10 lines
5 to check
1 hour to drop
house rules
blind spit
10 lines
5 to check
1 hour to drop
house rules
blind spit
Nike......G/L my nigga
checkin in
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
God Of §in lookin for §in but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
10
uppin and yuo pronounce my name loke e not look e lol anyways upping
lol ya lol n e ways good battle famz...uppin 1
Word.
This is a tough battle...
Lokeye...
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
Ok...i don;t personally like the concept of making a new line for one drawn out bar...
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
ok...
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
Again...you did it...but it was fresh!
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
Arg...
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
Fuck me...it's all you do...
J.C.
God Of §in lookin for §in but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
I hate this shit...but ok...
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
ok...again...same shit...
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
no...
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
meh...meh...na...
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
I personally don;t like this style...
Both of ya'll...i do not like the style of drawing out a bar to be extremely long by just shorting up the lines...it's whack...
Imma have to vote for Lokeye...his shit seemed more direct...J.C. you seemed to be sitting there causeing way too much "traffic" with ya verse...Way to much shit goin on...
V/ Lokeye...Better verse...thats about it...
ight uppin 2 if u dont under stand the punchs dont vote
i understand loud and clear. I don;t understand the "style" meh...i'm just one voter there's more to come.Originally Posted by Lil J.C.
uppin
up 3
Lok
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
*haha ok
listen wen i say your shit, and take in a new sense
cuz ive been on top, while you still following the blue prints
*ok
your stupid and wack dude, played in actuality
so ill shoot your cranium with mentos
...to give you a fresh mentality
*nahh
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
*ok..could of been better
im dope with the punches, i could even quote ali
cuz yea this fag floats like a butterfly
...but only has the features of a bee
*nahh
not the best verse...but wutev it was alright some punches connected...6.5/10
vs
Lil jc
God Of §in lookin for §in but Lok-Ya-Eyes on him to see dumb,(see them)
hows your avy gonna say iRep Legendz...
...when you'll never be one!,
*ok
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
*mmm k..
look kid ya battle herbs its Constant. how u think u got to 10-0,
ya rhymes to sweet to b harsh 'Suge'...
...and wouldnt be 'killin' if they was on Death Row,
*ummm k...but suge has nothin to do with him..
hide where ya from but if i had to guess it would b chicago but who knows,
my reason for thinkin this way u ask...
...if this is so then in chicago its more the the wind that blows,
*nooo wtf
we could dig up ya past and show the newbs u murked truth hurts,
i murk herbs to...
...Lok-n-see your my Newest-Murk,
*nah
bad verse nothin really had anythin to do with him your punches didn't connect i' thought u were gonna drop better but u didn't so..5.5/10
vote//lokeye...
ok FL battle here some ok punches wer thrown here guys, i feel lokeye was more consistance with hes punches but JC you had one or two ok ones, but the rest wer meh to be honest. these are the main punches in the battle in my point of view
not testing what im writing, im the threat to society
and wen they say your a piece of work
...works just need entirely
^^ ok
think you gon find a win, lil kid ill give you a pound
cuz yea you the king of columbus,
...since you still confused what you found
^^ ok
vs
checkin in was your 'First Step' Toward 'The Next Level' of death state,*
id hate to b 'The Witness.' in ya judgemental arrest case...
...when Impersenateing an Emcee is 100% of ya crime rate,
^^ ok but to stretched
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Got a hole in you then your bleeding
so its not like im just calling you pussy for no reason - Jada
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^^ links yo hit that up
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Got a hole in you then your bleeding
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