Probation Match: Nightmare vs. Flash

[Mystery~Murdera]

Rules Are Easy Here:
Come below LLL standard
and you're gone. This way
we see what you can do when
you have to try. No more excuses.


Verses Due: Friday 12 EST
Voting Will End Late Sun.
Regular Rules
Check In By Wed.

[Night Mare]

gotta sign out anyway school & work is killin me

check 16.

[Liquid Content]

Wordness... will post up later tonight probably

[Celia Fate]

Ugh to lazy to wait for your ass to drop... Ill key something now for your gay ass.

I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia
This is what wrote, see?? I'll just leave ya missin kid...
And pump ya full of so much Led...RB'll think your my prison bitch
You should just quit this shit, cuz my victory will be relished..
Mangle ya body beyond ugliness...it'd even make ya face jealous
Night's a fake bitch...just a kid who try to act cool
But your gonna come up short...like the bus you took to school

10.

[Night Mare]

My Words Are Weapons.

Flash AKA Lampejo

this trick plans on fighting me wit sticks faggot u can get hit with six bricks
bitch is starving so he's telling the truth when he says...... he raps for Kix
fag follower u will never be leading like I said before bitch u never eating
he stands up for what he believe's in thats y he gonna stay down after this beating
now u got ur doubts he's a seed he's getting sonned he just waiting to sprout
dont need a gun for this bout cuz when I clap at Lamp.....his light are out
I can snatch the win whenever when verses like urs blows worse then whirl winds
he reached a stage in his life where a boo is the closes he can get to a girlfriend
fag ur getin floored make like a mop talk shit ur chin will get rocked
give u no props cuz Flash Floods plenty of threads..... with his wack drops

Pancake Face on a Bitch, 10.

[Liquid Content]

Bump for some votes with all these people viewin the forum

and damn i thought my lines was strecthed

[Night Mare]

yea I kno all those views

but dayum u gave Played a whole new defentioin

[I Got Pwnd]

this trick plans on fighting me wit sticks faggot u can get hit with six bricks
bitch is starving so he's telling the truth when he says...... he raps for Kix
^decent..not hard hittin tho..
fag follower u will never be leading like I said before bitch u never eating
he stands up for what he believe's in thats y he gonna stay down after this beating
^Meh.just didnt connect 2 me well...concept was coo..just u didnt make it effective in ur set up.IMO.
now u got ur doubts he's a seed he's getting sonned he just waiting to sprout
dont need a gun for this bout cuz when I clap at Lamp.....his light are out
^aiight.I sorta like this one.
I can snatch the win whenever when verses like urs blows worse then whirl winds
he reached a stage in his life where a boo is the closes he can get to a girlfriend
^lol.u couldve short'nd it.
fag ur getin floored make like a mop talk shit ur chin will get rocked
give u no props cuz Flash Floods plenty of threads..... with his wack drops
Nice concept...cool name play too..Good closer.wouldve been Nice if the set up had sumthan to do with flash floods.

vs.

I could give ya a face lift...but Im most likely bound...
To do the opposite....and get ya body lowered...into the ground
^Cool.
..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia
^aiight.I understand a diss..but there is no pic 2 say his head is big.
This is what wrote, see?? I'll just leave ya missin kid...
And pump ya full of so much Led...RB'll think your my prison bitch
^Ha.
You should just quit this shit, cuz my victory will be relished..
Mangle ya body beyond ugliness...it'd even make ya face jealous
^Lmao.
Night's a fake bitch...just a kid who try to act cool
But your gonna come up short...like the bus you took to school
^Ummm.never seen it before..but I swear its played...but good anywhoo.

overall/-

Nightmare=Your wording seems 2 be a lil stretched when it doesnt need to be.for example

this trick plans on fighting me wit sticks faggot u can get hit with six bricks
bitch is starving so he's telling the truth when he says...... he raps for Kix

vs.

U plan on fighting me wit sticks.faggot,u'll get hit with bricks
bitch`s starving.so he's telling the truth-when he say's 'he raps for Kix'

^see.not the best example..but effective.

so saying that alot of ur concepts were pretty good,just worded badly..like the set up's..should sumwhat have something to do with ur punches at times(not always.)

Flash=Consistant drop.pretty much out worded nightmare..punches were str8 to the point,an had a couple i thought were lmao-able...nothing to amazing..but not bland either..

Nightmare
I can snatch the win whenever when verses like urs blows worse then whirl winds
he reached a stage in his life where a boo is the closes he can get to a girlfriend
fag ur getin floored make like a mop talk shit ur chin will get rocked
give u no props cuz Flash Floods plenty of threads..... with his wack drops


Flash
This is what wrote, see?? I'll just leave ya missin kid...
And pump ya full of so much Led...RB'll think your my prison bitch
You should just quit this shit, cuz my victory will be relished..
Mangle ya body beyond ugliness...it'd even make ya face jealous
Night's a fake bitch...just a kid who try to act cool
But your gonna come up short...like the bus you took to school

v/-Flash.

[Liquid Content]

The line about him havin a big head means he thinks he's something great... hence big head

[Mystery~Murdera]

it's sorta amazing that flash calls ANYBODY else a cheater.

..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia

..Ya egos inflated but dont let ya wack skills go to ya...
Cuz with a head like that...I bet ya brain isnt scared of claustraphobia

http://community.rapverse.com/showth...claustraphobia

you're banned.

[Acey]

lmao kick nightmare to though.

[Liquid Content]

That is me by the way... ask anyone on RV who that was. i no longer use the account though havnet used it since that tourny. so yeah. not biting just recyceling

[Liquid Content]

*Dead at you guys calling me a biter, How stupid you think i am huh?

I believe that punch was against Pop Lotty huh?

[Possible]

Your ancel?

[Vaskez]

I thought ancel was celestial?