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    Tattooed Sanity



    Tattooed Sanity: Sinful When it Grips You For Daze



    Translucent transforms play in a liquid crystal display
    & transport lucid brainstorms, in a magic pistol array
    a pelagic mist of dismay sets sail on fists full of waves
    it's blissful in ways & sinful when it grips you for daze

    Amazed by a vivacious maze of parading neon lights
    ablaze by a tenacious haze, invading ME on sight
    raiding me of life like a masked marauder out at night
    it's mushroom madness, as I bask in broader heights


    Tonights fireworks synchronized by a shameless type
    ignite higher works seen thru eyes of a wayless hype
    aimless, I aim this right and pick off a nameless tyke
    in waves of tameless fright bought by a way less right

    Tight visuals astound the mind, it's like sensory overload
    over exposed as the painter of thoughts' palette explodes
    and spikes residuals bound by time, as concepts unfold
    exploring untolds in a con's text, where the context is bold


    Odd thoughts play in dark corners of depressed souls
    to shadow sanity through the woods and express tolls
    abra cadabra & presto alike the magic of life is best sold
    by it's weight in gold, because this fungi, never gets old

    Owed nothing in life & lost as sanity slips into mental flips
    & stenciled trips kiss penciled lips as faces drip red in fits
    of blood, cut deep by the fists of love, in the midst of trips
    where my blade outlines some random tit, that bitch'll drip


    Equipped w/ voltron might I thunder cat this puss in boots
    to expose her pink panther by means of a lil cutting loose
    and bag this trick to purr fection like my name was Felix
    as I whistle looney tunes drenched in HER double helix

    Dabbled in double edged tactics, I lay open this cunt
    blunt trauma & mushroom antics lead to bathing in blood
    wadding through tubs of flesh cut to nubs, a cold fuck
    on a hot night, by a cool blade.. Just another bitch fillet 'd



    Some are displayed in various arrays then put on display
    melted faces that haunt the depths of my inner most ways

    & taunt the mind set so I might just flip N2 a killer most days
    now post haze, I'm looking back on the shrooms that I braved

    No remorse for the lives or wake of destruction cut into flesh
    as I wake up in pools of entrails, blanketed in skins cut fresh

    In the flesh, fueled by magic mushrooms, a flirtation w/ death
    on a twisted cartoon ride as dark as heckle & jeckle on meth


    The average mind can easily be ravaged by some savage lines
    more so combined with land mines of rabid vine like imagery

    Yet savage minds single handedly manage spine like symmetry
    where Tattooed Sanity ripens in the mind with extreme synergy


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    Links Bouncy...sorry but I have to enforce it on everyone

    Besides, you already know this was amazing....Amazing rhyme scheme, wordplay, metahors, alliteration, some Allusions, and probably 18 other things I havent learned of yet....Imagery and Emotion were top notch, jus an overall dope piece....and you know if there was something i didn't like id tell you


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    I've already said all I have to say about this gem, Bounce.
    *applies more carpal tunnel cream*

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    Quote Originally Posted by Laureate
    Links Bouncy...sorry but I have to enforce it on everyone

    Besides, you already know this was amazing....Amazing rhyme scheme, wordplay, metahors, alliteration, some Allusions, and probably 18 other things I havent learned of yet....Imagery and Emotion were top notch, jus an overall dope piece....and you know if there was something i didn't like id tell you


    peep the link in my sig if you have time
    lol, he drops enough feed on random pieces almost everyday in OM.
    Thats why its ok to bypass this, lol.

    & you know my thoughts on this Bounce..
    Style just mad dope again, and a solid read, but I'd like to read the full story.
    Mint nonetheless





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    *De SM's Lyric* lol

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    Good job though, that is the kind of non biased moding we need, so props on calling me on it. I'll find some links from last ngiht, or I'll just feed on a few OM's when I get a chance. I tend to post in a drunken high state, so forgive me.


    I don't post for feed most of the time, I post to give the new kids something to work towards and examples of the various mechanics housed within. Give these guys soemthing to read, that they might otherwise have not read.

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    good shit bounce was feeling this. liked the multies and wordplay, talent is there.. keep them coming would like to see more from you..

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    ^thanks, just look me up, I probably have the biggest archive on here.

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    before I go to bed... wow I actually get to sleep tonight, exciting...

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    love this piece really external and internal at the same time.....really WOW!. the image and emotion WOW!...just really BOX OFFICE SMASHING...the feeling i got out o fthis was not strange but just really in amazement cause i have really A LONG LONG WAY to go to hit your level or to at least touch it...nice drop bounce i love alll your pieces...


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    good piece and i have to say... your one of the illest ive peeped since ive been on this board just keep the ILL shit comin. and ill look into them.

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    Bravo, Bounce. This is above and beyond 95% of what is on here.

    Hey - to everyone who nominates shit pieces for hall of fame all the time - here is the bar. Okay? If you want me to think your piece is good, and say nothing bad about it, then FUCKING FLOW. Like Bounce did, right here. I wish I got some more love myself for trying to flow word by word and use endless multies... my shit gets slept on cuz my name is Engivale =(...

    But enough whining. I've seldom written anything as solid as this, and you've got dozens of pieces, many better then this. I just wanted to say, to others more than Bounce, that this is GOOD work, and anything below it I will consider a "good effort," and i don't give a shit how great or philosophical you are or how many big words and metaphors you shove into your lines at the sacrifice of ACTUAL LYRICS.

    And who exactly am I yelling at? Everybody. Including myself. Good work, Bounce.

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    Great piece, I read this in your SS match, wonderful, a very interesting piece, and topic, you had a skilled rhymescheme, and your piece flowed consitently from beginning to end, you painted a vivid picture for the reader, I really enjoyed reading this, vocab was outstanding as always, the topic again was just incredible, great wording, great use of wordplay, and multis, not much more I can say except great job man, and I look forward to reading more.

    If you could please retun the favor.
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...45#post5134445
    Thanks.

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    Dope drop Bounce, I liked what you did with the titled and put it into your verses, stucture was ill. You had some really good lines in there, cant really say that I didnt like any of them. Liked the red and black switch that you did too, good job man

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    Damn you bounce and your awesomeness

    very nice drop here i liked it from start to end awesome concept to with the bolded letters the imagrey on this was great you could almost see what was going on not many people can do this as much as you can to the next level the style also did it for me good show my friend you are unstopable

    can you peep my new piece by the way

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    thanks everyone, I'll try to get to the peices requested in here... Heavy emphasis on try, damn I'm swamped...

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