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  1. #1
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    Unstoppable

    gettin drunk, throwin punches, cuz I'm punch drunk, (1)
    tie you up, put a gag in your mouth, throw ya body in my trunk,

    get out the car, put a brick on the gas pedal, ghostride it into a lake,
    runnin over weak emcees, cuz my rhymes are unstoppable like a tank,

    takin my time, like I stole sand from an hour -glass, ) (2)
    shittin on wack emcees, like pigeons under a freeway over- pass,

    blowin smoke clouds, makin a clear sky become overcast, (3)
    keep goin like the Engergizer bunny, break all your bones, put you in a body cast,

    I'll kill you like exhorcist, crucify your raps, like Jesus on the cross,
    Never losin a battle, cuz I'm usin a double sided quarter in a coin toss, (4)



    1. I'm throwin punches, and I'm gettin drunk= PUnchdrunk
    2. sand in an hour glass represents time, so if I steal sand from an hour glass I'm taking time.
    3. overcast is a cloudy day.
    4. you can't lose a coin toss if you got a double sided coin.

    Save the battle verses for the front lines.

    - Atty
    Last edited by Atti; December 25th, 2006 at 10:15 AM

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    Re: Unstoppable

    this reminds me of the pieces we use to write back in those middle school days
    back when quarters cost 25 and you could get blunts down at the chevy

    it was kinda dope with the hour glass imagry
    the flow was straight but this was basic and hella played
    the quarter toss too was creative
    but the punchdrunk line was weak
    stay up
    Open Mic



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