Week 7 -Alphabetized (4 - 1) Vs one way (0 - 1)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

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Good Luck to you both

[one way]

yep

[Alphabetized]

10.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...72#post5511972

[one way]

10's cool with me

[one way]

Ima smack this hoar…punches are so off target you’d miss a dinosaur
Rip your spinal cord….couldn’t be ill around mics, if you pitched in 94
how you expect to fool me, ‘No Doubt’ you’re the worst so ‘don’t speak’
Takes you seven days to write your trash, because your shit is so ‘week’
you’re a geek, Rodney King didn’t take a beating like the one in this brawl
Cause you couldn’t move me if you tagged your verse on the side of a uhaul
I’m in the zone, I aint feeling a thing of your shit, I’m jacked on morphine
Trust me…..you couldn’t touch me if you were R-Kelly and I was fourteen
I'll sever this geek.........Im redicuously high like mount everests peak
We would all agree that Alpha is first with the verse, but face it we're not greek
I’m deadly with vocab, don’t be surprised I cut the limbs off your family tree
The skies the limit, but the closest he'll come to ‘reaching the stars’
……….is swinging at me

[Alphabetized]

Alphabetized (4 - 1) Vs one way (0 - 1).......I know what you kids like now, I promise it will be dope......hahaha

Kid's big talk, the shit talk, but we know you'll be quick to choke
On your own words, because even you realize that your a joke
But predictions don't mean shit, so I just rely on the people to vote
Just know i won't let u down.. when I got a grip this good on ya throat
Alpha's talkin down to you, for a reason.. your just a stupid bitch
cuz if you decide to razor voice.. you'll end up with 1 in your wrist
This is a tutorial, Watch as I snap a limp simply off a whim
One way to drop dope.. is to write completely opposite of him
Ya futures grim, cuz this shit'll happen every week, you elevate slow
Cuz you just keep talking shit... annual keep losing the battles hoe
But yo, your a pure blooded canadian, which is all cool and nice
Cuz now we can see this hockey up a verse...
... and watch me leave him on ice...

12.

[Piff Jones]

Ima smack this hoar…punches are so off target you’d miss a dinosaur
Rip your spinal cord….couldn’t be ill around mics, if you pitched in 94
bleh
how you expect to fool me, ‘No Doubt’ you’re the worst so ‘don’t speak’
Takes you seven days to write your trash, because your shit is so ‘week’
weak/week wordplay is played. and don't use ' '
you’re a geek, Rodney King didn’t take a beating like the one in this brawl
Cause you couldn’t move me if you tagged your verse on the side of a uhaul
ok
I’m in the zone, I aint feeling a thing of your shit, I’m jacked on morphine
Trust me…..you couldn’t touch me if you were R-Kelly and I was fourteen
played..
I'll sever this geek.........Im redicuously high like mount everests peak
We would all agree that Alpha is first with the verse, but face it we're not greek
coulda worded it better. not a bad concept i guess?
I’m deadly with vocab, don’t be surprised I cut the limbs off your family tree
The skies the limit, but the closest he'll come to ‘reaching the stars’
……….is swinging at me
self glory

vs

Kid's big talk, the shit talk, but we know you'll be quick to choke
On your own words, because even you realize that your a joke
no
But predictions don't mean shit, so I just rely on the people to vote
Just know i won't let u down.. when I got a grip this good on ya throat
lol
Alpha's talkin down to you, for a reason.. your just a stupid bitch
cuz if you decide to razor voice.. you'll end up with 1 in your wrist
idk if this wordplay is played, if not then good
This is a tutorial, Watch as I snap a limp simply off a whim
One way to drop dope.. is to write completely opposite of him
no
Ya futures grim, cuz this shit'll happen every week, you elevate slow
Cuz you just keep talking shit... annual keep losing the battles hoe
annual = played
But yo, your a pure blooded canadian, which is all cool and nice
Cuz now we can see this hockey up a verse...
... and watch me leave him on ice...
nah

Alpha you shoulda tried harder cause if he dropped maybe one good bar he could of beat you. One you had some meh stuff but the rest was played or trash. Alph you had some really basic stuff that didn't land but the razor and grip your throat line won it.

V/ Alphabetized.

[one way]

haha, laughs at the lines you liked, you have a grip on my throat.......dam huge punch!(wtf), and if I raise my vioce he'll stick a razor in my wrist, honestly look at the intelect of those.............thats such a dickriding hate vote right there!

[D.Silver]

Stop swaying.

1st Warning.

[one way]

I will never get a fair vote because all these kids are all to insecure and get effected over a little bit of shit talk and the way I tell it to them.....................fuck it keep them coming!


1-0

more votes

[Tebo]

Ima smack this hoar…punches are so off target you’d miss a dinosaur
Rip your spinal cord….couldn’t be ill around mics, if you pitched in 94
ok
how you expect to fool me, ‘No Doubt’ you’re the worst so ‘don’t speak’
Takes you seven days to write your trash, because your shit is so ‘week’
nice
you’re a geek, Rodney King didn’t take a beating like the one in this brawl
Cause you couldn’t move me if you tagged your verse on the side of a uhaul
lol
I’m in the zone, I aint feeling a thing of your shit, I’m jacked on morphine
Trust me…..you couldn’t touch me if you were R-Kelly and I was fourteen
lol
I'll sever this geek.........Im redicuously high like mount everests peak
We would all agree that Alpha is first with the verse, but face it we're not greek
lol
I’m deadly with vocab, don’t be surprised I cut the limbs off your family tree
The skies the limit, but the closest he'll come to ‘reaching the stars’
……….is swinging at me
good finisher

Vssssssssss

Kid's big talk, the shit talk, but we know you'll be quick to choke
On your own words, because even you realize that your a joke
kinda overplayed
But predictions don't mean shit, so I just rely on the people to vote
Just know i won't let u down.. when I got a grip this good on ya throat
ok
Alpha's talkin down to you, for a reason.. your just a stupid bitch
cuz if you decide to razor voice.. you'll end up with 1 in your wrist
nice
This is a tutorial, Watch as I snap a limp simply off a whim
One way to drop dope.. is to write completely opposite of him
nah....
Ya futures grim, cuz this shit'll happen every week, you elevate slow
Cuz you just keep talking shit... annual keep losing the battles hoe
nice wordplay
But yo, your a pure blooded canadian, which is all cool and nice
Cuz now we can see this hockey up a verse...
... and watch me leave him on ice...
meh...

One Way I liked how none of your lines seemed stressed... you had some origional twists to your verse. Better punches IMO.

Alpha your verse against Philly was dope as fuck, this didn't flow or hit One Way as hard as he did to you IMO. Nice verse though but One Way came stronger..

V// One Way

[one way]

peace

1-1

[Alphabetized]

Lol at everyone missing my closer wp.

1-1.

[Nashvillain]

Ima smack this hoar…punches are so off target you’d miss a dinosaur
Rip your spinal cord….couldn’t be ill around mics, if you pitched in 94
^meh
how you expect to fool me, ‘No Doubt’ you’re the worst so ‘don’t speak’
Takes you seven days to write your trash, because your shit is so ‘week’
^decent
you’re a geek, Rodney King didn’t take a beating like the one in this brawl
Cause you couldn’t move me if you tagged your verse on the side of a uhaul
^ok,nice
I’m in the zone, I aint feeling a thing of your shit, I’m jacked on morphine
Trust me…..you couldn’t touch me if you were R-Kelly and I was fourteen
^weak
I'll sever this geek.........Im redicuously high like mount everests peak
We would all agree that Alpha is first with the verse, but face it we're not greek
^nah
I’m deadly with vocab, don’t be surprised I cut the limbs off your family tree
The skies the limit, but the closest he'll come to ‘reaching the stars’
^coo

***VS***


Kid's big talk, the shit talk, but we know you'll be quick to choke
On your own words, because even you realize that your a joke
^weak
But predictions don't mean shit, so I just rely on the people to vote
Just know i won't let u down.. when I got a grip this good on ya throat
^ok
Alpha's talkin down to you, for a reason.. your just a stupid bitch
cuz if you decide to razor voice.. you'll end up with 1 in your wrist
^coo
This is a tutorial, Watch as I snap a limp simply off a whim
One way to drop dope.. is to write completely opposite of him
^na
Ya futures grim, cuz this shit'll happen every week, you elevate slow
Cuz you just keep talking shit... annual keep losing the battles hoe
^didnt hit
But yo, your a pure blooded canadian, which is all cool and nice
Cuz now we can see this hockey up a verse...
... and watch me leave him on ice...
^ok closer

this was close,both came decent,but i felt alphas punches hit harder

V//alpha

[one way]

your last line

I feel ya, that was dope..............wack voters