Front Lines Championship (Text): Wyte (C) vs. B.Nesse

[SmokaJoka]

You must go 16+ lines...agree on your line limit
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Verses are due by Friday midnight pacific..
This will NOT count against your record...but it will count to your points in rankings...
Voting ends Sunday midnight....
Championship Point Rules: Win by KO 10pts., regular win 5pts., win by no show 3pts. and your opponent that no shows has a clean wipe of their points completely.
Good Luck....and drop dope



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[Wyte]

Check, 18.

[B.Nesse]

w/e damn @ all these battles


check

[B.Nesse]

this cracker's lightin up the front lines, i swear he's just smokin clowns
& takin' those concepts to the LLL... must be y their gettin' older now
ahaha...i fuckin' laugh at wyte, he's suicidal so if ya like him good luck
he'll go from the bottom to the top... then rite back down in one jump
dude, your no hustler homie, you a customer i'm servin u for more pay
it's never too late to turn ya life around... ur gettin fucked either way
heard ur mouth's full of shit, s'no wonder u always force what u type
so i'll put this sucker inbox's... and send that shit to every porno site
i'm sure you all know wyte, yes that confident lil fuck who's all hyped
but why stress the road to success... it's just another bump in ur life
kid's a homophobic huh? guess theres no touchin me ima breeze pass
your RB's slave, but i'll cut a rug with u... just to see a square dance
ur Shakespeare/Schwarzenegger in text, main reason why ur rate's ill
but back then, queer played all roles... s'y there arnold Straight Skillz (are no)
i could diss every drop u've made, wouldn't benefit me much nor you
but i recommend a restroom in England... 'cos your shits PePe la pew
@ your lyrics i laugh so hard i might die, tryin hard to be a pretender
i'd end ya, but ur whole life's genius... hangin from those suspenders (jeans)

IJL'n outtie!

[Wyte]

Put me in the back burner or w/e.

I don't have time this week.

Sorry.

[Tragedian.]

Smoka I'll drop if you want, like Memnto did for Grim.

[Tebo]

How do you get to be front line contendor?

[B.Nesse]

damnit wyte!

w/e....leave feedage cuz i freakin took time out the day to do this shit

[I Got Pwnd]

this cracker's lightin up the front lines, i swear he's just smokin clowns
& takin' those concepts to the LLL... must be y their gettin' older now
^This doesnt work.. too bland.. not even harsh.. the set up was nice.
ahaha...i fuckin' laugh at wyte, he's suicidal so if ya like him good luck
he'll go from the bottom to the top... then rite back down in one jump
^nah.executed wrong.. the wording.. i dunno.. seems boring
dude, your no hustler homie, you a customer i'm servin u for more pay
it's never too late to turn ya life around... ur gettin fucked either way
^aiight.couldve done this better.. cliches are coo.. but Ive seen it done b4.
heard ur mouth's full of shit, s'no wonder u always force what u type
so i'll put this sucker inbox's... and send that shit to every porno site
^coo.
i'm sure you all know wyte, yes that confident lil fuck who's all hyped
but why stress the road to success... it's just another bump in ur life
^naw..playy'd.
kid's a homophobic huh? guess theres no touchin me ima breeze pass
your RB's slave, but i'll cut a rug with u... just to see a square dance
^pretty cool.but RB's slave???<--not need'd.
ur Shakespeare/Schwarzenegger in text, main reason why ur rate's ill
but back then, queer played all roles... s'y there arnold Straight Skillz (are no)
^to forced.. but still I got it..
i could diss every drop u've made, wouldn't benefit me much nor you
but i recommend a restroom in England... 'cos your shits PePe la pew
^nah.too corny.
@ your lyrics i laugh so hard i might die, tryin hard to be a pretender
i'd end ya, but ur whole life's genius... hangin from those suspenders
^Good closer,bout ur best line in the whole drop...

Overall/-wording hurt ur whole drop.. the way u executed ur punches were Meh... just keep wording ur shitz to be more direct an harder hitting.. u did so so here.. my honest opinion is.. be happy wyte didnt show.he has a better grasp on wording than you do at this moment..now ur closer had anice variety of wordplay,structure...an concept...but executed sorta bland

[SmokaJoka]

Closed...Nesse holds the title