Check in by Thursday 1159 pm EDT
Verses due Friday 1159 pm EDT
agree on a line limit (10-20)
Check in by Thursday 1159 pm EDT
Verses due Friday 1159 pm EDT
agree on a line limit (10-20)
Ay thereee buddyyyy
12-14 cool?
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
sounds good fam, GL
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
GL Marv
ur wack ass robbed me last time, but now I'm leaving you broken & scared
cause you crossed the line - which is something you should have done over ur bars
he thinks he's gona champ again, and he's acting like I'm new to this
& I don't respect that clown intent - but I do find his line of work humerous
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
I heard this broke fuck wants to get famous through his rappin bisness
so I'll choke you with a towel & smack u with my chain - an you can go from rags to riches
you depressing fuck, stop droppen em fake personals, u dont know me
shit I'd give u a taste of ur own medicine, but ur one anti depressant away from an OD
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
you suck my dick said my songs nice, already beat u, u picked the wrong fight
and since i already beat u once, its only obvious that il rip this bong twice
bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
this dick aint even a little tuff, plus his girl said his ball sack is shriveled up
and im pretty sure girls dont think your bongkers, when they mention your little nuts
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
your a bit weird but you deff get down with Swag, i thought you were fresh B
until i realized when you said you fuck wit Styles...u actually meant sexing that emcee
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
I heard this broke fuck wants to get famous through his rappin bisness
so I'll choke you with a towel & smack u with my chain - an you can go from rags to riches
you depressing fuck, stop droppen em fake personals, u dont know me
shit I'd give u a taste of ur own medicine, but ur one anti depressant away from an OD
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
vs.
bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
this dick aint even a little tuff, plus his girl said his ball sack is shriveled up
and im pretty sure girls dont think your bongkers, when they mention your little nuts
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
Good battle here. Both had some creative lines, good punches, good references. Both had decent opening lines, bongkers had some creative lines, and marv did too. Both closing lines hit hard I think Bongkers had the harder hit coming off the closing line. Marv had better set ups and harder punches. This line i think won the battle:
It was pretty clever. Good battle guys. Both came hard.bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
v - marv.
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
so I'll choke you with a towel & smack u with my chain - an you can go from rags to riches
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
^LMAO SICK!
vs
this dick aint even a little tuff, plus his girl said his ball sack is shriveled up
and im pretty sure girls dont think your bongkers, when they mention your little nuts
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
DAMN!
your a bit weird but you deff get down with Swag, i thought you were fresh B
until i realized when you said you fuck wit Styles...u actually meant sexing that emcee
good battle overall. thought marv lost after readin the first few bars but he picked it up
and never dropped the ball. Bong came pretty coo too but had some punches that just
missed and a couple that were poorly executed imo. definitely a good show from both of you though.
v. marv
ur wack ass robbed me last time, but now I'm leaving you broken & scared
cause you crossed the line - which is something you should have done over ur bars
he thinks he's gona champ again, and he's acting like I'm new to this
& I don't respect that clown intent - but I do find his line of work humerous
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
I heard this broke fuck wants to get famous through his rappin bisness
so I'll choke you with a towel & smack u with my chain - an you can go from rags to riches
you depressing fuck, stop droppen em fake personals, u dont know me
shit I'd give u a taste of ur own medicine, but ur one anti depressant away from an OD
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
vs.
you suck my dick said my songs nice, already beat u, u picked the wrong fight
and since i already beat u once, its only obvious that il rip this bong twice
bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
this dick aint even a little tuff, plus his girl said his ball sack is shriveled up
and im pretty sure girls dont think your bongkers, when they mention your little nuts
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
your a bit weird but you deff get down with Swag, i thought you were fresh B
until i realized when you said you fuck wit Styles...u actually meant sexing that emcee
Holy shit! Best battle I've read thus far. Either of you could of easily won this. Every bar was dope as fuck. The two bars in bold were the ones that I felt were the best though. Marvelous' was a lot more complex and required some thinkin', which helped the punch connect that much harder. That bar was the decidin' factor in my opinion. Great battle to the both of you though.
i'll try to start voting on title matches in FL from now on..
Luther
ur wack ass robbed me last time, but now I'm leaving you broken & scared
cause you crossed the line - which is something you should have done over ur bars
ok
he thinks he's gona champ again, and he's acting like I'm new to this
& I don't respect that clown intent - but I do find his line of work humerous
haha, nice
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
lol coo
I heard this broke fuck wants to get famous through his rappin bisness
so I'll choke you with a towel & smack u with my chain - an you can go from rags to riches
way forced
you depressing fuck, stop droppen em fake personals, u dont know me
shit I'd give u a taste of ur own medicine, but ur one anti depressant away from an OD
ehh
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
eh okay closer
vs.
marv
you suck my dick said my songs nice, already beat u, u picked the wrong fight
and since i already beat u once, its only obvious that il rip this bong twice
nah
bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
okay
this dick aint even a little tuff, plus his girl said his ball sack is shriveled up
and im pretty sure girls dont think your bongkers, when they mention your little nuts
nah
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
lol damn good concept but terrible wording bruh
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
no, forced
your a bit weird but you deff get down with Swag, i thought you were fresh B
until i realized when you said you fuck wit Styles...u actually meant sexing that emcee
bad closer
Overall, this is pretty good caliber for the FL since the last time I came up in here.
Both got mad potential, but the breakdown speaks for itself. No hate, but I felt the winner was pretty clear here. Neither came all that amazing, but a couple bars stood out for Luthor in a good way, while marv had too many misses.
Vote: Bongkers
ur wack ass robbed me last time, but now I'm leaving you broken & scared
cause you crossed the line - which is something you should have done over ur bars
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
vs
bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
this battle was close as shit..i'ma have to read over again & drop edit my vote in abit
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
ur wack ass robbed me last time, but now I'm leaving you broken & scared
cause you crossed the line - which is something you should have done over ur bars
okish...
he thinks he's gona champ again, and he's acting like I'm new to this
& I don't respect that clown intent - but I do find his line of work humerous
ok...
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
ok...
I heard this broke fuck wants to get famous through his rappin bisness
so I'll choke you with a towel & smack u with my chain - an you can go from rags to riches
eh... kind of corny
you depressing fuck, stop droppen em fake personals, u dont know me
shit I'd give u a taste of ur own medicine, but ur one anti depressant away from an OD
okish...
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
okish...
vs
you suck my dick said my songs nice, already beat u, u picked the wrong fight
and since i already beat u once, its only obvious that il rip this bong twice
eh... punch comes out of nowhere tbh... doesn't really fit the set up at all
bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
wording sucks... decent punch...
this dick aint even a little tuff, plus his girl said his ball sack is shriveled up
and im pretty sure girls dont think your bongkers, when they mention your little nuts
lol... but ok punch...
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
fuuuuucccckk.... this had POTENTIAL.... but the wording is so bad it takes away from the punch...
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
eh... okish...
your a bit weird but you deff get down with Swag, i thought you were fresh B
until i realized when you said you fuck wit Styles...u actually meant sexing that emcee
nah...
Marv seemed a bit rushed... or he underestimated Bong... either way, shit wasn't as polished...
vote Bongkers
he thinks he's gona champ again, and he's acting like I'm new to this
& I don't respect that clown intent - but I do find his line of work humerous
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
vs
bring the nine iron , to this baby, and swinging clubs at this fake G
you were a like a golf ball in your last battle,, the way you got cracked off A.T
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
Damn....very close battle here, i really thought either could have taken it. Both had a few misses that coulda been pretty good but im gonna have to give Marv the slight edge for harder hits. Bong actually came pretty nice and could have taken it but i just think Marv gets it in this one.
v/ Marv
Bongkers
plus I heard ur pussy games weak & for that I'll never pass you indo
cause if his girls feeling marvelous in bed, then I'm sneaking out her bathroom window
so I'll choke you with a towel & smack u with my chain - an you can go from rags to riches
he wants to find a mate & guys with aids are the type he likes to date
so It's not uncommon to see marvel drawn to groups of guys wearing tights and capes
vs
Marvelous
this dick aint even a little tuff, plus his girl said his ball sack is shriveled up
and im pretty sure girls dont think your bongkers, when they mention your little nuts
lemme throw the next shot, luthers jelous cause his girl likes all of his friends cocks
plus he keeps calling me call of duty black opps.... cause im always in his x- box
Seen ya battle in LLL ya couldnt hold composure, like someone had a rope and choked ya
TextLuther? more like batman in the dark knight, the way you couldnt smoka a joka
DAMN!
your a bit weird but you deff get down with Swag, i thought you were fresh B
until i realized when you said you fuck wit Styles...u actually meant sexing that emcee
good champ match here. Bongkers had some ok bars but i have Marvelous taking it with more consistency. Bongkers slacked off a bit in his verse. That little nuts like to me was LOTB cuz it had me rolling and the multies were nice
v/ Marv
To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.
Posting Rules
