soft Focus ' )
Lines 9-10 ( He be dick ryden his crew members )
Lines 11-12 ( ' Soft Focus Confessions ' is a thread in there crew forum )
Lines 13-14 ( ( File- A Crew Member... Fixed spelling mistakes in his rap, befor he put it into Open Mic )
Dont even think of that shit up there... Sorry again...
Thanks Rule, you know we hommies... LOL G/L
UPPIN
OUT
-High Class a.k.a Confusion
UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN, I know I voted on other battles, cmon people and return the favors please.... UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN #2
UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN, I know I voted on other battles, cmon people and return the favors please.... UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN #3
opener: tie
closer: high
punches: tie
structure: tie
vocab/wordplay: rule
multies: tie
metas: rule
overall: rule
this was a hell of a close battle, an rule takes it by an hiar.
keep up the competetiveness!!!
PLZ HIT UP THIS BATTLE WITH A FAIR VOTE, AS I HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO HIT UP YOURS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=99197
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leave feed and a link i'll return it
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OOOOOOHHH not bad ya'll..nice battle
BREAKDOWN-
punches-High
metas-Rule
Flow-Both
Structure-both
sustainment-High
Vocab-Rule
Complexity-Rule
Opener-High
Closer-High
Overall-High
he jus had betta punches..Rule was classy n complex
but dint hit that hard pz
MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...hreadid=100546
some nice complex shit from rule as usual.....
nice verse from High Class aswell tho....
sum close shit tbh....
opener - tie
closer - high
punches - tie
structure - tie
vocab - rule
multi's - tie
metas - rule
vote - rule
good luck with this both of ya....no hate
laterz
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for the record..... im tryin to poll....
but it wont let me!!!?!?!?!?!
duno y....ive got 5 wins so it shud let me shudnt it? :S
sorry....
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Just so yall know befor you make the votes. ( This is not going to B.I. Deatained ) There is a hole bunch of personals in there. So you should take that into consideration... UPPIN UPPIN UPPIN#3
This was amazinly close, Anyway L's breakdown:
punches - high class
personals - tie
flow - tie
creativity - rule
opener - high class
closer - high class
OVERALL - high class
Every category was really close. Props to both
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
It wont let me poll in here so get a mod to add my vote. Dunno why it aint lettin me poll tho..................
Peace!!!
LM The Life
& Times
...The Rhymes
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