Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
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Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
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Verses due Friday 1159 pm eastern
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DayumNation
Congrats on champing FL twice... bitch, its obvious I see through scams
Either his alias is V.H. or your style's hated cause you parallel-a-Gram
It's true A.T. beat me in TWT, but this here's another level though
I'm glad he made it to the top, so I can drop you from a higher pedestal
From noob tourney to FL HW, now you up shit's creek without a paddle
Your name'll forever remain in the middle....tier of textcees on rapbATtles
Hold shift while using comma, cuz you need less grammatical overdose
I'll follow his lead & drop M^ when I leave your body laying coma-tose
It's March Madness & this Wildcat'll make you take the slow route fluke
Cuz I won't need grand wizardry when I use multiple KKK's to blowout Duke
Your Formula1 despite a slow start with Marv leading in that pole position
But the momentum switched gears right after your crews control kicked in*
Razor sharp with the precision... Once I break down A.T., O.M.'s my next mission
This split decision'll leave him with less than he started with like nuclear fission
A.T.'s softer than the Snuggle Bunny, physically its no way he can harm me
His bitch couldn't knock Filth stains out her sheets without airing dirty laundry
Vin rocks Roos & probably copped you some Wallaby shoes once ya head swelled up
We know A.T.'s an animal...cuz this marsupial birthed a style that's underdeveloped
His status far-fetched like not admitting them bars stretched when you reaching see
Placing F before A.T.'ll help him realize how slim your chances were of defeating me!
*M-Var!o & KnowP are in Creational Damage
20 it is...
Filthy's no poser....... but history shows that the times are bound to get colder,Originally Posted By Filthy McNasty
Re: TWT Final Four: L30N vs A.T.
Vote: A.T. for obvious reasons...
So why bother postin.................. when you can read the minds of the voters?
Every chance of scoffing is lost, no beef here, cause filthy's always talking soft,
And Im soon to be facin fishnets.......... once I knock this bitches stockings off,
Your name dont lie your revolting dude, get stomped is what ur supposed to do,
But you've had a hell of a run........ away from me, before I walked all over you,
Ugly fuck had it tough growin up & now he's battling newbs knowin he shouldnt,
Now he's thinkin noone cold hold him........ but its only cuz his mother wouldn't,
This punk aint got no wealth to show, so you know hes never gonna belt a hoe,
Only time a hoe throws herself at you, is when she runs outta other shit to throw,
Your a bitch, but I know there's a man inside you, elevated? bitch u was lied to,
How you claim its u against all odds... when every odd dude is lined up behind u,
So, Filthy... step and get your neck snapped, if you finally grew your balls back,
Clealy you morphed from weak to wack so..... I've got Evolve in the next match,
He's a criminal kid........... hell bent on stealing shit, but he barely makes a dime,
Cause this dumbass will take a stand...................... and leave the T.V. behind,
I'ma up the ant'e to empty his purse, call my bluff.... and the shit will get worse,
I show my hand and he'll read 'em and weep... like everyone who read his verse,
All of Filthy's verse, I'ma bustin it.......... do your research quick and get over it,
Filthy spent days making his case.......................... only to leave, stuffed in it.
DayumNation
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DayumNation
Congrats on champing FL twice... bitch, its obvious I see through scams
Either his alias is V.H. or your style's hated cause you parallel-a-Gram
Ummm kinda sloppy, ok personal.. 3/5
It's true A.T. beat me in TWT, but this here's another level though
I'm glad he made it to the top, so I can drop you from a higher pedestal
This is what i like to a call a "pilot line." because it's a nice start to some heat, just doesnt flow to well with the opener 3/5
From noob tourney to FL HW, now you up shit's creek without a paddle
Your name'll forever remain in the middle....tier of textcees on rapbATtles
Ouch this was nasty coulda open'd it better...but drew blood for sure 4/5
Hold shift while using comma, cuz you need less grammatical overdose
I'll follow his lead & drop M^ when I leave your body laying coma-tose
idk about this...worded rough lil forced maybe..2/5
It's March Madness & this Wildcat'll make you take the slow route fluke
Cuz I won't need grand wizardry when I use multiple KKK's to blowout Duke
eh, miss... filler if anything 2/5
Your Formula1 despite a slow start with Marv leading in that pole position
But the momentum switched gears right after your crews control kicked in*
haha this was ight, not much of a punch more like a statement, 3/5
Razor sharp with the precision... Once I break down A.T., O.M.'s my next mission
This split decision'll leave him with less than he started with like nuclear fission
eh weak 2/5
A.T.'s softer than the Snuggle Bunny, physically its no way he can harm me
His bitch couldn't knock Filth stains out her sheets without airing dirty laundry
na...didnt work for me...2/5
Vin rocks Roos & probably copped you some Wallaby shoes once ya head swelled up
We know A.T.'s an animal...cuz this marsupial birthed a style that's underdeveloped
again ok, coulda went harder with the quote imo, 3/5
His status far-fetched like not admitting them bars stretched when you reaching see
Placing F before A.T.'ll help him realize how slim your chances were of defeating me!
FAT and slim chances?....didnt make since felt like it went the oppisite way you were going for, you coulda played this alot better, good idea none the less, 3/5
Overall=27/50 most of the verse felt like fillers, but the punches that did hit, hit hard, just focus more on wording it'd help you alot imo. no hate levate fam.
Vs.
Filthy's no poser....... but history shows that the times are bound to get colder,
So why bother postin.................. when you can read the minds of the voters?
Funny, but weak opener, 3/5
Every chance of scoffing is lost, no beef here, cause filthy's always talking soft,
And Im soon to be facin fishnets.......... once I knock this bitches stockings off,
Not bad for a pilot line, this woulda been a better opener imo, 3/5
Your name dont lie your revolting dude, get stomped is what ur supposed to do,
But you've had a hell of a run........ away from me, before I walked all over you,
Eh again feels like a bar gettin you amped up for punches to come, this is not really a mid-punch, more like a statement, 2/5
Ugly fuck had it tough growin up & now he's battling newbs knowin he shouldnt,
Now he's thinkin noone cold hold him........ but its only cuz his mother wouldn't,
lol this was funny, nice laugh 4/5
This punk aint got no wealth to show, so you know hes never gonna belt a hoe,
Only time a hoe throws herself at you, is when she runs outta other shit to throw,
haha another good laugh, 4/5
Your a bitch, but I know there's a man inside you, elevated? bitch u was lied to,
How you claim its u against all odds... when every odd dude is lined up behind u,
Nice flip 4/5
So, Filthy... step and get your neck snapped, if you finally grew your balls back,
Clealy you morphed from weak to wack so..... I've got Evolve in the next match,
Not bad, not too much of a hit 3/5
He's a criminal kid........... hell bent on stealing shit, but he barely makes a dime,
Cause this dumbass will take a stand...................... and leave the T.V. behind,
Ha, killin him with these jokes... 4/5
I'ma up the ant'e to empty his purse, call my bluff.... and the shit will get worse,
I show my hand and he'll read 'em and weep... like everyone who read his verse,
Na...played concept imo, 2/5
All of Filthy's verse, I'ma bustin it.......... do your research quick and get over it,
Filthy spent days making his case.......................... only to leave, stuffed in it
Nice closure, fit well. 4/5
Overall=33/50 structure is kinda wack i really aint hip to the hole ....................... repetitive ish, but decent drop here none the less, good metaphores and word flips, you got what it takes stay with it and keep elevatin.
V=A.T. reasons above. No hate just elevate.
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DayumNation
Congrats on champing FL twice... bitch, its obvious I see through scams
Either his alias is V.H. or your style's hated cause you parallel-a-Gram
cool but coulda been worded a bit better
It's true A.T. beat me in TWT, but this here's another level though
I'm glad he made it to the top, so I can drop you from a higher pedestal
I like this
From noob tourney to FL HW, now you up shit's creek without a paddle
Your name'll forever remain in the middle....tier of textcees on rapbATtles
DOPE
Hold shift while using comma, cuz you need less grammatical overdose
I'll follow his lead & drop M^ when I leave your body laying coma-tose
nopee
It's March Madness & this Wildcat'll make you take the slow route fluke
Cuz I won't need grand wizardry when I use multiple KKK's to blowout Duke
agreed with slick this seems like filler
Your Formula1 despite a slow start with Marv leading in that pole position
But the momentum switched gears right after your crews control kicked in*
this is cool
Razor sharp with the precision... Once I break down A.T., O.M.'s my next mission
This split decision'll leave him with less than he started with like nuclear fission
nope
A.T.'s softer than the Snuggle Bunny, physically its no way he can harm me
His bitch couldn't knock Filth stains out her sheets without airing dirty laundry
ehhh
Vin rocks Roos & probably copped you some Wallaby shoes once ya head swelled up
We know A.T.'s an animal...cuz this marsupial birthed a style that's underdeveloped
coulda been worded better
His status far-fetched like not admitting them bars stretched when you reaching see
Placing F before A.T.'ll help him realize how slim your chances were of defeating me!
deff a dope idea but it didnt make sence, it seemed like you saying the chances of him beating you are big lol, coulda been a killer tho if ya got the wording right
vss
Filthy's no poser....... but history shows that the times are bound to get colder,
So why bother postin.................. when you can read the minds of the voters?
cool
Every chance of scoffing is lost, no beef here, cause filthy's always talking soft,
And Im soon to be facin fishnets.......... once I knock this bitches stockings off,
i like this
Your name dont lie your revolting dude, get stomped is what ur supposed to do,
But you've had a hell of a run........ away from me, before I walked all over you,
this was ight agreed it set up was dope and the punch kinda let me down cool idea tho
Ugly fuck had it tough growin up & now he's battling newbs knowin he shouldnt,
Now he's thinkin noone cold hold him........ but its only cuz his mother wouldn't,
dope,laughed when i read this lol
This punk aint got no wealth to show, so you know hes never gonna belt a hoe,
Only time a hoe throws herself at you, is when she runs outta other shit to throw,
once again very cool good laugh
Your a bitch, but I know there's a man inside you, elevated? bitch u was lied to,
How you claim its u against all odds... when every odd dude is lined up behind u,
dope
So, Filthy... step and get your neck snapped, if you finally grew your balls back,
Clealy you morphed from weak to wack so..... I've got Evolve in the next match,
ight word play
He's a criminal kid........... hell bent on stealing shit, but he barely makes a dime,
Cause this dumbass will take a stand...................... and leave the T.V. behind,
lmaoo dopee
I'ma up the ant'e to empty his purse, call my bluff.... and the shit will get worse,
I show my hand and he'll read 'em and weep... like everyone who read his verse,
nope
All of Filthy's verse, I'ma bustin it.......... do your research quick and get over it,
Filthy spent days making his case.......................... only to leave, stuffed in it
strong closer
aight break down i think AT got this , reading Nastys verse i was like AT has to come strong, and AT just came dope, ihave seen better but that TV stand line and the hoe line had me dying.. it was close but im going to give it to AT for being more consistant.
No Hate
Vote- AT
Honest Votes Please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...867/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...992/index.html
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DayumNation
Let's get some votes people... I know this one of the better battles in FL...
DayumNation
Congrats on champing FL twice... bitch, its obvious I see through scams
Either his alias is V.H. or your style's hated cause you parallel-a-Gram
ehh
It's true A.T. beat me in TWT, but this here's another level though
I'm glad he made it to the top, so I can drop you from a higher pedestal
iight
From noob tourney to FL HW, now you up shit's creek without a paddle
Your name'll forever remain in the middle....tier of textcees on rapbATtles
ohk
Hold shift while using comma, cuz you need less grammatical overdose
I'll follow his lead & drop M^ when I leave your body laying coma-tose
nahh
It's March Madness & this Wildcat'll make you take the slow route fluke
Cuz I won't need grand wizardry when I use multiple KKK's to blowout Duke
i liked this one
Your Formula1 despite a slow start with Marv leading in that pole position
But the momentum switched gears right after your crews control kicked in*
ohk
Razor sharp with the precision... Once I break down A.T., O.M.'s my next mission
This split decision'll leave him with less than he started with like nuclear fission
nahh
A.T.'s softer than the Snuggle Bunny, physically its no way he can harm me
His bitch couldn't knock Filth stains out her sheets without airing dirty laundry
lol
Vin rocks Roos & probably copped you some Wallaby shoes once ya head swelled up
We know A.T.'s an animal...cuz this marsupial birthed a style that's underdeveloped
nahh
His status far-fetched like not admitting them bars stretched when you reaching see
Placing F before A.T.'ll help him realize how slim your chances were of defeating me!
ehh
vs
Filthy's no poser....... but history shows that the times are bound to get colder,
So why bother postin.................. when you can read the minds of the voters?
nahh
Every chance of scoffing is lost, no beef here, cause filthy's always talking soft,
And Im soon to be facin fishnets.......... once I knock this bitches stockings off,
nahh
Your name dont lie your revolting dude, get stomped is what ur supposed to do,
But you've had a hell of a run........ away from me, before I walked all over you,
iight
Ugly fuck had it tough growin up & now he's battling newbs knowin he shouldnt,
Now he's thinkin noone cold hold him........ but its only cuz his mother wouldn't,
lol
This punk aint got no wealth to show, so you know hes never gonna belt a hoe,
Only time a hoe throws herself at you, is when she runs outta other shit to throw,
lol
Your a bitch, but I know there's a man inside you, elevated? bitch u was lied to,
How you claim its u against all odds... when every odd dude is lined up behind u,
ohk
So, Filthy... step and get your neck snapped, if you finally grew your balls back,
Clealy you morphed from weak to wack so..... I've got Evolve in the next match,
iight
He's a criminal kid........... hell bent on stealing shit, but he barely makes a dime,
Cause this dumbass will take a stand...................... and leave the T.V. behind,
lol
I'ma up the ant'e to empty his purse, call my bluff.... and the shit will get worse,
I show my hand and he'll read 'em and weep... like everyone who read his verse,
nahh
All of Filthy's verse, I'ma bustin it.......... do your research quick and get over it,
Filthy spent days making his case.......................... only to leave, stuffed in it.
ohk
decent battle filth tried to come personal and had some nice lines, but i feel A.t. came with funnier lines and better wordplay and concepts. he had a few LOL lines that took this battle. no hate
V/A.T.
Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker
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FM
Congrats on champing FL twice... bitch, its obvious I see through scams
Either his alias is V.H. or your style's hated cause you parallel-a-Gram
good opener
It's true A.T. beat me in TWT, but this here's another level though
I'm glad he made it to the top, so I can drop you from a higher pedestal
this was dope. prolly one of your best bars
From noob tourney to FL HW, now you up shit's creek without a paddle
Your name'll forever remain in the middle....tier of textcees on rapbATtles
solid hit here
Hold shift while using comma, cuz you need less grammatical overdose
I'll follow his lead & drop M^ when I leave your body laying coma-tose
wasnt feeling this one
It's March Madness & this Wildcat'll make you take the slow route fluke
Cuz I won't need grand wizardry when I use multiple KKK's to blowout Duke
eeeh...not feeling this one either
Your Formula1 despite a slow start with Marv leading in that pole position
But the momentum switched gears right after your crews control kicked in*
haha okay
Razor sharp with the precision... Once I break down A.T., O.M.'s my next mission
This split decision'll leave him with less than he started with like nuclear fission
so so here. i see the WP with ATOM/fission but it didnt hit that hard
A.T.'s softer than the Snuggle Bunny, physically its no way he can harm me
His bitch couldn't knock Filth stains out her sheets without airing dirty laundry
this was nice... airing dirty laundry haha
Vin rocks Roos & probably copped you some Wallaby shoes once ya head swelled up
We know A.T.'s an animal...cuz this marsupial birthed a style that's underdeveloped
ok wp but i wasnt feeling this one
His status far-fetched like not admitting them bars stretched when you reaching see
Placing F before A.T.'ll help him realize how slim your chances were of defeating me!
so so closer. should have been worded different. F at chance. it just didnt stand out enough.
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A.T.
Filthy's no poser....... but history shows that the times are bound to get colder,
So why bother postin.................. when you can read the minds of the voters?
lol good opener
Every chance of scoffing is lost, no beef here, cause filthy's always talking soft,
And Im soon to be facin fishnets.......... once I knock this bitches stockings off,
ok i see the Misdirect but it just didnt hit hard
Your name dont lie your revolting dude, get stomped is what ur supposed to do,
But you've had a hell of a run........ away from me, before I walked all over you,
haha nice prolly your best bar imo
Ugly fuck had it tough growin up & now he's battling newbs knowin he shouldnt,
Now he's thinkin noone cold hold him........ but its only cuz his mother wouldn't,
good Misdirect here
This punk aint got no wealth to show, so you know hes never gonna belt a hoe,
Only time a hoe throws herself at you, is when she runs outta other shit to throw,
okay concept but i wasnt feeling it overall. wording hurt this one for me
Your a bitch, but I know there's a man inside you, elevated? bitch u was lied to,
How you claim its u against all odds... when every odd dude is lined up behind u,
i wasnt feeling this one
So, Filthy... step and get your neck snapped, if you finally grew your balls back,
Clealy you morphed from weak to wack so..... I've got Evolve in the next match,
nope wasnt feeling this one either
He's a criminal kid........... hell bent on stealing shit, but he barely makes a dime,
Cause this dumbass will take a stand...................... and leave the T.V. behind,
haha ok
I'ma up the ant'e to empty his purse, call my bluff.... and the shit will get worse,
I show my hand and he'll read 'em and weep... like everyone who read his verse,
nice! heard the concept before but i liked this one
All of Filthy's verse, I'ma bustin it.......... do your research quick and get over it,
Filthy spent days making his case.......................... only to leave, stuffed in it.
wasnt feeling the closer...rhyming "it" with "it". could have gotten away with it if you hit it with multi's but ass it throws the punch off wich is really sad because it was a nice mislead concept.
Good battle overall gents.you both brought something different to the table here. A.T. i see you are getting nasty with the misdirections. Filthy your wp has stepped up and is alot more clear. But i think imma go with Filth on this one. good punches + word play. he had one more bar i liked also.
v/ FM
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DayumNation
filthy mcnasty
Congrats on champing FL twice... bitch, its obvious I see through scams
Either his alias is V.H. or your style's hated cause you parallel-a-Gram
Not Feeling decent punch
It's true A.T. beat me in TWT, but this here's another level though
I'm glad he made it to the top, so I can drop you from a higher pedestal
Pretty good, decent hit
From noob tourney to FL HW, now you up shit's creek without a paddle
Your name'll forever remain in the middle....tier of textcees on rapbATtles
Not feeling the wordplay, ehhh punch
Hold shift while using comma, cuz you need less grammatical overdose
I'll follow his lead & drop M^ when I leave your body laying coma-tose
Decent hit not hard just decent
It's March Madness & this Wildcat'll make you take the slow route fluke
Cuz I won't need grand wizardry when I use multiple KKK's to blowout Duke
Likes this line pretty good hit
Your Formula1 despite a slow start with Marv leading in that pole position
But the momentum switched gears right after your crews control kicked in*
Razor sharp with the precision... Once I break down A.T., O.M.'s my next mission
This split decision'll leave him with less than he started with like nuclear fission
Good flow decent hit liked the wordplay
A.T.'s softer than the Snuggle Bunny, physically its no way he can harm me
His bitch couldn't knock Filth stains out her sheets without airing dirty laundry
Vin rocks Roos & probably copped you some Wallaby shoes once ya head swelled up
We know A.T.'s an animal...cuz this marsupial birthed a style that's underdeveloped
Wordplays there hits decent
His status far-fetched like not admitting them bars stretched when you reaching see
Placing F before A.T.'ll help him realize how slim your chances were of defeating me!
Better closer finished stronger then you started
A.T.
Filthy's no poser....... but history shows that the times are bound to get colder,
So why bother postin.................. when you can read the minds of the voters?
Decent opener punch is there just not hard
Every chance of scoffing is lost, no beef here, cause filthy's always talking soft,
And Im soon to be facin fishnets.......... once I knock this bitches stockings off,
Your name dont lie your revolting dude, get stomped is what ur supposed to do,
But you've had a hell of a run........ away from me, before I walked all over you,
Line hit also humurous wordplays there
Ugly fuck had it tough growin up & now he's battling newbs knowin he shouldnt,
Now he's thinkin noone cold hold him........ but its only cuz his mother wouldn't,
Ehh not feeling this bar too much
This punk aint got no wealth to show, so you know hes never gonna belt a hoe,
Only time a hoe throws herself at you, is when she runs outta other shit to throw,
Your a bitch, but I know there's a man inside you, elevated? bitch u was lied to,
How you claim its u against all odds... when every odd dude is lined up behind u,
LMAO nice punch, humorous lines probably the best lines so far
So, Filthy... step and get your neck snapped, if you finally grew your balls back,
Clealy you morphed from weak to wack so..... I've got Evolve in the next match,
He's a criminal kid........... hell bent on stealing shit, but he barely makes a dime,
Cause this dumbass will take a stand...................... and leave the T.V. behind,
Wordplays there Not a hard punch but its still there.... Humorous aswell
I'ma up the ant'e to empty his purse, call my bluff.... and the shit will get worse,
I show my hand and he'll read 'em and weep... like everyone who read his verse,
All of Filthy's verse, I'ma bustin it.......... do your research quick and get over it,
Filthy spent days making his case.......................... only to leave, stuffed in it
Better closer Nice wordplay not so hard of a punch though
Over all close battle Both had some weak areas and good areas, Wordplays a little rough in both verses, Name plays had there ups and downs aswell
v/ A.T
N.C.N
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