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    Lucifer's Ascent



    Lucifer's Ascent

    Now Arrives The Hour For My Rise To Power
    Between Me Myself And I, The World Was Ours
    Success Was My Obsession, Hatred For Intervention
    Divine Or Otherwise, Despite The Helper’s Intentions
    Exponential Depression Built Embellished Professions
    Potential Aggression, Realized In Hellish Expressions
    My Soul’s Dwelling, Acts As A Form Of Oppression
    Soul’s Rebelling, Acknowledge Or Act With Digression
    Repression Of Emotions, Soul Secession At Last
    Failure Cut Me Up Inside Like Digestion Of Glass
    Questioned If I Could Surpass God, Fell Right Into Vanity
    Envy’s A Mark Of Humanity, Lost My Fight With Insanityme


    Isolated, Hated, I Was Lost In My Pain
    Reflected On Life, I Started To Repent
    Paradise Regained In Lucifer’s Ascent

    Crowned Me Lord Of Hell, Existed Ignored In A Cell
    Now Blacklisted As Twisted, God’s Favorite Son Fell
    My Life Consisted Of Reigning In Those That Resisted
    In Containing The Remaining, All Those That Persisted
    A Death Sustaining Force, Desire For Freedom Waning
    Breath Straining Course, Fire’s Core Needs Maintaining
    This Explaining Is Paining Me, Steadily Draining Me
    Obtaining Disdain, My Servants Readily Maiming Me
    It Was Then I Realized How Despised I’d Grown
    It Was Then I Cast Off The Disguise I’d Known
    Thought The Disguise Was Me, Even Minds Deceive
    My Mind Believed, That This Dark Man Was Not Me


    Lust, Greed, & Power Cost Me My Name
    Isolated, Hated, I Was Lost In My Pain
    Reflected On Life, I Started To Repent
    Paradise Regained In Lucifer’s Ascent

    Felt Hopeless, So I Started To Question My Motives
    Brought It All In Focus, For The Man Who Wrote This
    Why Idolize Power? You Become Virgin Disciples Of Greed
    Idle Cries Gone Sour, Now Archetypal Versions Of Thieves
    The Past Mirrors The Future, Like An Object Of Glass
    Only Way To See The Future, Is To Reflect On The Past
    Fear Stalled The Peasants, But Faith Made Things Pleasant
    Living Now Is A Gift, Reason Why Its Called The Present
    Life’s Too Precious, Be A Butterfingers With Grudges
    As In Let It Go, Now What I Utter Lingers For Judges
    I Hated How It Felt To Ask For Help, But Now I See
    Now I Believe… Only The Weak Mask Their Needs
    Mind Was Cleared, Shrouded By Darkness No Longer
    Brightness Appeared, A Clouded Vision Grew Stronger
    Wings Sprouted From My Back, Started to Ascend
    Lucifer’s Ascent Into Heaven, My Exile At An End


    Lust, Greed, & Power Cost Me My Name
    Isolated, Hated, I Was Lost In My Pain
    Reflected On Life, I Started To Repent
    Paradise Regained In Lucifer’s Ascent...
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    Re: Lucifer's Ascent

    Good piece man. You brought an original concept and illustraited well with strong imagery and vocab. The hook served well the break this up and the pace of the story was just right as well. I really liked the ending, the image of satan ascending from hell to return to God's side. i don't think i've ever read anything like that before. You're on the road to becoming a hall of famer man.

    Keep posting, and please return the favour on my new piece 'Who Am I?'. The sleeping in open mic is retarded.

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    Re: Lucifer's Ascent

    i agree you have a very vivid mind state and it only amps the quality of your content and rhyme
    you have a nice delivery the break helped build anticipation to here more i thinbk this was a great peace
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Lucifer's Ascent

    Damn that was long and every bit as dope. You still killin' these Om joints. Like your style the way you rhyme and shit, I dont know why it's just dope to me. The topic was ill, I like a darker read that makes you think a little, And the devil takin over's about as dark as you get....or is it

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    Re: Lucifer's Ascent

    This piece was so,so
    BUT IM THE BEST!!!!
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    Df My Ass Fuck You Asshole. I Dont Feed Back On Shit Loads Of Wackness. Step Up Yo Game Homeslice
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    Re: Lucifer's Ascent

    Yeah not bad man, I liked it.

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    I’m always a step ahead of u bitches like seniors in middle school.
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    Closed, banned perm for biting
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