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HOW YOU GONNA LET A GURL BEAT YOU?
check I am going 16....match me ok...you go 16 too
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GayBear
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ight then blind spit...this is my check............................................. .................................................. .....................
HOW YOU GONNA LET A GURL BEAT YOU?
A white gay man, in this lyrical world,
Is about to learn a lesson, wit a close encounter of a girl.
Vanilla ice wannabe, but he ain't got no props,
I split this dudes words, like some toes in some flip flops.
He's tryna be hard, but he's soft like some cream,
If this dude wasn't thinkin about men, I'd say "betta luck winnin in your dream."
But this dude's on the wrong team, So I'ma feed off this fact,
He's illiterate, prolly pronounce the greatest legend of rap as "2 pack"
Shitty dick bitch, wit a one time trick,
I can't bear to see, check it out, you be clay aiken's numba one pick.
Just like clay, you stay in the closet,
Like a vending machine you get stuck, be like a "1 dolla deposit"
But yo I could go on, for years to come,
For a moment, I'ma pretend like I'm a man and say, "COME GET SOME"
Snatch the mic, and I'ma give it rite back,
But you a flamin ass mutha fucka, can you handle this attack?
Too bad I'm a female, otherwise you be like "can I get some of that?"
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HOW YOU GONNA LET A GURL BEAT YOU?
I don't give a fuck about you, girl I have one thing to say, and
That is that for once Brokeback won't symbolize the gay man
Honestly, the damage is ruthless, but you ain't livin with hope
I fell and...ate shit < now wonder I was spitting your quotes
You're jail bate at this point, but I'm gay, so no sweet tale
Fuck that sex on the beach, you look like a beached whale
Omg, girl get over it, you've been Number 2...forever doll
You must be Center court cuz coach knows you got balls
But you got some friends, you grew up and now you're older
They invite you to chill, when they want the party...OVER
This was done 8 lines ago, but don't count cause you're slow
Comin with reason?...bitch you've never been fucked before
But sorry to be rude, but you're not even average at best
I just never understood you....it's just your Dwarfism had set
I would allow her to start fighting wit words and all that shit
But she won't get to me...besides ^ she doesn't even have it
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GayBear
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uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .............................................
HOW YOU GONNA LET A GURL BEAT YOU?
you won
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GayBear
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yo weak battle from both sides, but micsnatcher came with the better punches and harsher concepts even though her structure sucked she still took this easily..gay bear your verse sucked and sum of ur punches were directed at yourself??!! lmao wtf up with that..but for having the better overall verse
v/micsnatcher
yo hit this.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322898
Hey Thanks For The Feed And Vote.............................................. .................................................. ...........................
HOW YOU GONNA LET A GURL BEAT YOU?
omg....^ I bet you didn't vote for her because she can RTF right? your vote is dq'd more tha nlikely...LOL @ mine not being good
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GayBear
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Gay
I don't give a fuck about you, girl I have one thing to say, and
That is that for once Brokeback won't symbolize the gay man
~played
Honestly, the damage is ruthless, but you ain't livin with hope
I fell and...ate shit < now wonder I was spitting your quotes
~nope
You're jail bate at this point, but I'm gay, so no sweet tale
Fuck that sex on the beach, you look like a beached whale
~ok, set-ups shocking, but Im homophobic
Omg, girl get over it, you've been Number 2...forever doll
You must be Center court cuz coach knows you got balls
~ehh
But you got some friends, you grew up and now you're older
They invite you to chill, when they want the party...OVER
~ok
This was done 8 lines ago, but don't count cause you're slow
Comin with reason?...bitch you've never been fucked before
~come line? Go away
But sorry to be rude, but you're not even average at best
I just never understood you....it's just your Dwarfism had set
~wordings off, under-stoods played.
I would allow her to start fighting wit words and all that shit
But she won't get to me...besides ^ she doesn't even have it
~nah
Snatch
A white gay man, in this lyrical world,
Is about to learn a lesson, wit a close encounter of a girl.
~ehh
Vanilla ice wannabe, but he ain't got no props,
I split this dudes words, like some toes in some flip flops.
~ehh
He's tryna be hard, but he's soft like some cream,
If this dude wasn't thinkin about men, I'd say "betta luck winnin in your dream."
~ok, kinda
But this dude's on the wrong team, So I'ma feed off this fact,
He's illiterate, prolly pronounce the greatest legend of rap as "2 pack"
~ok
Shitty dick bitch, wit a one time trick,
I can't bear to see, check it out, you be clay aiken's numba one pick.
~ehh
Just like clay, you stay in the closet,
Like a vending machine you get stuck, be like a "1 dolla deposit"
~ok
But yo I could go on, for years to come,
For a moment, I'ma pretend like I'm a man and say, "COME GET SOME"
~no
Snatch the mic, and I'ma give it rite back,
But you a flamin ass mutha fucka, can you handle this attack?
Too bad I'm a female, otherwise you be like "can I get some of that?"
~nope.
Plottin your demise.
Gay
I don't give a fuck about you, girl I have one thing to say, and
That is that for once Brokeback won't symbolize the gay man
~played
Honestly, the damage is ruthless, but you ain't livin with hope
I fell and...ate shit < now wonder I was spitting your quotes
~nope
You're jail bate at this point, but I'm gay, so no sweet tale
Fuck that sex on the beach, you look like a beached whale
~ok, set-ups shocking, but Im homophobic
Omg, girl get over it, you've been Number 2...forever doll
You must be Center court cuz coach knows you got balls
~ehh
But you got some friends, you grew up and now you're older
They invite you to chill, when they want the party...OVER
~ok
This was done 8 lines ago, but don't count cause you're slow
Comin with reason?...bitch you've never been fucked before
~come line? Go away
But sorry to be rude, but you're not even average at best
I just never understood you....it's just your Dwarfism had set
~wordings off, under-stoods played.
I would allow her to start fighting wit words and all that shit
But she won't get to me...besides ^ she doesn't even have it
~nah
Snatch
A white gay man, in this lyrical world,
Is about to learn a lesson, wit a close encounter of a girl.
~ehh
Vanilla ice wannabe, but he ain't got no props,
I split this dudes words, like some toes in some flip flops.
~ehh
He's tryna be hard, but he's soft like some cream,
If this dude wasn't thinkin about men, I'd say "betta luck winnin in your dream."
~ok, kinda
But this dude's on the wrong team, So I'ma feed off this fact,
He's illiterate, prolly pronounce the greatest legend of rap as "2 pack"
~ok
Shitty dick bitch, wit a one time trick,
I can't bear to see, check it out, you be clay aiken's numba one pick.
~ehh
Just like clay, you stay in the closet,
Like a vending machine you get stuck, be like a "1 dolla deposit"
~ok
But yo I could go on, for years to come,
For a moment, I'ma pretend like I'm a man and say, "COME GET SOME"
~no
Snatch the mic, and I'ma give it rite back,
But you a flamin ass mutha fucka, can you handle this attack?
Too bad I'm a female, otherwise you be like "can I get some of that?"
~nope.
Wack battle, Gay had a couple of ok bars
Plottin your demise.
I haven't battled for a long ass time so my lines may be a bit rusty...never-the-less votes and feed are appreciated...................................
HOW YOU GONNA LET A GURL BEAT YOU?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322764
^^^ Good battle, at least leave feedback even if you can't vote.
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DaMicSnatcher
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A white gay man, in this lyrical world,
Is about to learn a lesson, wit a close encounter of a girl.
This was like a set-up line by itself, not a punch at all
Vanilla ice wannabe, but he ain't got no props,
I split this dudes words, like some toes in some flip flops.
Once again, this wasn't a punch! You are talkin about what you would do, not attackin him
He's tryna be hard, but he's soft like some cream,
If this dude wasn't thinkin about men, I'd say "betta luck winnin in your dream."
So-so, but since he's gay, this doesn't hurt him...
But this dude's on the wrong team, So I'ma feed off this fact,
He's illiterate, prolly pronounce the greatest legend of rap as "2 pack"
Man, this is just... nah...
Shitty dick bitch, wit a one time trick,
I can't bear to see, check it out, you be clay aiken's numba one pick.
Set-up line was real short, plus... this wasnt a punch *sigh*
Just like clay, you stay in the closet,
Like a vending machine you get stuck, be like a "1 dolla deposit"
" ^^^ "
But yo I could go on, for years to come,
For a moment, I'ma pretend like I'm a man and say, "COME GET SOME"
Why use gay punches on a gay dude?
Snatch the mic, and I'ma give it rite back,
But you a flamin ass mutha fucka, can you handle this attack?
Too bad I'm a female, otherwise you be like "can I get some of that?"
Like the 3rd or 4th gay punch. Plus, if this is one bar, it is way too long...
Overall, this was a weak verse. 1) Don't use gay punches on a homosexual, because then the whole punch becomes null and void. Even if he wasn't gay, the concept was overused a whole lot. Your set-up lines need more thought, as well as the delivery of your punches. And please, attack your opponent. Diss him (or her) in every bar! 2/10
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Gay Bear
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I don't give a fuck about you, girl I have one thing to say, and
That is that for once Brokeback won't symbolize the gay man
Nice wordplay, i liked this
Honestly, the damage is ruthless, but you ain't livin with hope
I fell and...ate shit < now wonder I was spitting your quotes
Uhh... so-so
You're jail bate at this point, but I'm gay, so no sweet tale
Fuck that sex on the beach, you look like a beached whale
So-so, again.
Omg, girl get over it, you've been Number 2...forever doll
You must be Center court cuz coach knows you got balls
This was decent
But you got some friends, you grew up and now you're older
They invite you to chill, when they want the party...OVER
This was pretty good, the set-up line was relevant.
This was done 8 lines ago, but don't count cause you're slow
Comin with reason?...bitch you've never been fucked before
Didn't rhyme, could've been another decent bar tho
But sorry to be rude, but you're not even average at best
I just never understood you....it's just your Dwarfism had set
Um.. not really feelin this
I would allow her to start fighting wit words and all that shit
But she won't get to me...besides ^ she doesn't even have it
The whole concept should've been implemented better
Overall, this was a decent/good verse. You had a lil bit of wordplay here and there. And most of your bars were punches, but I can't say the same for your opponent. A couple of these lines seemed rushed, or not well thought out. Maybe you half-assesd because you saw how she dropped. Maybe not. It doesn't really matter, because in my eyes, this was a clear-cut decision. 5.5/10
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VOTE: Gay Bear
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