Front Lines Championship (Text): Clisk (C) vs. Fatal BlacOut

[SmokaJoka]

You must go 16+ lines...agree on your line limit
Verses are due by Friday midnight
This will NOT count against your record...but it will count to your points in rankings...
Voting ends Sunday midnight....




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[Spoken]

BRUP!....check.

yup ima go from 16-18 only

[Fatal.]

iight check. i'll go 16-18 as well.

[Spoken]

well sorry to be late hospital problems so dont front ill drop later today!....in like 20 min.

[Spoken]

dropping a no show verse.

coming like that?shoulda never checked..my lines make you tap!
Kick u off da map, so unusual, like the touchdowns of WArren SaPP
bippity hippity hoo blah seeing you not drop dont hurt.
dude sucks,couldnt kick a good rhyme, if he played soccer with his words
Might as well be talkin' Greek...
................Your punchlines make rooms grow quiet.
Nonsense, like death camp survivors starting up on Slim Fast diets.
I’m down to ruggedly bump uglies. My ass to your face.
Give you a taste of the shit I talk when I’m belligerently rockin’ the place.
On the real tho’...
I’ll stick a steal toe boot up your ass like a dildo.
Jiggle it just a little bit and quiz you in how that feels, bro
Shave my ass crack with a Norelco, and glue the hairs to your chin.
Pass you off as Osama bin Laden, and collect the award for capturing him.
Forge my name in your will, ill be quick to kill yo!.
Smother you with a throw pillow and jab you in the belly with both my elbows.
Before I leave you , I suggest you dip
Seeing you got a dick in ya mouth, no wonder you couldnt spit

[Fatal.]

I'm fuckin sick, ur shit don't click for you bitch
What kinda of name is clisk...........................
.....................everytime u spit i feel a bit of a brisk
You couldn't reign terror with your lyrics, only when ur fartin
Becuz ur shit aint fierce, not even spittin wit Osamma Bin Laden
Ur shit sucks, i was certainly surprised u acctually made it this far
And my lyrics will harm you...............................
.................................leaving both of my lyrical fists scarred
Shit, i never knew u were a member of this site till yesterday
I peeped a few of your battles, i aint impressed best to say
Just looking at ur sig, tells ur immature playing with a squirrel
even with Fake ass guns u loser................................
.....while me on the other hand will make u twirl in a circle
Fuck, u winning is like the bobcats winning the championship
Becuz u spit shit, i can tell cuz u got shit all ova ya lip
Haha the fuck kid? ur a dumb fuck worse than a dumb blonde
Checking in in the battle was dumb and u know urself u done wrong
Now u gonna loose, pick up ur loss and use it as a dildo homo
I aint mentally sick but that's something u lack in ur skills yo
Before i end this nightmare queer, i'ma swing at ur face as if i was ortiz
Knock u into a coma, so when u wake up u'll be so dumb sayin"More please"

blah 18.

[_Lyrics]

the 1st vote

coming like that?shoulda never checked..my lines make you tap!
Kick u off da map, so unusual, like the touchdowns of WArren SaPP
mehh
bippity hippity hoo blah seeing you not drop dont hurt.
dude sucks,couldnt kick a good rhyme, if he played soccer with his words
iight
Might as well be talkin' Greek...
................Your punchlines make rooms grow quiet.
Nonsense, like death camp survivors starting up on Slim Fast diets.
nah
I’m down to ruggedly bump uglies. My ass to your face.
Give you a taste of the shit I talk when I’m belligerently rockin’ the place.
nah
On the real tho’...
I’ll stick a steal toe boot up your ass like a dildo.
Jiggle it just a little bit and quiz you in how that feels, bro
lol,nah
Shave my ass crack with a Norelco, and glue the hairs to your chin.
Pass you off as Osama bin Laden, and collect the award for capturing him.
lol,iight
Forge my name in your will, ill be quick to kill yo!.
Smother you with a throw pillow and jab you in the belly with both my elbows.
it'd be better w/ a punchline
Before I leave you , I suggest you dip
Seeing you got a dick in ya mouth, no wonder you couldnt spit
ehh
the rhymeskeme here had no real multis or forced rhymes wit an accent. the punches were plain and weak, i feel that you could've had this easily providing the right time to manage. one word... rushed

vs

I'm fuckin sick, ur shit don't click for you bitch
What kinda of name is clisk...........................
.....................everytime u spit i feel a bit of a brisk
nah
You couldn't reign terror with your lyrics, only when ur fartin
Becuz ur shit aint fierce, not even spittin wit Osamma Bin Laden
nah, wheres the set up?
Ur shit sucks, i was certainly surprised u acctually made it this far
And my lyrics will harm you...............................
.................................leaving both of my lyrical fists scarred
nah... shits wack dawg
Shit, i never knew u were a member of this site till yesterday
I peeped a few of your battles, i aint impressed best to say
iight
Just looking at ur sig, tells ur immature playing with a squirrel
even with Fake ass guns u loser................................
.....while me on the other hand will make u twirl in a circle
nah... theres no setup to a punch
Fuck, u winning is like the bobcats winning the championship
Becuz u spit shit, i can tell cuz u got shit all ova ya lip
nah
Haha the fuck kid? ur a dumb fuck worse than a dumb blonde
Checking in in the battle was dumb and u know urself u done wrong
ehhh
Now u gonna loose, pick up ur loss and use it as a dildo homo
I aint mentally sick but that's something u lack in ur skills yo
nah
Before i end this nightmare queer, i'ma swing at ur face as if i was ortiz
Knock u into a coma, so when u wake up u'll be so dumb sayin"More please"
nah
you had no punches... everything was set up to sound like a nonsense ramble. rethink some of your concepts... cuz none in here were creative enough for a punch or wordplay, i dont know if you decided to come weak cuz of clisks verse but shit was wack dawg

wtf at this shit
v/clisk

[Lord of Pens]

Seriously I'm surprised. This is the championship battle except nobody had any quoteables. Really, not one punch from either side hit imo. Clisk, you gave it more of a try but some of your lines just were ehhish. Fatal, all of your stuff didn't hit at all. You really need to work on your punches man. Just none of them landed. It was like you were talking instead of dissing him and punching him. Clisk at least came at you with a couple of punches. Fatal, you just came plain garbage in this battle. And you basically handed the win over to Clisk. So both really need to step it up fully man. The vote goes to Clisk because he had some attempts and SOME kind of creativity or a punch. So...

\\//Clisk

[Cody Nash]

both were bleh, yet again. the only line in this battle that had me close to laughing was the Osama line ..this battle was a typical front lines battle, and its not helping that a topical head is holding the title right now lol ..you guys really need to upp your wording and make shit a lot witter, your punches are so bland and predictable. and to both of you, spit - swallow - penis - pussie - and mom jokes ..are played.

v/ Clisk, barely.

[Philly®]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311998


both hit that.



lmfao clisk shouldn't u been in a topical bout?... lol

first let me say wtf @ all the playedness i saw.. for a champ match i mean this was just blah... honestly i aint feel anylines both of you had... but IMO i think clisk came a lil less played... like both u please elevate.. so these battles can actually mean something... pz


V/clisk

[Spoken]

lmfao no i should be in a poetry not topical but if you say so then yea maybe i should lmfao...

[Philly®]

i updated my feedback link



o n i knew text wasn't ya main thing.. so i figured it was topical or something

[Spoken]

yea word ill get to your link now!

[SmokaJoka]

Closed...Clisk wins..