Winter Is Just

[-Wireless-]

Bleeding,
It's gone,
nothing short of grace,
not far from normal,
ahh..it's gone.

I'm

I like to keep
my sense of
security next
me. It comforts
me...but only
if I allow it to.

not

I fly with opiate
emotions along
chalkboard
clouds...but
sometimes
He erases
them.

myself,

Sometimes my
security gets
lost...and
sometimes I ditch
it.

and

My pride is too
swollen to
contain...but I
somehow manage
to keep it.

neither

I just walk into
the rain to let
God know I'm
there...he knows,
but sometimes...
I don't.

are

I talk to the moon
in the middle of
the day because
I personally just
don't care too
much for its
sidekick.

you.

The winter just
doesn't treat
me too kindly,
but thats OK...
I don't treat it
too kindly
either.

Sincerely,
My soul.

[-Wireless-]

yeah, i'll return the favor if it's good feed.
please believe.

[Key.]

The perception I got from you totally dazed my first image, of when I saw your name. I could've just passed you off as another lame, and half witted poet trying to make a name for himself, and I could've thought you were ignorant judging from your numerous comments around the site. This was a pretty well written piece. I have to say, I'm impressed thoroughly. I'm mentally full, and fed. This was a good piece for the mind, and it was easy on my eyes. Your style is semi-abstract, tackling it full on with a different strategy. You don't use complicated vocabulary, except in some circumstances, but it's still not overwhelming. I especially liked the line about the moon's sidekick, a good example of irony when you stare at it in the middle of the day. This was good man, and I hope to see more from you. Don't bother about returning the feed, I have no current pieces. Keep it consistent, dude.

[-Wireless-]

Preciate it man.
you're keyed, right?

[Key.]

No.

[-Wireless-]

up.

[Heychoo.]

uppin
leave feed or i'll make it go down like young joc

[Heychoo.]

up.

[Soule]

Nice job man,

The Wordplay was nice. Structre was ill as fuck dude. The Imagenation was incredibly wild. The Creativty was great as well. The Emotion was perfected dude. Sorry bout the misup earlier. But this peice was great dude. Keep it up man.

~Belli.

[Heychoo.]

preciate it.
up.
leave links.

[Heychoo]

rawr

[Left to Write]

wack

[Heychoo]

fuckk outtta here jonathon.

[Soule]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=320269

^Link^

[Da Patriot]

straight
it waz aight