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    Conquering Lion Prince Escobar's Avatar
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    Unspoken Art

    Unspoken Art
    Black Prince


    i need to be tutored to your silent mutiny
    i see your mute rebellion is disheveling
    the powers that be, though far from loud
    and i see too that you need new ears
    for your uprising to fall silent upon
    learn sign language, read minds with your palm
    these exclamations are unheard of
    your deaf threats will not go unnoticed
    rest your eyes, your incessant glares
    don't impress the sky
    you've tested my patience and failed
    torn a hole in my penmanship
    i fear i can't replace the sails
    yet i still chase ways to get down
    with your silent uprising
    trying to balance my time
    without dissapointing the cause
    the tipping point is gripping my heart
    as i await the chips' descent
    in attempt to have my voice heard
    under this lip zipped dissent
    but the silence is drowning me
    drinking the noiseless voices
    the passion of the masses
    bounces off the walls
    every account drumming in my ears
    as i plummet for fear of discovery
    i let out an offering
    to this silent communion
    communicating in ways unimagined
    my pride becoming unfastened
    trapped in the crossfire
    of this silent action...

    You're breaking the mold, daring difference
    Our relationship began sweet
    and soured up until the bitter end
    i've written ten fold about this mute madness
    sending telepathic love taps
    cutting the tension without uttering a sentence
    trapped in an invisible box
    unable to speak with the elephant in the room
    i think i've gone nuts
    now my metaphor is eating at me
    every near word misleading my train of thought
    i wonder if you'll break the silence
    thus far it's been handled with care
    you've fought for the cause, and that's rare
    and now we stare, eyes embraced
    my mind is racing
    and it's taking it's toll, listen!
    now you've gone and claimed poll position
    you control the arena, without even a sigh in the wind
    you begin crying then, a victorious gladiator
    lost upon exiting the lions den
    you've claimed your prize
    a sentence or two
    maybe more, i wait dejected for what you have in store
    and yet you serve to suprise
    silent uprising has won your gun
    weapon of choice being a word
    and yet for me you have none
    funny how the first cut is the deepest
    and i was the one up in arms
    you stood and left me to the empty canvas
    of our unspoken art

    1luv.
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    hmm...elevation is key
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    WOW...it would have been a crime if this piece would've went under the radar. It looks to me like you've been polishing your metaphors/plays on words man, this joint was type strong in that department. It flowed really well and i felt like u really made the topic at hand come to life, good shit homie, haven't peeped work like this in a while, kudos.

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    lol thanks man, i appreciate that breakdown and i appreciate how you always leave me feedback, good look for the response, elevation is key...1luv.
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