take.O.ver vs. Dangermanship

[take.O.ver]

alright..

10 lines
due in 30.
house rules.

[Warming]

check

[take.O.ver]

check.

[take.O.ver]

Danger's in over his head, so imagine how mad'll get...
.. when i sink his lines quicker then a game of battleship
peep'd ya OM, and it's clear to tell you spend a lot of time alone
dude has yet to figure out that all his 'lines' end in a Danger Zone.
said he ain't got the tools to be great, so he went and got a wrench
ya need to realize you have no game,that's why you never get off the bench!
dude received a cell phone for Christmas, now he's finally got a sidekick
and ya lines contain more stretch marks then a fatass whose gone on a diet
Danger you're wack kid, haven't you heard practice makes perfect?
you're only able to reach average, so honestly, i don't think you're worth it!

[Warming]

heh

Give it up son, you took enough newbs for granted
And I took half an hour… just to stomach the semantics
The typing is frantic but there’s no live execution
And if he tried taking over a mic it’d electrocute him
You’re a freaking slob, even more than I reckoned
I’ll watch your friends desert you as you keep heading for seconds
I’ll take mad thrills abusing your sad skills
Leave you hurt so bad you O.D. on advil
Needs a fucking life… him and his online capers
And I’ll finish it now to see no obit in the paper

[take.O.ver]

edit .. my fault..


Danger's in over his head, so imagine how mad'll get...
.. when i sink his lines quicker then a game of battleship
peep'd ya OM, and it's clear to tell you spend a lot of time alone
dude has yet to figure out that all his 'lines' end in a Danger Zone.
said he ain't got the tools to be great, so he went and got a wrench
ya need to realize you have no game,that's why you never get off the bench!
dude received a cell phone for Christmas, now he's finally got a sidekick
and ya lines contain more stretch marks then a fatass whose gone on a diet
Danger you're wack kid, haven't you heard practice makes perfect?
you're only able to reach average, so honestly, i don't think it's worth it!

[J. Butler]

Danger's in over his head, so imagine how mad'll get...
.. when i sink his lines quicker then a game of battleship
Played
peep'd ya OM, and it's clear to tell you spend a lot of time alone
dude has yet to figure out that all his 'lines' end in a Danger Zone.
[b]Heh
said he ain't got the tools to be great, so he went and got a wrench
ya need to realize you have no game,that's why you never get off the bench!
Ouch
dude received a cell phone for Christmas, now he's finally got a sidekick
and ya lines contain more stretch marks then a fatass whose gone on a diet
Decent
Danger you're wack kid, haven't you heard practice makes perfect?
you're only able to reach average, so honestly, i don't think you're worth it!
No


Vs.


Give it up son, you took enough newbs for granted
And I took half an hour… just to stomach the semantics
[b]No
The typing is frantic but there’s no live execution
And if he tried taking over a mic it’d electrocute him
What? Damn that sucked
You’re a freaking slob, even more than I reckoned
I’ll watch your friends desert you as you keep heading for seconds
Barely made sense, why did you stretch for a crappy line?
I’ll take mad thrills abusing your sad skills
Leave you hurt so bad you O.D. on advil
Favorite line, Decent
Needs a fucking life… him and his online capers
And I’ll finish it now to see no obit in the paper
Horrible

Overall you could both use some improvement, this was a crappy ass battle, but in any case T.akeover won it.

V/Takeover

[Warming]

there's a reason i didnt leave you this link after voting on your battle j... uppin for some seasoned voters

[Bone$]

good battle, both went at each otha wit full force but i think take ova got dis one. i feel his flow was jus a lil betta. structure and everything else was on point.
v/take ova

Vote DQed...wack..

-Smoka

[Spul Ka Trinde]

v/ takeover

takeover had way better punches personals .

everything else was pretty even

danger ya gota nice vocab usage but ya lackin ya battlin skills , maybe try poetry battle or topicals man freal

v/take
better punches n personals

Vote DQed...wack

-Smoka

[Delah Cahjay™]

lolz obviousley take one this better structure punches...etc.

V.T

Vote DQed...wack

-Smoka

[Warming]

all (good) feed will be returned

intelligent breakdowns please

and if the explanations are insufficient this thread will continue to see dqs

[RaidersArk]

id say take over because he hit with better punchs.....that alll...

Vote DQed...wack

-Smoka

[take.O.ver]

god damn.. can we get some explained votes and shit.. since everyone that isn't is going to end up DQ'd.

uppin.

[Synonym]

said he ain't got the tools to be great, so he went and got a wrench
ya need to realize you have no game,that's why you never get off the bench!
dude received a cell phone for Christmas, now he's finally got a sidekick
and ya lines contain more stretch marks then a fatass whose gone on a diet
I felt those were the best bars you had in you whole verse...you coulda done better ive seen you drop harder than this but...i still felt you were decent not a bad drop


Vs

I’ll take mad thrills abusing your sad skills
Leave you hurt so bad you O.D. on advil
Only decent line from your verse...all your lines were to short and not witty enough just work on more creativity and more wittyness and also make your lines bigger



Vote-Take