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  1. October 14th, 2006, 01:55 PM #1
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    Murder by Meter


    I move on these feetless feet through this street-less street
    Guts keep seeping such spit-less spit on this beat-less beat
    So take some heedless heed as I plant this seedless seed
    Now read these deedless deeds yield to its needless need
    Or topple like treeless trees assassinated for feeless fees
    Still the ceaseless cease as I loosen the creaseless crease
    With shiftless shifts swiftness hits harshly on shitless shits
    Falling into pitiless pits peacefully destroying all witless wits
    Witness the sword-less sword swinging with wordless words
    Disturbing your nerveless nerves igniting like herbless herbs
    Lings wheezing breathless breath suggests of fleshless flesh
    Completing fretless frets fast asleep in deep deathless deaths
    Caught-up in knotless knots blood-clots form blotless blots
    Counting costless costs ear chops like Goth in fogless fogs
    Spewing aghast gutless guts crush & ruin your nut-less nuts
    Abusing with cutlass cuts combo kicking your but-less buts
    Using bootless boots jolts remove jagged toothless tooth’s
    Reduce your useless use & truth-less truth to rootless roots
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  2. October 14th, 2006, 02:01 PM #2
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  3. October 14th, 2006, 06:17 PM #3
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    this was another nice drop...i love reading your oms...you had really nice flow all through out....the multies were just dope as fuck...strutre was nice and easy to read...pretty creative with how did this...i was feelin the emotion..imagerny was pretty nice...all together nice drop...caught my eye for sure...keep up...and look for my new om..
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  4. October 14th, 2006, 11:08 PM #4
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    Nice. Good imagery and multi's above all.
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  5. October 15th, 2006, 02:39 AM #5
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    this was a decent drop..nice flow..good imagery and the mutlies were good as well...those mettas were decent and the vocabwas too...this was overall a decemt drop//keep it up
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  6. November 4th, 2006, 11:33 AM #6
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  7. November 5th, 2006, 11:11 AM #7
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    errm you tried to do something a bit more original in this, i appreciate that
    but overall it didnt really say anything to me as a reader

    it rhymed cool, but had no content
    good to see someone doing a verse thats not in the usual form thou

    can't say much more on it really

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=314183
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    it's a bold statement - the new youtube
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  8. November 5th, 2006, 06:27 PM #8
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    lol.it had cointent...it was based on Samurai and Ninja on the battlefield.but the content is stained within metaphor and multie effcets










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