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Thread: The Art of Life

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    The Art of Life

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    Born twice,in 1893 and 1984
    I’m Scandinavian and Scottish, a mix of all four
    I’m the very definition of an eye sore,
    And when someone mentions me, that’s the only time you’ll hear me
    So say it only once and say it clearly

    If art reflects life
    I already exist, housed in a frame
    Slapped on canvas, stemming from the right side of the brain
    A picture of pain, surreal but nearly talks
    With no leash of sorts, it’ll take your imagination for walks
    Return tickets for trips down memory lane, as a lonesome corpse
    Isolated, with back to the ocean
    What you see is waves of emotion, and a cold shoulder
    That is beyond frozen, it’ll never melt as it gets older
    The only time I see life, is in the eye of the beholder
    Like a Norwegian soldier, ‘cos that image will march
    Right into your psyche to a place that’s darker than dark
    It’s a grey matter, of the brain that’ll be lost to the art
    It carves out a part, that you’ll lose forever
    Just one looks’ all that’s needed, to tattoo your retinas
    Two people stared so long I got tired of waiting
    They don’t talk to me, ‘cos I told them to dive into this painting
    Pondering to go off the rails and to drown from hating
    And it’s all my fault for making, misery look like a scream
    Where one emotion steals the scene, I even became hot property
    In the hands of crooks but they returned me and treated me properly
    Museum security measures were sloppily, put in place
    I returned from the death, but nothing has changed this face
    The canvas still aches, if you ever look close enough, it’s faint
    But you’ll see streaks near the eyes, mixing up the paints
    Almost sick of its oily fate, wanting to shut down the brushed medulla
    As if abject sadness wants to use tear drops, to become a water-colour
    But the source is never brighter nor duller, it simply stays the same
    With every passing year I wizen
    The sun sets near the top of the frame, in a burning horizon
    A bright future cuts the skies n’ yet, there’s only one face
    On Edvard Munchs’ diamond
    ‘The Scream’
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    This was a great piece. I thought I was the first to use the poetic styling with Om's, but I just had yet to come across your work. At first I didn't know what I was going to think, because immediately I saw "the Scream" and was interesested and where the drop could possibly go, but the 20 questions intro stanza wasn't really too apealing to me. However, in the second portion of the Om you used that same style, but I really enjoyed it, just different tenses and and less vague I think. Overall I really liked this piece alot, I'm on the verge of giving it an HOF nomination... I'm going to read it over real quick again first.

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    This was a nice piece bra i like how the imagery connected wit the vocab bra you really had a nice touch on this piece mann i loved how you made the picture an important part o f this piece you really set off a nice style and structure to first off at the begining it was confusin but it got alot better as the piece progressed


    the part i was feelin the most


    What you see is waves of emotion, and a cold shoulder
    That is beyond frozen, it’ll never melt as it gets older
    The only time I see life, is in the eye of the beholder
    Like a Norwegian soldier, ‘cos that image will march
    Right into your psyche to a place that’s darker than dark
    It’s a grey matter, of the brain that’ll be lost to the art


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    One of the 'Best Writers' still left on the 'Net'

    The Introduction to the story was very well illustrated.
    You have a great writers voice.
    You truly are gifted my friend.

    ```What am I doing here?```

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    ... you'd get more if you would return favors.
    po'ethics /
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    This was a real nice read. I loved the poetic styling and the content housed here, very fluid. The writers voice stood out as strong and you took a direction that most here would have failed at. I loved the history thrown in this peice and the shot at museum security, well done. Nice to see this type of drom in OM again, it's been a while since such styles were popular here.

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