Immortal Emcees

[OnKor]

Its the finesse & elegance that come from the last of greats
Mastered traits, spit their heart out then shove it back in place
A graceful presence, gonna always have faith in penmans
Seemlessly stop anyone, like they've emplaced a gremlin
Never cease to be on top, always will spite the cowards
They're at the height of power, tripling the eifel tower
Style supremacy, each & everyone has aisles of enemies
Break down every last one, as opponents are filed heavily
Evermore ask for fights, then a quick strike with talons
When they grasp the mic, words'll gleam like six ballads
Finally the goal was here, now having hope was queer
Until the start came back to them in a golden mirror
So bruised and battered, they had proved they had it
But no longer felt success, beating who they used to damage
And soon a light shone on them, had to act with force
Patched the sores, eyed a new worthy group & passed the torch


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[Logical.]

This was actually a pretty nice piece, when i looked at the title i thought it was going to be some newb rapping about how "good" he is, but i liked this. The vocab of this piece was very good. Most lines had a lot of creativity put into them. The imegry was good. Nice wordplay and metaphors. Overall this was a pretty good read.

A graceful presence, gonna always have faith in penmans
Seemlessly stop anyone, like they've emplaced a gremlin
Never cease to be on top, always will spite the cowards
They're at the height of power, tripling the eifel tower

^^My favorite lines

Overall- 7.5/10

[Tragedian.]

Never cease to be on top, always will spite the cowards
They're at the height of power, tripling the eifel tower

man that bar really caught my eye...really nice peice from you..you had really nice flow that stayed on point during the whole drop...multies really really good but couldve been improved....wordplay and vocab were off a tiny bit but still pretty good...topic was really nice pretty creative..but at the same time a bit played....nice drop man you have lots of skill i`ll be lookin foward to your fututre drops.

[OnKor]

Thnx guys,

Upp

[DJ Diablo]

yeh i liked this uyouve got some witty lines in there and the flow when ur reading is on point you had nice multies aswell overall a good piece keep it up

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[OnKor]

Thnx, uppin' again

[DOT]

i like the way you put ur words together nicely done

[kazi]

i like this, you showed good creativity and usage of multi's and such stuuf like.
it was good to read, and flowed nicely

[OnKor]

Thnx uppin'

[OnKor]

Uppin' again

[OnKor]

Upp