Mr. P GankSta vs The Witness.

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Crew Battle
Mr. P GankSta vs The Witness

40 lines max
House Rules
Due 2 days after check

Topics
Loose shillings for.....
Gratings of Epedemic Stature

[P. Mortuus]

Check....due in 2 days that would make it wednesday max for both of us....G/L it's gonna be di0pe

[da king01]

word check. Finally we get to battle lol I'll drop on my witness name, I'll have it back by then. Goodluck mate, let's make this DiOpe DiOpe powder

[P. Mortuus]

Loose shillings for…..
………………….another song?

*Puts money in the jukebox*

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“One love…. Let’s get together and feel all right.”

Born as a concoction of 2 cultures, half-caste they whisper
Vultures ridiculed the light pigment when it was really simpler
Lispers of love with snatches of hashish to brew a banger
Club hanger with a message of danger, Rasta’s burning manger
Stranger beware, don’t falter in the path of “Exodus”, a snare
Roping babies with umbilical chords, Babylon hordes laughing
Carving craniums I remember the “Slave Driver” & his marking
Orders barking “mon me” back be arching, under a pressure pot
No way to measure the stressor of a failed assassination plot
What Babylon got? They got a rebellion against the apprehension
Captivity breeds animals into man but I better mention “Redemption”
“Get up Stand up” blares threw the speaker a track changed
Lack pained so the tack maimed and pinned a country re-framed
Jamaica Jamaica…I breathe out the weed cloud sheathe drought
Speak out words that need knowing, flowing on empty…….

*Please insert money*

An irony that when the flow was speaking what we should know
Monetary issues once again oblique our view only speak to crow
Retreat to blow, a few shillings worth of wisdom is all we need
To breed a generation, forget idle veneration time acts in speed
Shillings kept in greed, weed out the weak yet the weak rebel
Intellectual droplets leak out their minds to teach & foretell
Ring Ring Ring………………………….
I murder the bell no longer wanting to further this hell
Smell the discourse of governmental lore, explore then ignore
Me; you think I like this gore, mop my words blood off the floor
All I asked of were a few shillings…..to hear that song once more

[Witty]

Loose change: A story of Faith

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'Belief can set you free'

‘What you choose to call hell, we call home’

A single heart beat is a gelid reminder of life
The knife splits the stone, sparks ignite the night
With amber light, tell me, can you do the Samba right?
Famine, blight, and all plagues, cast out of site
Tonight we rejoice, let the Gods hear our voice
Sacrifice your lives, your wives, and your boys
We are one as a tribe, and the white man’s bribe
We’re annoyed

These beasts mock our civilisation, our lifestyle
As I load my pistol, patient, with a bright smile
Hatred burns, with the passion of a thousand fires
My soul is alight, my conscience has expired
Nothing but animals, dancing around their shacks with joy
Prancing up and down, on that innocent shackled boy
They cast a tumour in my humour, adding to my despise
These bags under my eyes, can’t disguise my surprise
But we’ve got guys on our side, that will fight with their life
Only one of our squadrons will suffice, these demons die tonight

A blinding light, disturbs our glorious parade
We draw our weapons, and dart to our warrior’s aid
Before we can see it, we’re stuck in a cross fire
We fall on our knees, and solely depend on our ‘flyers’
The men in the trees, that can blend in with leafs
They swing like trapeze, and help when we’re in need
One, two, three, these soldiers are dropping like flies
They will not survive, the Gods are on our side

I grip my weapon, a custom built Smith & Wesson
And squeeze to teach this filth a lesson
‘where are they sir? Are they gone? They’ve disappeared’
‘I don’t know, but be sure to keep your pistol near’
These words are barely muttered as they crash down
A flash of brown, but not a struggle, not a sound
We have been beaten, my soul is retreating, it’s leaving
I weep a song of sorrow, as I’m kicked and beaten

‘have you any last words, before you’re left to die in this hole?’
Yes, can you spare loose change, for a homeless soul?’

Faith is our greatest weapon

[Witty]

Let's get some votes up in here.

[P. Mortuus]

Yup Yup, G/L

[13th Disciple]

I would vote on this but I can't for the simple reason the topic
alone is garbage. It doesn't even make sense. But, both the
heads on this did come creative.

Pakaveli through some insane words in there and The Witness
had a good story riding to it. But like I said, I can't vote on
something I don't understand. Whoever picked the topic
should be forced to recieve a blow job from a man infected
with oral herpes.


Props

[P. Mortuus]

I came up with the topic...off the head...but i aint giving you anything lol^.

[P. Mortuus]

UP Up Up^^^

[P. Mortuus]

up #3..........am i wasting ups......................

[Witty]

Up.

[punish_ya]

witness dude i gonna drop a vers on our battle??
Im going to have to give this vote to witness he had some deep shit it was a close battle to me but witness just took his shit to a higher level

You are about to be banned...vote DQed

-Fue

[P. Mortuus]

Witness i'm deleting that vote.................if he does not come back and leave a better explanantion....

[Dyl]

Ok guys this was sooooooo fucking hard for me to vote on,seriously.You guys really did battle your hearts out and it is making it that much harder for me to vote as you are to of my good friends.So first of all I'd like to say well done to you both.

Pak-Man you did a good job here on this one.Bob would have loved to read this.I found your wording very good but in places it could have been better.It was structured out nicely making it easy for me to read.Your creativity was impressive,you really showed how much knowledge you have on him and detailed everything very well.The flow in some places fell off in places also but it did pick up and run smoothly,and another thing I like about this drop is,that I learned something new.Nice piece

The Witness- Well you fucking made it hard for me you fuck.You had some really nice imagery and emotion in this piece.You had a good little storyline here which you displayed very well.I feel that your lines were a tad bit streched.You should of shortened them a small bit.Like Pak you had nice wording and creativity and you are showing everyone what you are all about.Nice job

Overall-I don't think I should vote on this battle due to the fact that it is hard for me to pick between two good friends.I will ponder to myself and come back with a verdict,thats if you REALLY want me to vote on this battle.Nice job both of you