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Thread: For Tomorrow's Honor

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    For Tomorrow's Honor





    The End

    The cries of dying men turned the rants to sorrows
    Amped to fight before, now they stand with hands to fallen
    Soldiers, men who left their families & plan to return in August
    In a lawless land they fight for America - the land they honor
    Among these is a man named Samuel Brandon Broughton
    Whose clothes are soaked with blood from his friends Stanley's collar
    The frantic calling, for help left him landing - falling
    Promising hope left him shelled - sprawled - on hand & knee crawling
    With thoughts of how this battle began, how Sam's end had all started...

    The Beginning of the End....

    To fill a gaping void since boyhood Samuel joined the Army
    Hardley thought for family 'till he met and married Violet Barkley
    They were soulmates but a war waged as he planted his family seed
    So he fabricated illness and they discharged him, and granted release

    One week later...

    On the news he saw seventeen had been killed in an explosion-'n
    Also found that one was his brother his only remaining kin
    He felt the guilt on his shoulers and started foldin' in
    Seein' his brother Logan go made him decide to enroll again
    A foreign name he jotted down to earn back missin' pride
    "What's the worse that could happen" He was nine hundred sixty sixth in line
    He soon learned he was wrong when they called & asked for Sampson
    Handin' the phone to her husband, Violet was more than apprehensive
    The look on his face ignited her worse fears of grief
    Disbelief darkened her eyes..he'd been ordered overseas..
    His wife's due in June and they wouldn't be back 'till August
    So for two months she'd use up, savings for their twins Tim & Thomas
    The phone dropped and the tone stopped - Reality set
    His throat clogged and breath fogged - His mentality fled
    From the thought of his death and never seein' his kids become men
    Missing their first graduation, birthday and the day they'd be wed
    Thoughts raced through his brain of him missing the life he'd obtained
    To bane enemies from this land would mean in action he'd prolly be slain
    So days passed to his department - on the trolly he boarded
    Courted by other sad faces already marked on the Mourge list
    He started to ignore his, contract and run, but remembered his brother
    So to his compartment he went - Seein' lovers clingin' to lovers
    Held Violet in his last moments...and said "I love you, my babies mother"
    To the floor she wept 'till they came to escort her like some trash
    The wrath of the army'd taken her husband, a victim of the draft

    The End...

    Now he sat under attack claspin' a weapon with he'd made men headless
    He thought before he was crippled,...Now he's completely legless
    Pain had phase'd him once 'till he grew fully oblivious
    When a chain of guns rained & ripped apart his fibula and tibius
    Reminencing Violet and his life they had, it finally hit 'em
    He wasn't a soldier for the U.S. He'd been sent over as a victim
    Then bullets pelted into his chest & velvet began to drench him
    He'd learned nothin' in life but now was his time of redemption
    Conflictions and riddles solved, the answer was no longer pondered
    Conscriptions into history meant dying today,...For tomorrow's honor
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    Last edited by Ascend; November 22nd, 2006 at 10:08 AM
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    .................Wake up damnit !
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    Aiyo yur shit really had me intrigued. Unlike some things i've read, and i'm not meaning on this site or anything, but I actually could feel yur shit honestly. Props 2 ya, peace...
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    this was a nice put together piece..though im more poetic..this was awesome man.....nice job and nice drop!....really nice assorted vocaba nd the metaphorical treason placed on this was spectacular......nothing AWED about this but it was a nice and good emotional read man and i rally felt this personally!.
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    Verbal Intercourse.

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    Re: For Tomorrow's Honor

    Bump. Please feed. Put up link and I will return the favor.
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    Re: For Tomorrow's Honor

    i like the way u put this o ne together. the vocab was crazy and the way u explained things made it seem like u were reading the story out loud to me. I could really imagine wit this one. I like the topic of this one. It kinda makes u think about things more after u done readin it. keep up the good work i wanna see more good shit like this in the future.

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