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LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
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LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
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Last edited by Oxymoron; August 23rd, 2006 at 06:13 AM
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Last edited by Tim; August 27th, 2006 at 02:52 PM
son fuck ya fams, your life consist of a computer place,
so i'll hack ya System<-- and use the machete on your face.
nobody ever reads your shit, an' yeah bitch i blast freaks,
your verse'll show no sign of Red Hooks - like the cunt did last week.
i'm slaping this bitch, Tim'll connect no hit's,
son we're gonna have a face off - cuz urs is ugly as shit.
this aint no joke, i'll trade ya wack ass on slave boats,
n' Tim always trys to yank my chain - thats tied around his throat!
shit T. your nearly 23, an' still no Girl-Friend or wife,
we see T.I.M. everyday<-- n' thats about sums up his life.
Last edited by Oxymoron; August 23rd, 2006 at 06:21 AM Reason: Editing Structure
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
this guy sucks in LLL will he make it past P.S please
the dude will never get on a roll like a sesame seed
Ghosts known weak, we all know what he is wishin
he could popeyes with his punches
oh well at least he can still go and eat their chicken
Cause he'll never be dope it seems and ill be one to vouch
he couldnt leave an impressin on the league if it was a couch
Good Metas, wordplays, and concepts this is what he lacks
If only Ghost could find a hope in text so he'd never come back
Im done with this joke before im through i must show the many
Ghosts and skill have something in common, you cant see any
ill smash either of u..... u wanna battle set it up
son fuck ya fams, your life consist of a computer place,
so i'll hack ya System<-- and use the machete on your face.
ok
nobody ever reads your shit, an' yeah bitch i blast freaks,
your verse'll show no sign of Red Hooks - like the cunt did last week.
ok
i'm slaping this bitch, Tim'll connect no hit's,
son we're gonna have a face off - cuz urs is ugly as shit.
ok
this aint no joke, i'll trade ya wack ass on slave boats,
n' Tim always trys to yank my chain - thats tied around his throat!
lol
shit T. your nearly 23, an' still no Girl-Friend or wife,
we see T.I.M. everyday<-- n' thats about sums up his life.
LOL
V.S
this guy sucks in LLL will he make it past P.S please
the dude will never get on a roll like a sesame seed
meh
Ghosts known weak, we all know what he is wishin
he could popeyes with his punches
oh well at least he can still go and eat their chicken
lol
Cause he'll never be dope it seems and ill be one to vouch
he couldnt leave an impressin on the league if it was a couch
this could have been doper lol coo though
Good Metas, wordplays, and concepts this is what he lacks
If only Ghost could find a hope in text so he'd never come back
coo
Im done with this joke before im through i must show the many
Ghosts and skill have something in common, you cant see any
LOL
V/ Tim
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son fuck ya fams, your life consist of a computer place,
so i'll hack ya System<-- and use the machete on your face.'
wtf Weak
nobody ever reads your shit, an' yeah bitch i blast freaks,
your verse'll show no sign of Red Hooks - like the cunt did last week.
Wtf dosnt make sense
i'm slaping this bitch, Tim'll connect no hit's,
son we're gonna have a face off - cuz urs is ugly as shit.
Cool
this aint no joke, i'll trade ya wack ass on slave boats,
n' Tim always trys to yank my chain - thats tied around his throat!
Weak
shit T. your nearly 23, an' still no Girl-Friend or wife,
we see T.I.M. everyday<-- n' thats about sums up his life.
Weak
I see you tried using threat punches but you dont know how to excecute them so i suggest you stop using them
vs
this guy sucks in LLL will he make it past P.S please
the dude will never get on a roll like a sesame seed
Weak
Ghosts known weak, we all know what he is wishin
he could popeyes with his punches
oh well at least he can still go and eat their chicken
Nah
Cause he'll never be dope it seems and ill be one to vouch
he couldnt leave an impressin on the league if it was a couch
Weak
Good Metas, wordplays, and concepts this is what he lacks
If only Ghost could find a hope in text so he'd never come back
ok
Im done with this joke before im through i must show the many
Ghosts and skill have something in common, you cant see any
hahaha
v-Tim
son fuck ya fams, your life consist of a computer place,
so i'll hack ya System<-- and use the machete on your face.
no
nobody ever reads your shit, an' yeah bitch i blast freaks,
your verse'll show no sign of Red Hooks - like the cunt did last week.
def. no
i'm slaping this bitch, Tim'll connect no hit's,
son we're gonna have a face off - cuz urs is ugly as shit.
lol ok decent
this aint no joke, i'll trade ya wack ass on slave boats,
n' Tim always trys to yank my chain - thats tied around his throat!
ha shoulda worded it better nice conept
shit T. your nearly 23, an' still no Girl-Friend or wife,
we see T.I.M. everyday<-- n' thats about sums up his life.
eh ok
tim
this guy sucks in LLL will he make it past P.S please
the dude will never get on a roll like a sesame seed
lol ok
Ghosts known weak, we all know what he is wishin
he could popeyes with his punches
oh well at least he can still go and eat their chicken
eh its meh
Cause he'll never be dope it seems and ill be one to vouch
he couldnt leave an impressin on the league if it was a couch
not executed good
Good Metas, wordplays, and concepts this is what he lacks
If only Ghost could find a hope in text so he'd never come back
i dont think i got it
Im done with this joke before im through i must show the many
Ghosts and skill have something in common, you cant see any
lol worded bad but dope comparisin def.
close battle actually, but i gotta give it to tim for consistancy. ghost picked it up at the end. it's preseason tho i understand.
v/ Tim
Originally Posted by yung bluff
Wtf lol^
and thanks for votes..
but that red hooks line was Read hooks aka nobody reads his punches. and red hooks was like one of the only cats to no show last week soo yeah.. not a strong concept but jus explaing for tay tay
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
ghost about that red hook line, I think the reason some people dont get it is cause its worded badly. I mean. red hooks, lol.. I get it, but when people say hook in a verse, they usually mean a chorus not punches, feel me?? so even though on the streets hooks are punches, in rap hooks are just choruses.. i think thats where the confusion came about and why the line had no effect really.
now down to the battle, I wasnt feeling much in this battle really, almost nothing, there was some decent concepts here and there in both verses but they just needed better wording.. tim's closer coulda been good for sure if worded better, I'll still give it credit since it was one of the better lines, and popeye lines are played as fuck but that was also one of the better lines in this battle. ghost like I said, some aight concepts here and there just needed better wording. face off I seen done alot. and the closer was your best but the wording just gets to me. overall tim just came a bit harder. both dropped weak though =/
vote - Tim
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^word.. i guess its jus a little confusion oh well.
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
Cause he'll never be dope it seems and ill be one to vouch
he couldnt leave an impressin on the league if it was a couch
^lol, dunno why i loved this so much :\ ..
anyways ..
the battle was ok. Tim had some punches that were above average, while ghosts punch were more along the lines average AT BEST. i think your problem this time was deffinatly wording. you had a couple decent punches, like the face off line ..and the T.I.M. everyday line's kind've played imo ..but lol. the system lines cool. i dunno how to word that to be great, but its a pretty coo concept. ok, and Tim imo, just outdid him with concepts. but Tim, you also had some meh wording for me. you still seem like you can do better than this and you haven't been going all out w/ this. i wanna see you do so man ..
both did ok, not that spectacular from either of you but still decent.
only one can win, and the wittiest gets the battle ..
v. Tim
This was a decent battle, nothing to amazing from either sides, i felt Tim came alot more wittier and on point,i woulda expected more from both, and think you should of waited tell friday to drop, try and get your wording on point, and maybe better concepts, well for Ghost atleast. once again nothing amazing, was really only really feeling:
Cause he'll never be dope it seems and ill be one to vouch
he couldnt leave an impressin on the league if it was a couch
vote Tim.
When I was 10 I was a hip hoppin shorty wop,
known for rockin microphones n twistin off a 40 top.
son fuck ya fams, your life consist of a computer place,
so i'll hack ya System<-- and use the machete on your face.
ok wordplay, not too good for an opener
nobody ever reads your shit, an' yeah bitch i blast freaks,
your verse'll show no sign of Red Hooks - like the cunt did last week.
meh personal/punch
i'm slaping this bitch, Tim'll connect no hit's,
son we're gonna have a face off - cuz urs is ugly as shit.
nah
this aint no joke, i'll trade ya wack ass on slave boats,
n' Tim always trys to yank my chain - thats tied around his throat!
good
shit T. your nearly 23, an' still no Girl-Friend or wife,
we see T.I.M. everyday<-- n' thats about sums up his life.
meh
some multis, iight flow, some violent punches that hit with wordplay, nice combos, a few decent bars, few mehh ones, try to keep a good consistency and you'd have this battle on lock
vs
this guy sucks in LLL will he make it past P.S please
the dude will never get on a roll like a sesame seed
played
Ghosts known weak, we all know what he is wishin
he could popeyes with his punches
oh well at least he can still go and eat their chicken
lol, i heard popeye punches, but the chicken was crisp
Cause he'll never be dope it seems and ill be one to vouch
he couldnt leave an impressin on the league if it was a couch
lol, iight punch
Good Metas, wordplays, and concepts this is what he lacks
If only Ghost could find a hope in text so he'd never come back
lol
Im done with this joke before im through i must show the many
Ghosts and skill have something in common, you cant see any
mehh
nice piccing yourself up at the endin of it, the closure was mehh tho, and you didnt have any multis, an ok flow due to the slim structure, still with a sting to ur punch i liked the impressin line, that was some above average shit, keep the consistency
v/Tim
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