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Jeffry
Filthy McNasty
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This is my check...
check...
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PM'd Filthy asking for 24 hour extension, he agreed...
Both pieces due in 24 hours.
Cool...Originally Posted by Jeffry
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ok.... here goes absolutely nothin...
FML....
I saw him report H.McCoy for biting, damn this fool is so obnoxious,
I knew he was filthy, but even he couldn't compete with Andy Milanokis,
This dude has zero swag........thats clearly obvious to see,
Ive heard dirty jokes, but i heard this pig rollin in mud, bitch he is filthy,
Had a 1 night stand - not with keri hilson - wit chris brown, thats his fantasy,
Transsexual prostitues come cheaper by the dozen 2, bitch thats nasty,
His rap stats don't show up on paper, theres nothin he does thats worth trackin,
Works $6.50 at McD's, wishes he was K-Fed, but they both suck at rappin,
Mod's place their bets in the Mod Lounge but he can't keep up,
Keep your day job, theres no estate here for you, your crib on FL went bankrupt
fml keystyle, g/l Filth. Fml. fml fml fml
Homie, I fathered your style... you couldn't cut it right like a lefty swordsman
Whether text or the Mike, you'll get sonned in this game call him Jeffry Jordan
He never carried the Heat... so he balls one dimensional in this slam dunk contest
& hasn't lived up 2 the name since a hair old minor if I'm being damn blunt honest
His chick handles money... if she act up, I'm quick to teller I'll pop & spray
My revolver'll Sixer.... call it a bank shot cuz she'll definitely need a Dr., J
This is premeditated murder..... label it killing season though my mind's less tense
Keep talking Jazzy Jeff & I'll release a summer time hit 2 get booked 4 fresh prints
There's 3 things in life you'll never achieve... bitch that's money, power, & respect
My Style's so Sheek the ext. made him dread locks, but still gave Jadakiss of death
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I saw him report H.McCoy for biting, damn this fool is so obnoxious,
I knew he was filthy, but even he couldn't compete with Andy Milanokis,
ehh
This dude has zero swag........thats clearly obvious to see,
Ive heard dirty jokes, but i heard this pig rollin in mud, bitch he is filthy,
nahh
Had a 1 night stand - not with keri hilson - wit chris brown, thats his fantasy,
Transsexual prostitues come cheaper by the dozen 2, bitch thats nasty,
nahh
His rap stats don't show up on paper, theres nothin he does thats worth trackin,
Works $6.50 at McD's, wishes he was K-Fed, but they both suck at rappin,
ohk
Mod's place their bets in the Mod Lounge but he can't keep up,
Keep your day job, theres no estate here for you, your crib on FL went bankrupt
ehh
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Homie, I fathered your style... you couldn't cut it right like a lefty swordsman
Whether text or the Mike, you'll get sonned in this game call him Jeffry Jordan
ohk
He never carried the Heat... so he balls one dimensional in this slam dunk contest
& hasn't lived up 2 the name since a hair old minor if I'm being damn blunt honest
ehh
His chick handles money... if she act up, I'm quick to teller I'll pop & spray
My revolver'll Sixer.... call it a bank shot cuz she'll definitely need a Dr., J
ohkish
This is premeditated murder..... label it killing season though my mind's less tense
Keep talking Jazzy Jeff & I'll release a summer time hit 2 get booked 4 fresh prints
ohk wording a lil off coulda been harsher
There's 3 things in life you'll never achieve... bitch that's money, power, & respect
My Style's so Sheek the ext. made him dread locks, but still gave Jadakiss of death
ehh a little stretched imo
jeff ur punches were soft and not rlly connecting no hate though, filthy ur verse was ohkish but enough for the win
/Filth
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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my vote goes to filth better lines word play nd name plays against a wack verse point blank!
Vote Dq'ed...Not a Proper Breakdown
-Quest.
Last edited by Quest.; June 14th, 2011 at 12:15 PM
^You need a more thorough breakdown, or that votes getting DQ'd...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07&postcount=5
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Jeffry
I saw him report H.McCoy for biting, damn this fool is so obnoxious
I knew he was filthy, but even he couldn't compete with Andy Milanokis
not feelin the opener, the andy reference seemed irrelevant with the set up.. didnt like the way u chose to use that as a punch when it doesnt hold any sting to it..
This dude has zero swag........thats clearly obvious to see
Ive heard dirty jokes, but i heard this pig rollin in mud, bitch he is filthy
thought overall this bar pretty much was an attempt that missed..theres alot of things u could play off like a name with filthy but u took the basic route using farm animal jokes nd such..wasnt seeing creativity on this one
Had a 1 night stand - not with keri hilson - wit chris brown, thats his fantasy
Transsexual prostitues come cheaper by the dozen 2, bitch thats nasty
again the references had no connection with the 2nd line in anyway..overall tho the last part was really basic...no punch here.
His rap stats don't show up on paper, theres nothin he does thats worth trackin
Works $6.50 at McD's, wishes he was K-Fed, but they both suck at rappin
felt the set up had potential..but the 2nd line was pretty bad seein how u tried to make fun of him workin at mc donalds..then switched up the topic quick with comparing him to k fed...this wasnt connectin at all in my eyes..
Mod's place their bets in the Mod Lounge but he can't keep up,
Keep your day job, theres no estate here for you, your crib on FL went bankrupt
bad closer, the punch missed off to start, and secondly..the flow was mad choppy, didnt feel anything come out smooth. whole bar felt really rocky to be honest..
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FilthyMcNasty
Homie, I fathered your style... you couldn't cut it right like a lefty swordsman
Whether text or the Mike, you'll get sonned in this game call him Jeffry Jordan
i thought the opener was a good start..the set up was semi creative but the execution of the punch and ball reference was kinda funny.
He never carried the Heat... so he balls one dimensional in this slam dunk contest
& hasn't lived up 2 the name since a hair old minor if I'm being damn blunt honest
bar had his ups and downs. the set up line was okish cause they're werent any problems with it but then in the 2nd line i felt in the beginnin alot of filler that was bein spit which prolonged the punch and sting factor..the multi syllables in the end connected but it seemed like it took a while which all the words that didnt seem necessary..
His chick handles money... if she act up, I'm quick to teller I'll pop & spray
My revolver'll Sixer.... call it a bank shot cuz she'll definitely need a Dr. J
solid punch and nameplay. 1st line i liked and the 2nd connected well and made more sense as to the dr. j reference
This is premeditated murder..... label it killing season though my mind's less tense
Keep talking Jazzy Jeff & I'll release a summer time hit 2 get booked 4 fresh prints
not feelin this bar, reason being the 2nd line took much with the awkward wordin..didnt flow well and the there wasnt really much of a punch here if it was executed nicely...sorta average bar overall.
There's 3 things in life you'll never achieve... bitch that's money, power, & respect
My Style's so Sheek the ext. made him dread locks, but still gave Jadakiss of death
punch factor and wordplay was good. delivery and wording? not so much..if u cut back the filler and got more straight to the point in way of delivering it short and sweet, i think the closer coulda been dope. but seein how it took some sting from it, the closer was good on the creative side, but an almost good ending to the drop
Verdict
after readin both opponents, i felt the bigger and stronger presence coming from Filthy..reason being why he came with nameplay punches which showed some creativity, had a more direct approach in his disses. jeffry, i felt i didnt see anythin that involved mcnasty in this, so there wasnt an up close and personal feel to ur piece. aside from that, u had some attempts but they were all missing to be honest with irrelevant set ups and punch attempts that couldnt execute for when it came time. flow, punches, personal, nameplay, and creativity i think went all to filthy pretty easily. i thought both spits in terms of flow was lackin consistency tho, if u could touch up and tighten it up a bit then i think both could elevate on that for now..+ punches for jeffry.
Vote-> Filthy
if both could tweek some things, then both would definetely be hard to fuck with. this was my honest opinion on this battle and seein how i dont have 50 posts my input isnt valid yet 100%, but when i get that amount ill come back nd drop the vote.
i could use some votes on my battles when u can..
but i think i broke it down enough..
keep elevatin fellas..
I saw him report H.McCoy for biting, damn this fool is so obnoxious,
I knew he was filthy, but even he couldn't compete with Andy Milanokis,
na
This dude has zero swag........thats clearly obvious to see,
Ive heard dirty jokes, but i heard this pig rollin in mud, bitch he is filthy,
weak
Had a 1 night stand - not with keri hilson - wit chris brown, thats his fantasy,
Transsexual prostitues come cheaper by the dozen 2, bitch thats nasty,
weak again
His rap stats don't show up on paper, theres nothin he does thats worth trackin,
Works $6.50 at McD's, wishes he was K-Fed, but they both suck at rappin,
lol - aight
Mod's place their bets in the Mod Lounge but he can't keep up,
Keep your day job, theres no estate here for you, your crib on FL went bankrupt
nah man, FL/Front Lines nameplay shits are over used imo unless it's a fresh flip.. this was weak sauce
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Homie, I fathered your style... you couldn't cut it right like a lefty swordsman
Whether text or the Mike, you'll get sonned in this game call him Jeffry Jordan
lol, ok
He never carried the Heat... so he balls one dimensional in this slam dunk contest
& hasn't lived up 2 the name since a hair old minor if I'm being damn blunt honest
not even understanding this shit, it was worded weird
His chick handles money... if she act up, I'm quick to teller I'll pop & spray
My revolver'll Sixer.... call it a bank shot cuz she'll definitely need a Dr., J
sick bar
This is premeditated murder..... label it killing season though my mind's less tense
Keep talking Jazzy Jeff & I'll release a summer time hit 2 get booked 4 fresh prints
cool
There's 3 things in life you'll never achieve... bitch that's money, power, & respect
My Style's so Sheek the ext. made him dread locks, but still gave Jadakiss of death
digging the wp
Yea Filth came with it, way more consistent and hard hitting
v/FM
upp...
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Nothing.
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His chick handles money... if she act up, I'm quick to teller I'll pop & spray
My revolver'll Sixer.... call it a bank shot cuz she'll definitely need a Dr., J
This is premeditated murder..... label it killing season though my mind's less tense
Keep talking Jazzy Jeff & I'll release a summer time hit 2 get booked 4 fresh prints
should have worded this better^
There's 3 things in life you'll never achieve... bitch that's money, power, & respect
My Style's so Sheek the ext. made him dread locks, but still gave Jadakiss of death
again dope wordplay, better wording could have carried this further tho
Jeffry your wording was terrible here bro, you really gotta step it up take some time on your next verse.
V - FM
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