Dyl Vs Constance(poetry)

[Dyl]

Topics
the city from an roof top
the ballad of an broken angle
last call for sunshine
my opression
A life of lies
The corrupted youth
Summer hills
Winters war

Due
5 days


good luck my friend

[Constance]

check and g/luck to you too.

[Constance]

The City From an Roof Top

The expanse of men’s knowledge
Expels to the North and South
And East and West, on grids
Of lighted concrete into the night.
It is unstirred, humid and forgotten here
In the still of night, on a city
Roof. She is resting in calm,
In steady. The darkened office
Buildings lay pillowed down, protruding
Asleep, still grinding to a stop.
Moths and indistinguishable wings
Flutter around the hum of street
Lights, yellow; tired, mathematical and flickering.

Above, the Southwest clouds are clumped
Here and there, far and up away.
What blocked the sun upon earlier
Hour, now reflects the blood orange
Of a city's lighted sleep. Stooping
Planes blink their warnings, blips
Of announcing matter in the night.
From one hundred feet above, lulling
Onto cooling runways. Traveling ideas
And cargo and business. Roaring engines
Reclaim the moistened silence, and reminisce
On clouds and sky, far and up away.
What might they ask? I wonder.

For all we accomplish
In the plans of the day, we forget
In the heavy dreary of the night.
Greeted in dreams with memories
And inconsistent visions, like old friends
Bearing wines and gifts and handshakes.
We are reminded of hopes and pioneering,
Monsters and dances, rejecting them
With an outstretched hand, while
The other rubs our blurry eye.

Past, dream and wake
One subjective conscious that’s distilled
Mixed and murmured into the rhythm
Of towns and cities. But alone
I may rest the course of this flesh
And vein. Think of rest, then think
Of accomplishment of myself and friends
And country. In the city at night
In still, at sleep in untampered and
Tempered drowse.

[Constance]

don't no-show please kid

[Dyl]

kid?

I have a lot of time on my hands.I'll drop tomorrow.Time is not up yet

[Constance]

don't trip I call everyone kid i was justuppin to remind you aiight

[Constance]

this niggah no-showed pfft...

[Dyl]

Shut the fuck you you little thick.Is 5 days up yet?????No now shut up.I am very busy and I will not now show you prick.

[McLovin]

I forgot, my bad

[Dyl]

Winters War

The squeeling wind wisked visciously through the sky
Gathering power with every pounding gust of wind
The moon lying in the sky as a watchful eye
And the gusts hit the trees,ripping them to their skin
The ocean crashed together like two claping hands
As the waves ran like rushing traffic across the oceans floor

Let the wind wail
And the waves crash
As the salty water sprinkles
Like flying ash
Let the trees crunch
And the leaves rustle
And together they make
A winters bunch

Fishing boats rocked along the uneasy floor
Creating a misty foam that scatted toward the shore
The clouds ran along the sky like dark horses
Running into tomorrow in search for a new battle
Fish lay above the ocean like broken corpses
As the storm broke down and silently dismantled

The battle is over,the storm has settled
Leaving the leaves scattered like broken pettles
But life goes on, for this battle has been won
And all await the heat of that glaring sun

[Dyl]

Had to do it quick.Man you do not know what my life is like.I put down 10 min shit for ya but I really could not write this week

[McLovin]

don't worry and im sorry for being an dick ya know,my gandma died now i only got like 2 other relatives and if i live with my aunt she gone send me to an audi home or some shit so im tring to sort shit out so that doesn't happen basicly alot of shit been going on in my life right now so i kinda been on edge lately especially when it comes to battles and little petty ish lke that,we can have an rematch if you wish?

[Dyl]

Just see how the battle turns out.If you won ya won,I don't have much time these days.

[Messiah.]

Right y'all both in my crew so i feel i should vote...I am fair my friends.

Constance-This was decent piece your emotion was nice in this you could feel it as you go further through the piece, your imagery was nice and it flowed really well i thought...I thought that your best part of the piece was the last verse i dunno i just thought it summed up the piece really well na mean.....Good job.
Dyl-Good to see you back after oyur absence, your piece though it was a quick drop was good, it had pretty much nice everything - emotion, flow, imagery...you rhymed nicely in places and overall its a good piece to comeback with.....Goodjob.

Verdict-Based only on the style and what the piece left in my head after reading them i'm gunna have to give my vote to Dyl....Good battle and well done to both.

[McLovin]

I can agree with that,thanks fams