shit is hott 4 real fam........ Hook was kewl, could have made it more catchy but it was dope
Lyrics were dope, i thought this to be a dope track,,, shit hard fam...... congrats
Music is Art and Art is beauty
So If
Music is in the eyes of all
And
Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
Does That Give Us All Beauty?
You def have the right idea for this song, and def got a good flow... but im not sure if the beat really matches the message and your voice... i really liked the chorus though... but good job on it, and keep up the good work
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IF your gonna hide your personals or soundclick, dont even bother with me... cause you obviously suck.
The beat on this trcak is great man and ya deliverys cool but i think ya need to put more energy into the hook
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thanks ppl
your flow is reallly slow....in this 1st verse...i like this beat though alot...its def different than ive ever really heard... the lyrics are really good..i like the concept alot fam...deep shit..your hook is good..nice and catchy..im feelin the chorus..the second verse..flow is alright....you kinda fall off a bit at times...lyrics still hittin the spot....
pretty good track fam...keep it up RTF
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