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    Homework Nightmare

    Poker faced when he erased the A's with haste
    Now over spaced. He needed "Word" to fix his mistakes
    He wasn't paced. It was like a car race, but without the breaks
    Face is baked from rage now. He needed gatorade, but it was too late
    He swallowed spit to replace the electrolytes that was in waste
    Just in case, he sprayed his face with mace, so he could stay awake
    Saw an escape. Gave hope an embrace, but it was actually fake
    He saw disgrace. Thought it was a piece of cake, so he ate
    He starts to halucinate more. His taste for words was in a worst state
    Begins to type gibberish. The word whore appeared after every space
    His lore was turning into reality. He was suddenly in outerspace
    He sees his creator. She was trying to run, but mother couldn't escape
    The interior starts to elate. Realized he can't walk away from fate
    His barrier breaks, scarier and scarier it gets. He felt like fish bait
    Hate devoured his mind. He felt like a carrier of AIDS. His death awaits
    Opened his eyes. He was adjacent to his woman, tired from yesterday's date
    I looked at her in a lusterful way. Then went to the bathroom to urinate.....

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    Last edited by Toshida; September 8th, 2006 at 08:07 PM

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    not bad alot of multis.. seemed to help out to the flow
    some of the lines ahd akward wording.. more basics words wouldve suited better in some areas... the end kinda killed it lol.. it was kinda weird and why the I when everything else was he...story was a bit jumpy kinda hard to follow

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