..Quick Upbringing..ft. TRYUMPH

[Relli_Mak]

Relli
Who's Relli Mak, that's wut the public keep askin?
They failing to see, it's da Vets that I'm surpassing
Let me take ya'll back to when it all began happening
To back on da block doing work, not just this rapping
Posted on the corner, the work n between my threads
Pistol loaded with lead, left pocket full with bread
That was the life to me then, loved the adrenaline...
..The attention I got from the bitches hella feminine
Fuck the drama, I had .45 ways I knew to fix things
Surprisingly, got the wake up call of my life at 16
3 niggas approached da spot, asking where I was
Pissed off..earlier that day, 1 of'em got hit by my cuz
I came out of the spot, to see what was the demo
My oldest cuz stepped up...they cracked my kinfolk
3 on 3...fist swingin, blood streaming..a bad scene
Went 2 school w/ 1 of'em..da other 2 never had seen
My otha cuz ran in the spot..came out w/ da pistol
My oldest snatched it...damn, here cums an issue
These niggas had heart, that's something I admit
They didn't run at 1st, so my cuzn bust off 3 quick
The 2 unknowns got hit, my classmate got away
Jail time..life over..I'm thinking......nah not today
Get it 2getha..hop in da Malibu..damn we sinners
Damn, car 2 noticeable..because it's sitn on spinners
Bail out west of the Chi...had to patch up da wounds
Dropped them off and went home..thinking in my room
"I can't sit around 2 wait til 1 of these nigs harm me"
Kept low, graduated a year lata..went 2 da Army
Successful 4 years, back at home now in school
Takin ya'll back, 2 when I was jus a street fool
No charges, got away...n still see them niggas 2day
Bad blood put behind us..learned 2 wash it away
Back then..there were many things I didn't understand
Who is Relli Mak...yeah, he's now a grown ass man

TRYUMPH
bRumm Brumm... the drum beats in the streets
Lifes percussions that to a society seems bleak
Lives obscelete, cowards could feel the nameless
Yet i walk to the beat, Which makes me street famous
ingrained with, the heart of a champ and Wisdom of Socretes
Thats gotten' me, to the point these streets are monopolied
And i believe, the truth in my voice shines through to the def
Gives the vision to the blind and the lonely feel caressed
So i scream FREEDOM for our warfared welfared victims
That get kicked out of the hospital, even when they got all symptoms
My words Brisk like Liptons, So i preach PRIDE loud for hours
Fight the Government thatll breach Privacy for POWER
This could be my Final hour, So i set up a next mission
IVe TRYUMPHed over others so now i challenge Hexxed visions

[Relli_Mak]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/newr...eply&p=5380981

[Relli_Mak]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/newr...eply&p=5356435

[Relli_Mak]

Uppin for feed..

[Relli_Mak]

Damn, uppin again..

[Try U MPH]

Uppin, motherfuckers, Stop sleepin... this is why rb is shit

[Soule]

Trumph clean youre pm box fool.

Nice peice guys, the font was gay and so were the colors but,
The Wordplay was nice andmature. Flow was very smooth. I liked the emotion that you brought on this guys, did well. The creativty was nice. Overall great peice, keep it up gentlemen and Tryumph clean that PM box out .

~Belli.

[Try U MPH]

Emptied, my bad... thanks for the input... Holla at me

[Nguyen]

are you triumph from LG?

Anyhoo yall need multis to make it ill. content was good but needs imagry

[Lyrical_Maniac]

This was a nice piece..nice collaboration..it had good words in it, and I seen the imagery..mainly from Relli's piece..Try, u came decent but needed more to complete it..nice drop..

[Relli_Mak]

Uppin....

[Ise Kreem]

Eh. This piece seemed extremely mainstream. Or like shitty underground. Basically sounded like 50 cent on the first verse. Second verse was definetly better... I dunno i just wasnt feelin this piece too much. It didnt flow at all or anything like that.

[Da Patriot]

like da way u phrased dem pointz

[Relli_Mak]

Thanks, uppin

[Jay of AKO]

nice piece .. vocab and wordplay was on, and structure was nice.. 8.5/10