10 Lines, 1hr
Mac.
RPK
10 Lines, 1hr
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Yo RPK
I will show up and threat ya' with a cutta
Don't forget kid, that I'm skilled like a stunta
Your lyrics are always pathethic, whacklass
And your face can't be differenciated of an ass
'Cause I am skyrocketing to the sky, really fast
The people can't say if I am me, or the price of gas
You fuckstick, sit down and look at me
But be aware, try to not get wet and pee
Then the crowd will be laughing and non-stop see
Mac's a pussy, real Mcs would never be fearin' him
He end his name like he ends his months: with a period
This fag better stay off of rap battles, otherwise he's goonna get shot
I already know you're a bitch...with the way you take clips in the slot
I fucked your girl, that's when that hoe ain't reppin' ya
She don't give him head, even his sig says that he begginer(beggin' her)
She told me you cum to early, so she ain't on yo whack nuts
Cause as soon as this amateur gets one squeeze....Mac busts
You're gonna get taught a lesson, Imma hafta pop a Wesson
between a Mac and an RPK, we all know the stronger weapon
up for votes
BTW Mac, you have to post links to three battles you have voted on. Since you probably don't have 50 posts, drop feedback on some battles and post those links
I will show up and threat ya' with a cutta
Don't forget kid, that I'm skilled like a stunta
Your lyrics are always pathethic, whacklass
And your face can't be differenciated of an ass
'Cause I am skyrocketing to the sky, really fast
The people can't say if I am me, or the price of gas
You fuckstick, sit down and look at me
But be aware, try to not get wet and pee
Then the crowd will be laughing and non-stop see
The bolded line was the closest that you got to a punch. Everything else was just fillers and self-glorification.
Mac's a pussy, real Mcs would never be fearin' him
He end his name like he ends his months: with a period
Decent attempt with the nameplay, but the wording really hurt the effect that you could've had with this one.
This fag better stay off of rap battles, otherwise he's goonna get shot
I already know you're a bitch...with the way you take clips in the slot
Nah...this was weak
I fucked your girl, that's when that hoe ain't reppin' ya
She don't give him head, even his sig says that he begginer(beggin' her)
Nah...it was an ok concept but the punch didnt connect because the wordplay was...NO!
She told me you cum to early, so she ain't on yo whack nuts
Cause as soon as this amateur gets one squeeze....Mac busts
Nah...not feeling it!
You're gonna get taught a lesson, Imma hafta pop a Wesson
between a Mac and an RPK, we all know the stronger weapon
Decent...your best line of the battle!
Well it didnt really take much to be Mac's verse, granted you didnt bring much RPK, but you brought enough. Mac you had no kind of diss attempts towards your opponent...its a battle not a freestyle. Work on that...RPK at least you knew how to throw a punch, but work on your wording, it will help your punches connect more. Weak battle but...
v/RPK
She told me you cum to early, so she ain't on yo whack nuts
Cause as soon as this amateur gets one squeeze....Mac busts
vs
no punches at all
no hate my dude but u didnt throw a punch or even really have an attempt read other battles and elevate we all started somewhere just take ppls critisism and grow from it .. other dude Rpk u had some ok lines enough to walk away with the win.
vote RPK
hit the champ match
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i cant vote without 50 posts.. but i think here is an exception?Originally Posted by RPK
yeah anyway your all right, im still learning, to be honest my first battle here..
Mac
Yo RPK
I will show up and threat ya' with a cutta
Don't forget kid, that I'm skilled like a stunta
Your lyrics are always pathethic, whacklass
And your face can't be differenciated of an ass
'Cause I am skyrocketing to the sky, really fast
The people can't say if I am me, or the price of gas
You fuckstick, sit down and look at me
But be aware, try to not get wet and pee
Then the crowd will be laughing and non-stop see
Ok attempt for first battle but u really need to work on ur punches more throw in some personal punches things u know of the opponent. use some creativity such as wordplay,nameplay and metaphores. also brush up on ur vocab. No hate man good attempt just need work keep doing ur thing.
RPK
Mac's a pussy, real Mcs would never be fearin' him
He end his name like he ends his months: with a period
This fag better stay off of rap battles, otherwise he's goonna get shot
I already know you're a bitch...with the way you take clips in the slot
I fucked your girl, that's when that hoe ain't reppin' ya
She don't give him head, even his sig says that he begginer(beggin' her)
She told me you cum to early, so she ain't on yo whack nuts
Cause as soon as this amateur gets one squeeze....Mac busts
You're gonna get taught a lesson, Imma hafta pop a Wesson
between a Mac and an RPK, we all know the stronger weapon
Well this was Catsweep for you u came harder
V/RPK
nothing
vs.
She told me you cum to early, so she ain't on yo whack nuts
Cause as soon as this amateur gets one squeeze....Mac busts
You're gonna get taught a lesson, Imma hafta pop a Wesson
between a Mac and an RPK, we all know the stronger weapon
One-sided affair here. Mac, you got some work to do bro, come up with creative lines and personals to set up your punches. Your lines were just a buch of filller lines and RPK came harder and those 4 lines won the battle.
v - RPK
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