Final Draft vs The Collection
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Wyte
Lord of Pens
Final Draft vs The Collection
10 lines
House rules
due 2morow midnight
250 to vote
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Sup...
...Bitch, c'mon man, understand ur whack or just quit, fuck it, plead the fifth,
OMG,Wyte has the biggest cock...squawkin all the time bout how whack he is,
Your freakish, in the cathedral, it's mass murder the way I kill him on Sunday,
I'm makin a huge fashion statement...draggin this fag up and down the runway,
I told The Collection to give me somethin to piss on, they gave me crew junk,
Your unseen? no problem, I'll put you in plane sight...after I uppercut u punk,
Peeps wipe their ass with u, u got that Scott ish...lol, look at the fool's skirt,
I'm so happy, Wyte's gettin hitched...up to a wagon and dragged through dirt,
I'll swell ya eyes, 'n make'em change colors...now u got full time black shades,
Gotta give it to you man, your something fierce<----nah, u just smell that way,
Sup...
...Bitch, c'mon man, understand ur whack or just quit, fuck it, plead the fifth,
OMG,Wyte has the biggest cock...squawkin all the time bout how whack he is,
Your freakish, in the cathedral, it's mass murder the way I kill him on Sunday,
I'm makin a huge fashion statement...draggin this fag up and down the runway,
I told The Collection to give me somethin to piss on, they gave me crew junk,
Your unseen? no problem, I'll put you in plane sight...after I uppercut u punk,
Peeps wipe their ass with u, u got that Scott ish...lol, look at the fool's skirt,
I'm so happy, Wyte's gettin hitched...up to a wagon and dragged through dirt,
I'll swell ya eyes, 'n make'em change colors...now u got full time black shades,
Gotta give it to you man, your something fierce<----nah, u just smell that way,
Had to fix structure. Mah bad.
The games of me not trying are over, really im gunna merk this kid
^So now im going to raise the bar – and bash ur fucking face with it
Yea u gotta grill, even though he has perfect teeth, this is a lame line
^^So ill denture face – and break your fucking teeth at the same time
Your rhymes are trash, and they’re old, straight up dirty and muddy
We will take this one step at a time – until your fuckin face is bloody
^I know you likes that punchline, yeah whatever…... ^I scored dude
And you would be a Client to success – but he already whored you
You try taking things to a new level, but you always fuckin fail dude
^Yeah your good at pushing the envelope*…
…Since you already get paid for stuffing & licking them too
*Pushing the envelope - extend the limits of performance
LOP-
best bar-Peeps wipe their ass with u, u got that Scott ish...lol, look at the fool's skirt,
I'm so happy, Wyte's gettin hitched...up to a wagon and dragged through dirt,
the rest of ya verse was ok but i think it was more threats then punchs and they wasnt really hittin all that hard u didnt really get to personal on em and i was lookin for it i got to say this is one of the weakest battles ive seen u do in a while man im dissappointed.....
Wyte-
best bar-And you would be a Client to success – but he already whored you
You try taking things to a new level, but you always fuckin fail dude
meh i think this was ya best rest was threats and shit but had some decent connections yand shit but i jus wasnt feelin all of ya shit this line stuck out to me tho liked the set up and the personalization of it decent punch....im kinda disappointed in u to tho wyte...
v// Wyte by a hair
yall hit this honestly
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310830
YOung Zadarak, only difference is this Juda shot ya then give back the strap
...Bitch, c'mon man, understand ur whack or just quit, fuck it, plead the fifth,
OMG,Wyte has the biggest cock...squawkin all the time bout how whack he is,
no.
Your freakish, in the cathedral, it's mass murder the way I kill him on Sunday,
I'm makin a huge fashion statement...draggin this fag up and down the runway,
bleh, poorly worded.
I told The Collection to give me somethin to piss on, they gave me crew junk,
Your unseen? no problem, I'll put you in plane sight...after I uppercut u punk,
this was ok for an uppercut punch, one of the better ones i've seen, but these are still played a bit.
Peeps wipe their ass with u, u got that Scott ish...lol, look at the fool's skirt,
I'm so happy, Wyte's gettin hitched...up to a wagon and dragged through dirt,
ok attempt at a flip, could've been a lot better but this was still decent.
I'll swell ya eyes, 'n make'em change colors...now u got full time black shades,
Gotta give it to you man, your something fierce<----nah, u just smell that way,
naw, weak/lame.
LOP, for judging 1-2 punches in the mag, i dont think you have room to talk. (no offense), because you've got a lot of room to elevate and your creativity and concepts still lack a little. thats your biggest problem. then your wording, that isn't as direct as you want it to be, but meh ..its a start. keep working at it ..
vs.
The games of me not trying are over, really im gunna merk this kid
^So now im going to raise the bar – and bash ur fucking face with it
played flip, raise the bar shits bleh ..straight up.
Yea u gotta grill, even though he has perfect teeth, this is a lame line
^^So ill denture face – and break your fucking teeth at the same time
this was nice, i liked it. i haven't seen TOO much denture wordplay but this was executed well.
Your rhymes are trash, and they’re old, straight up dirty and muddy
We will take this one step at a time – until your fuckin face is bloody
meh, naw.
^I know you likes that punchline, yeah whatever…... ^I scored dude
And you would be a Client to success – but he already whored you
these kind've punches are played, and yes i admit i've recently used a couple but they're normally just filler and hopefully what this is.
You try taking things to a new level, but you always fuckin fail dude
^Yeah your good at pushing the envelope*…
…Since you already get paid for stuffing & licking them too
ok, but not really.
Wyte, i really think you took this easily. LOP had some played shit, well most the shit was badly worded or played, but then you had a couple nicer lines here, and i really think the denture line won it for you. decent verse, one of your better ones that i've seen. still not great yet tho, but you're just about there.
both did ok, but LOP did worse.
v/ Wyte
Vote - Wyte
I agree with Cry. LOP, your verse was just weaker in my opinion. Wyte had a few somewhat witty lines and his set-ups were worded ok. LOP, i was expecting better but i guess i was wrong. Lines were stretched also, so the flow was hard to catch. And the punches were lame. no hate dawg.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=311038
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Thanx for the votes guys. Good battle Wyte. And I agree I came kinda mehish here.
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