Week 8 - Brasilz Finezt (2 - 2) Vs TayTay (1 - 2)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Min. 5 Voting links are required.

New Missing/No voting links
If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

Offender(s) will be placed in the Penalty Box, with what penalties they've incurred, next to their name.

Gestures Rule
If in your battle you are not up by more then 2 votes when the battle is closed, the Deduction of votes for posting less then the min 5 links, will come into effect. Meaning if the votes deducted results in a lost for you, it will be Permanently Recorded.

Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

New No Editing of your verse.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

Good Luck to you both

[Brasilz Finezt]

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[Donald Trump]

just go 10

[Brasilz Finezt]

*OMG i'm sure u see my edited post above u, i get at least a few of my links in before i post...dont think i wont no-show*
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anyway....

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
damn this is dead, what happened did u not think 2 come post a link?
guess he isn't big on battling me................and literally chose 2 shrink
why go to 10 when i can just end it at line 1, u won't pick up from there
sean john will only come with cheap material - and his shit will just tear
ya alias doesn't sound like a threat either, and ya rhymes proves the limit
now he's hiding on the dark side..................even his mentality is tinted
time's up - ur just an amateur good at losing, this is by far the worse
silver coulda left this thread closed......blah blah u just showed no verse
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[Donald Trump]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=2&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...8&page=2&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&page=2&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327308
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post5537655
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post5538099
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&page=2&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...06#post5538106
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post5538120

there 9 make me 2-1 next week and i'll vote on another 10 battles cool?

[Donald Trump]

Blind Mist: whose Brasilz Finezt
Hektik05: I think its ~One~

this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
my mentallity is brilliant, while yours is wack for realz dude
cuz id rather be with novice, than amateur person like you
im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
no need to try your a rookie i play ball yeah fo`show
so i`ll toss this dude so easily people think its a freethrow
can you manage?
heres another advantage


Amateur

[JDoe]

*OMG i'm sure u see my edited post above u, i get at least a few of my links in before i post...dont think i wont no-show*
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.
anyway....

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
ok.
damn this is dead, what happened did u not think 2 come post a link?
guess he isn't big on battling me................and literally chose 2 shrink
nah.
why go to 10 when i can just end it at line 1, u won't pick up from there
sean john will only come with cheap material - and his shit will just tear
ok.
ya alias doesn't sound like a threat either, and ya rhymes proves the limit
now he's hiding on the dark side..................even his mentality is tinted
ok...
time's up - ur just an amateur good at losing, this is by far the worse
silver coulda left this thread closed......blah blah u just showed no verse
meh concept...ok punch.

vs.

Originally Posted by ME and some dude on aim
Blind Mist: whose Brasilz Finezt
Hektik05: I think its ~One~




this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
ok.
my mentallity is brilliant, while yours is wack for realz dude
cuz id rather be with novice, than amateur person like you
meh hitting.
im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
lol.
no need to try your a rookie i play ball yeah fo`show
so i`ll toss this dude so easily people think its a freethrow
ok.
can you manage?
heres another advantage
k but wack...

* A Pretty Even Match...as far as the bars go and the emcee talent goes, this was very Tay, is forreal way better than this and Brasil came weak as well but lookin at first quality...imma have to say...

V/Tay...because he had one truly weak verse to Brasil's two...No Hate.

[Donald Trump]

3-1 Brasilz

[Viktor Fallon]

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
^^^decent opener
damn this is dead, what happened did u not think 2 come post a link?
guess he isn't big on battling me................and literally chose 2 shrink
^^^no
why go to 10 when i can just end it at line 1, u won't pick up from there
sean john will only come with cheap material - and his shit will just tear
^^^okay nameplay
ya alias doesn't sound like a threat either, and ya rhymes proves the limit
now he's hiding on the dark side..................even his mentality is tinted
^^^nope
time's up - ur just an amateur good at losing, this is by far the worse
silver coulda left this thread closed......blah blah u just showed no verse
^^^No at this closer


vs



this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
^^^okay opener
my mentallity is brilliant, while yours is wack for realz dude
cuz id rather be with novice, than amateur person like you
^^^good
im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
^^^lol okay
no need to try your a rookie i play ball yeah fo`show
so i`ll toss this dude so easily people think its a freethrow
^^^nah
can you manage?
heres another advantage
^^^weak closer


V/tay....tay takes it with those 2 lines that i felt were the best in the battle...brasil
you had a played verse alot of weak an predictable lines work on fresh concepts but decent battle to both

[Taz™]

Brasil Finezt

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
^ coo concept

u had 2 thread/sean john/ clothing related line

VS

Tay


this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
^ok

im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
^nice

well, its not that hard to see, that
VOTE: Tay came harder w/ his verse

[The Vortex]

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
decentish

damn this is dead, what happened did u not think 2 come post a link?
guess he isn't big on battling me................and literally chose 2 shrink
okish

why go to 10 when i can just end it at line 1, u won't pick up from there
sean john will only come with cheap material - and his shit will just tear
a bit mehish

ya alias doesn't sound like a threat either, and ya rhymes proves the limit
now he's hiding on the dark side..................even his mentality is tinted
pretty decent

time's up - ur just an amateur good at losing, this is by far the worse
silver coulda left this thread closed......blah blah u just showed no verse
wasnt feelin this

all in all was some good rhyme and flow skills. but needed some more hard hitting or more funny lines



this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
okish

my mentallity is brilliant, while yours is wack for realz dude
cuz id rather be with novice, than amateur person like you
cool. but seemed like it coulld of been worded better

im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
cool......lo

no need to try your a rookie i play ball yeah fo`show
so i`ll toss this dude so easily people think its a freethrow
okish

can you manage?
heres another advantage
a bit wackish
Amateur


vote-tay
was pretty close but tay had more solid humour in his verse and hit out a bit harder with the punches.

[B.Nesse]

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
ok
damn this is dead, what happened did u not think 2 come post a link?
guess he isn't big on battling me................and literally chose 2 shrink
nah
why go to 10 when i can just end it at line 1, u won't pick up from there
sean john will only come with cheap material - and his shit will just tear
bad wording ok concept
ya alias doesn't sound like a threat either, and ya rhymes proves the limit
now he's hiding on the dark side..................even his mentality is tinted
ok
time's up - ur just an amateur good at losing, this is by far the worse
silver coulda left this thread closed......blah blah u just showed no verse
nah, wack closer

vs

this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
nah
my mentallity is brilliant, while yours is wack for realz dude
cuz id rather be with novice, than amateur person like you
kinda wack
im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
k
no need to try your a rookie i play ball yeah fo`show
so i`ll toss this dude so easily people think its a freethrow
nah, some ppl find freethrow's difficult
can you manage?
heres another advantage
bullshit

v/Brazil

[~MVL~]

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
mehh
damn this is dead, what happened did u not think 2 come post a link?
guess he isn't big on battling me................and literally chose 2 shrink
nah
why go to 10 when i can just end it at line 1, u won't pick up from there
sean john will only come with cheap material - and his shit will just tear
Work on diff. concepts for nameplays
ya alias doesn't sound like a threat either, and ya rhymes proves the limit
now he's hiding on the dark side..................even his mentality is tinted
eh
time's up - ur just an amateur good at losing, this is by far the worse
silver coulda left this thread closed......blah blah u just showed no verse
no


vs



this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
decent
my mentallity is brilliant, while yours is wack for realz dude
cuz id rather be with novice, than amateur person like you
Self glory
im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
weak
no need to try your a rookie i play ball yeah fo`show
so i`ll toss this dude so easily people think its a freethrow
?? lol
can you manage?
heres another advantage
wtf


This was a bad battle here, you guys need to come up with some fresher concepts and work on wording alot, i would have to give it to Brazils for actually having a closer and not just typing out some words. think of nameplays that would be original as well dont just look for the obvious, and try not to repeat a concept which brazil it seemed like you were close to doing that, keep working at it , try harder next week.
pz

[darealMaRV]

waitin 4 this guy 2 make a move - damn was hoping to rip him to shreds
then sean john won't exist...............and thatz after he's missin threads
^^^meh could of made this betta
damn this is dead, what happened did u not think 2 come post a link?
guess he isn't big on battling me................and literally chose 2 shrink
^^^meh
why go to 10 when i can just end it at line 1, u won't pick up from there
sean john will only come with cheap material - and his shit will just tear
^^^no
ya alias doesn't sound like a threat either, and ya rhymes proves the limit
now he's hiding on the dark side..................even his mentality is tinted
^^nah
time's up - ur just an amateur good at losing, this is by far the worse
silver coulda left this thread closed......blah blah u just showed no verse
^^^nope


this dude is wack ass fuck, and his punches are never felt
youd think this was my first win, how i got ~one~ under my belt
^^NOPE..DA AIM CONVO SAID HE "THINKS"
my mentallity is brilliant, while yours is wack for realz dude
cuz id rather be with novice, than amateur person like you
^^^LOL NO
im not even trying but still your getting shook and rattled
since your verse lacks more votes, than all your open battle
^^^MEH
no need to try your a rookie i play ball yeah fo`show
so i`ll toss this dude so easily people think its a freethrow
^^^NO
can you manage?
heres another advantage
^^^........GET OUT OF HERE

V/BRAZIL

[Donald Trump]

6-4 Brasil