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Coherent.
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This kid is all ovah tha place, yappin' bout his record, mines ain't shit
But he trash, ain't even ass, so his lines ain't shit
Really I'm replyin' fa' shit, what tha fuck could he tell me
That I gotta piss all in his face like uh nigga R Kelly
Coherent? Bogish name you can't even claim
Discovered uh new word in tha English language and made it yo' name
Fuckin' Flunky, you like ta be in a crew and stuff
Shit'd I'm waitin' on you ta put down tha mic and hold my nuts
Coherent has apparently prepared for ah funeral
I shit on yo' tongue and use yo' mouth for uh urinal
i feel sorry, this dude got cut short, like hair in the military
kid, ya whole life is wack<---- that's the entire commentary
i'm huntin for bitches...
...and when i pull out my gun, ya gurl comes running
a simple 9, but compared to ya 45, i got her double cumming
this shit is so easy, i'm whoring this impared fuckboy
i'll smash and then dump ya...
... like i was playing with a Tonka truck toy
school's in...
...but ya absent minded ass gettin expelled for truancy
i'm undefeated man, and your wack ass is trying to ruin me?
school's out, your diss-missed, and that's no surprise to this
fool's doubt, till i clown ya bitch, now give me back my fist
pwned
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nothing
vs.
this shit is so easy, i'm whoring this impared fuckboy
i'll smash and then dump ya...
... like i was playing with a Tonka truck toy
school's in...
...but ya absent minded ass gettin expelled for truancy
i'm undefeated man, and your wack ass is trying to ruin me?
self explanatory as to who won this battle.
v/coherent
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i feel sorry, this dude got cut short, like hair in the military
kid, ya whole life is wack<---- that's the entire commentary
vs
nothing
one sided nothing to really explain at all...co took it with real punches and a couple of personals...comm you didnt come with anything work on you're verse but atleast you got the basics
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Vote - Coherent
Nothing special or aweshocking here. Commentary, you verse was boring man. You had punches, but they were weak and played and also didn't connect. Coherent, your verse was just better. Not the best i've seen from you, but def enough to win here in my eyes. No hate to neither.
Peace.
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v/coherent.
nothing too amazing here, but co gets this battle for better punches and being more creative with the verse. commentary ur verse was boring and i wasnt feelin it for nothing.
hit up sig honestly to both.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
i've already hit up your battle with City Prodigy and charles is in my crew, sorry
i'll keep my eyes open for another one of your battles in the future
upping 3, leave links
Coherent has apparently prepared for ah funeral
I shit on yo' tongue and use yo' mouth for uh urina
vs.
this shit is so easy, i'm whoring this impared fuckboy
i'll smash and then dump ya...
... like i was playing with a Tonka truck toy
school's in...
...but ya absent minded ass gettin expelled for truancy
i'm undefeated man, and your wack ass is trying to ruin me?
ok i lied i felt bad so i gave dude a quotable
V/coh