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Thread: <<Aggression>> & <Arithmetic>

  1. August 29th, 2006, 03:37 AM #1
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    <<Aggression>> & <Arithmetic>

    <Aggression>

    I blow slow smoke rings as I ponder,
    Higher grossing, supposing you let my mind wander
    Peace is acceptable, but we'll never attain it,
    At least the perception will forever explain it
    Aggression is rooted, it's encoded in genes,
    My impression is who did these chauvinist things
    Your Holiness brings, No Pope but it seems
    That one man could put some plan in Iran's schemes


    <Arithmetic>

    Two plus Four... Six...
    Hexagon is the shape of a beehive-
    We tried pryin' but now we're just tryin'...
    We died...
    Serves us right, this nervous right-
    Cheous, Might this be the Light Dynasty?
    Your highness, We...
    Sit at Nine Minus Three...
    I'm sick but I'm lackin' the serum
    Plug Six in the Pythagorean Theorem...
    I reallign the intertwined angles, it's Three-Sixty Degrees..
    Within me resides divine angels, And I wish she believed...
    I'll use four styles in one rhyme, See me Switchin It?
    Fuck drugs, I'd rather spit about Arithmetic...

    What is certain Truth?
    Are you dreaming?
    Am I a perfectly drawn circle screaming?
    Do you Exist?
    I think, Therefore I am? Don't Start...
    Two Plus Two is Four. Refute that, Descartes.


    <<EnGiVaLe>>


    (If you don't know, Descartes is pronounced Day-Cart. Not trying to insult anyone's intelligence who is familiar with the philosopher, I just know a lot of people won't know who Descartes is.)


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    Last edited by Engivale; August 29th, 2006 at 03:42 AM

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    "She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."
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  2. August 29th, 2006, 02:31 PM #2
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    A.I.

    "She managed to extract from the restriction itself a further delicate thought, like good poets whom the tyranny of rhyme forces into the discovery of their finest lines."
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  3. August 29th, 2006, 03:43 PM #3
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    yeah that was tight man. nice schemes but it was definately intelligent too. i was pickin up on everything nice easy read but it flowed well too.
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  4. August 29th, 2006, 06:29 PM #4
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    think therefore i am..lol...made me remember an old joke this friend told who used to study philosophy and ethics. Well i can say that the first short verse was definentaly a different evingale thant the usual and the swithc to originality took place in the second verse. At points i lost your flow but regained it quick enough. You can say that with complexity comes uniqueness and damn right it comes with this. Made me remember my maths lessons lol. Overall, i liked it, different but enjoyable nonetheless. Stay up na mean. Also, when you get the minute check anyone om of mine that is on the first page.
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  5. August 30th, 2006, 08:15 AM #5
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    Thx for comments, will hit you up tomorrow Pak, I'm off to catch some z's b4 my philosophy class.

    Oh,might as well admit, this is kind of an up. Feedback appreciated, I'll look at a piece of yours, of course, for your opinion on mine.

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  6. August 30th, 2006, 02:50 PM #6
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    yea for real i liked that fucking arithmatic verse.. ish was banging w/ flow and impact. rhymes was illy on that tip..... had some strange wordplays which i liked also. only thing i diddnt like is the fact you diddnt continue that piece of flow for some more bars. coz shit heated up. and then just stopped. . concept was dripped in added originality. like some out of space shit. ha ha...

    yeah was enjoyable and lively. but shudda been longer to entertain me some more

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