Western Conference Finals: 1. Com Vs. 2. Vaskez

[Mystery~Murdera]

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extension goes to Sat 12 Midday
Voting Ends Sunday night

[Erupt]

hey.. 30 lines?

[Vaskez]

nah this is a hella busy week unfortunately, make it 20 tops

[Vaskez]

just to let you know I'll probably need that extension, mad busy this week. So that goes till midday EST, 5pm UK time saturday.

[Erupt]

Think you misunderstand *borrow*, I don't give a shit that you're foreign
Coz 1-2 this is a test.. and this is the punch you stole from him
Fool needed an extension whats new? but as you're part of my crew
It'll be all cool by me, and wack as usual by you
Yeah kid you're nuthin the fuck? bitch wants to run with the bucks
So watch Vaskez make a mint... or at least SOMETHING that sucks
Watch me bludgeon this punk while his shit's snuffed coz its boring
Vas came testing the waters and the bitch ended up like New Orleans
So remember who you speak to.. coz I beat MM when he was weak too
The difference is, in your battle... the dude still nearly beat you
And I've kicked you out in the past, you dropped some flips and you're gassed
I knew your verse would be tongue in cheek, but I'm sick of you licking my ass
Bitch I've roared through the stages, last thing you're called is creative
This prick employed my style... and now he can't afford the wages
So Vaskez man up and let go,, couldn't see it was mine from the get go
And I normally hate to turn a blind eye..
...but this bitch was asking for his neck broke
And instead of writing you've been eating, dude swapped the prize for the candy
Its like the only ballpark figure he wants is Jason Giambi's
And bitch I'm on it as promised, but you could go far if I'm honest
Just try and go the extra mile.. and then stay the fuck away from us..

See you next season..

[Vaskez]

wtf? lmao@ thinkin I read rapexclusive, complete coincidence, *smh* @ makin a punch like it was anything else but coincidence, everyone knows I think of all my own shit, unlucky for you bitch... you WISH you were facing someone else's lines today...

You guys know Vaskez and Spit will win...actually Com might beat Vas...

who the fuck are you? there is no might about it

Damn son...
You think you're champ, dreamin that you gon' see me drop
But if I'm underdog, s'only cos your bitch likes to be on top
Ya just a skinny ho, d/r's say they'll never see this vet suck
Yeah Com'll reach the peak...but be too weak to pull himself up
N I know ya vow to leave heads rollin, heavily torn
So good luck, I'll need it...
...kept outta this battle, so your only weapon is gone
Saw your quote thinkin it wont take much n I'll fall
I hit hard, but you're right...
...there's no might about YOUR punches at all
The league's always short of smart heads with high IQs whose shit is ill
But Com makes up the numbers...to fool us to think he fits the bill
We never see this cat win LLL seasons, but he's bound to shock now
N after this fight it'll be common... the fuckin ground, knocked out
Thanks for the sig tho, I guess this ho deserves a medal
It's dope n representative of your work...
...by staying below my verse's level...

...there has been rarely a battler that has lasted as long as Com. Who has had an amount of skill stretch over a length of time...
Com on the other hand has had REPEATED second place finished...

That's some nice praise, heads might wonder how I'll reach that n catch up
N we all know Com's consistent...so he'll repeat his feat in this matchup
Still... this cat's made a name vowing to beat down on n smite clowns
N his skill's stretched over mad time....
...s'why we see so little of it right now
Saw ya made announcements in our forum n before this you hadn't
N I was surprised when I first saw that announcement...
...a measure of Com's talent

[Jay Walker]

Fool needed an extension whats new? but as you're part of my crew
It'll be all cool by me, and wack as usual by you
Bitch I've roared through the stages, last thing you're called is creative
This prick employed my style... and now he can't afford the wages
So Vaskez man up and let go,, couldn't see it was mine from the get go
And I normally hate to turn a blind eye..
...but this bitch was asking for his neck broke
And instead of writing you've been eating, dude swapped the prize for the candy
Its like the only ballpark figure he wants is Jason Giambi's

rotfl @ those.

So remember who you speak to.. coz I beat MM when he was weak too
The difference is, in your battle... the dude still nearly beat you

this got a little laugh, but there wasnt anything witty enough about it, or hard that hitting to be considered a real nice personal. should have put more thought into it. same can be said about this...

Yeah kid you're nuthin the fuck? bitch wants to run with the bucks
So watch Vaskez make a mint... or at least SOMETHING that sucks

the wording on the punch was off for me. when i first read it i thought it was a dope line, but then i realized mints dont suck... they get sucked. unless there is some over the pond mint slang i dont know about.

And I've kicked you out in the past, you dropped some flips and you're gassed
I knew your verse would be tongue in cheek, but I'm sick of you licking my ass

witty, nice and cool and all, but this is the same type of punch i was making fun of spit for in my verse last week. i think this whole concept of you - me is been played out. but this is just me, being around for a minute now seeing the damn thing so much. its like anytime i see some type of phrase like that or something like, "stand with greatness", etc, etc, etc... i already know the punchline, and it gets mad boring. i didnt catch it as much on this, so it gets some positive points, but the concept needs to rest.

And bitch I'm on it as promised, but you could go far if I'm honest
Just try and go the extra mile.. and then stay the fuck away from us..

lol @ that.

solid verse.


vs.


You think you're champ, dreamin that you gon' see me drop
But if I'm underdog, s'only cos your bitch likes to be on top

i'm sure u didnt know, but that shits plaaayed. i used this shit in like 04. =/

Ya just a skinny ho, d/r's say they'll never see this vet suck
Yeah Com'll reach the peak...but be too weak to pull himself up

didnt really make me drop my jaw, but this was aiight.


Saw your quote thinkin it wont take much n I'll fall
I hit hard, but you're right...
...there's no might about YOUR punches at all

concept was fucking dope, i think you messed up on your wording alittle bit though. should have thrown something in the set up about the play on "might"

Thanks for the sig tho, I guess this ho deserves a medal
It's dope n representative of your work...
...by staying below my verse's level...


cool concept, wording sucked though.

That's some nice praise, heads might wonder how I'll reach that n catch up
N we all know Com's consistent...so he'll repeat his feat in this matchup

so you're saying he'll beat you and lose to spit? lol, i know your not, but thats what it says. didnt like the punch anyway. to soft.

Still... this cat's made a name vowing to beat down on n smite clowns
N his skill's stretched over mad time....
...s'why we see so little of it right now

roflmao. dope.

Saw ya made announcements in our forum n before this you hadn't
N I was surprised when I first saw that announcement...
...a measure of Com's talent

I'm sure I'm missing something here, so I'm going to go look in the forum then come back and finish my voting.ok, so maybe i'm still missing something, cause right now this punch is wack as all hell. lol, sorry dude. ok, so an hour later i come back, and read the verses, and this last line hit me. dope. shit but your verse was good too, however, your wording didnt come over nearly as smooth as coms did. you both had some blah lines, and you both had some dope ones. vas, if you're wording was harder and better on your ill concepts, you would have taken this, but because they lacked, it really subtracted from the punches. i wish i would have seen some harsher, overall better, personals tossed at eachother, but this was still a pretty nice battle. its close... but i gotta go with com edging it.

[Mr. Nice Guy]

Think you misunderstand *borrow*, I don't give a shit that you're foreign
Coz 1-2 this is a test.. and this is the punch you stole from him
..aiight concept, but the wording could've been more effective and the links made it even worse. c'mon COM, were not newb's. but i see its relavency, just don't think u needed the link..
Fool needed an extension whats new? but as you're part of my crew
It'll be all cool by me, and wack as usual by you
..lol, nice. simple, but effective 'n gets the point across..
Yeah kid you're nuthin the fuck? bitch wants to run with the bucks
So watch Vaskez make a mint... or at least SOMETHING that sucks
..naw. ain't really feelin this shit too much. just a lil too basic for me =/..
Watch me bludgeon this punk while his shit's snuffed coz its boring
Vas came testing the waters and the bitch ended up like New Orleans
..NNOOO! i'm from new orleans and this is play'd. take it from me, i've heard enough of these to know their play'd..
So remember who you speak to.. coz I beat MM when he was weak too
The difference is, in your battle... the dude still nearly beat you
..ok, but wordin again. this was weak man. c'mon com, i've seen better..
And I've kicked you out in the past, you dropped some flips and you're gassed
I knew your verse would be tongue in cheek, but I'm sick of you licking my ass
..aiight flip, but i've seen this one too many times as well.. used it myself a while back in some other league. but too basic..
Bitch I've roared through the stages, last thing you're called is creative
This prick employed my style... and now he can't afford the wages
..lolz, self glory but an effective diss/punch in their as well. pretty cool..
So Vaskez man up and let go,, couldn't see it was mine from the get go
And I normally hate to turn a blind eye..
...but this bitch was asking for his neck broke
..yea, but blind eye/broken neck? not really hittin. what, cause u break my neck, my i've gone blind or u have? maybe explain it better but for now, naw..
And instead of writing you've been eating, dude swapped the prize for the candy
Its like the only ballpark figure he wants is Jason Giambi's
..naw.. nother weak punch that had possibility..
And bitch I'm on it as promised, but you could go far if I'm honest
Just try and go the extra mile.. and then stay the fuck away from us..
..this was dope. nice closer..

vs.

You think you're champ, dreamin that you gon' see me drop
But if I'm underdog, s'only cos your bitch likes to be on top
..aiight flip. i've seen it before, but this was ok, similar wordin thought.. but i know this IS NOT BITTEN..
Ya just a skinny ho, d/r's say they'll never see this vet suck
Yeah Com'll reach the peak...but be too weak to pull himself up
..nice, i know makin fun of com bein skinny is play'd but this was dope..
N I know ya vow to leave heads rollin, heavily torn
So good luck, I'll need it...
...kept outta this battle, so your only weapon is gone
..lolz. this made me laugh a little. pretty good..
Saw your quote thinkin it wont take much n I'll fall
I hit hard, but you're right...
...there's no might about YOUR punches at all
..pretty good but could've been harsher..
The league's always short of smart heads with high IQs whose shit is ill
But Com makes up the numbers...to fool us to think he fits the bill
..not bad, but wordin wasn't that great, imo..
We never see this cat win LLL seasons, but he's bound to shock now
N after this fight it'll be common... the fuckin ground, knocked out
..NICE! seen shit like this, but u used it nicely. good one again..
Thanks for the sig tho, I guess this ho deserves a medal
It's dope n representative of your work...
...by staying below my verse's level...
..whoa! now its personal! naw, this wasn't too bad and it got @ him personally. dope..
That's some nice praise, heads might wonder how I'll reach that n catch up
N we all know Com's consistent...so he'll repeat his feat in this matchup
..uh-oh! nother personal! nice man! i like these..
Still... this cat's made a name vowing to beat down on n smite clowns
N his skill's stretched over mad time....
...s'why we see so little of it right now
..pretty good. just not too hard but not too bad..
Saw ya made announcements in our forum n before this you hadn't
N I was surprised when I first saw that announcement...
...a measure of Com's talent
..this was good. never seen this wordplay before, but then again haven't been around enough to see it, but good and another personal..

COM - ok, how do i say this.. i know i've seen you drop ALOT better than this. really didn't seem like a well constructed/put together verse. i came in this battle thinking/wanting you to win. i really thought you were gonna drop hard as hell and make vask regret he came, but well, ur concepts weren't fresh and the wording wasn't on point. work on that and even if the concepts awsn't that great, u could'a flipped them to sound better.. maybe next time.

Vaskez - good drop man. i knew you could drop good, but this was a damn nice verse, imo. u had the personals which i liked, the punches were worded pretty well as well as the concetps. overall, u came in here hungry and you did what you had to. overall, i think you won pretty comfortably.

now to both battlers.. this was a pretty good battle, but yo.. vaskez swept this shit. i wasn't expectin him to come this fresh and dope. com, u either under-estimated vask or u just though u had a dope ass verse or somethin. but i wasn't feelin it. vask, on the other hand, i seriously think, even with that verse, COM could've beat you if he would have tried harder but u came dope, so i gotta give you ya props. as far as the rest of this shit goes, i'm bein honest towards the vote. so no one hate me for it. pz.

v/ Vaskez

[Mystery~Murdera]

Vaskez you're going to have to explain these two lines
or face penalties. Tim, Feeble, and I haven't decided as
to how severe they are going to be yet. But if you were
new to RB or an FL battler know that you would be banned
right now. So I'll await the explanation.

[Erupt]

Vaskez you're going to have to explain these two lines
or face penalties. Tim, Feeble, and I haven't decided as
to how severe they are going to be yet. But if you were
new to RB or an FL battler know that you would be banned
right now. So I'll await the explanation.

mind dropping a vote?

[Mystery~Murdera]

I felt Vaskez had one of his best verses here.
The Com on the ground and the Might punch were
good but then he used a "reach your peak" line wowww...
those are so played I had forgot all about them, lol... almost
like 02'. "I hope u reach ur peak so I can knock you off it"
I think Cam used it way back. Everything else was sorta so-so
cliche ish. Like the fit the bill line....

Com had a great verse. His 1st punch as exposure was crippling.
Then he had the MM personal. The Giambi line and something that
sucks line were funny as hell. I think those four overpowered Vas's
verse. It was an entertaining read.

v/ Com

[Erupt]

2-0 as Mr Nice Guys vote doesnt count

[Vaskez]

Vaskez you're going to have to explain these two lines
or face penalties. Tim, Feeble, and I haven't decided as
to how severe they are going to be yet. But if you were
new to RB or an FL battler know that you would be banned
right now. So I'll await the explanation.

if you're talking about the half ass thing, then I already explained it to Born when he PM'd me after he closed the 1-2 punch battle.

Man I was just as surprised as anyone to see that line had been used before. I dont even READ rapexclusive so I had no idea that concept has been used, I thought of it completely by myself. It's not that hard to think of, I mean his initials are A.S. and I was just thinkin about that when I saw the word ass in a post then put 2 and 2 together to make that punch. I was actually damn pleased with myself for thinkin of it, so it already sucks to know someone got there independently ahead of me :-\
There's nothing else to say, it's a pure coincidence, so I'm just unlucky, if you dont believe me, then it's whatever.


Jay - that repeat the feat line means that he'll repeat his feat of being placed second in THIS matchup as well, geddit?

anyway, thanks for the detailed votes.

[Vaskez]

2-0 as Mr Nice Guys vote doesnt count

yeah it does, he's untold and was in LLL this season



oh M, so you're saying this was one of my best verses and it was mainly all so-so? Wow, thanks dude, you flatter me

[Erupt]

its who was in PLAYOFFS this season actually unless I'm mistaken.. if I am, I apoligise and its 2-1

if you're talking about the half ass thing, then I already explained it to Born when he PM'd me after he closed the 1-2 punch battle.

Man I was just as surprised as anyone to see that line had been used before. I dont even READ rapexclusive so I had no idea that concept has been used, I thought of it completely by myself. It's not that hard to think of, I mean his initials are A.S. and I was just thinkin about that when I saw the word ass in a post then put 2 and 2 together to make that punch. I was actually damn pleased with myself for thinkin of it, so it already sucks to know someone got there independently ahead of me :-\
There's nothing else to say, it's a pure coincidence, so I'm just unlucky, if you dont believe me, then it's whatever.


Jay - that repeat the feat line means that he'll repeat his feat of being placed second in THIS matchup as well, geddit?

anyway, thanks for the detailed votes.

and wtf? dude you know better than to post all that shit in here.. PM mystery and don't go explaining all your punches.. coz I could do that shit all day with Mr Nice Guys vote....

just keep the shit in pm's the voters view in votes.. and your posts to a minimum... JUST coz my punch is about you being caught biting DOESNT MEAN you can sway about it... if it was ANY OTHER TYPE OF PUNCH.. this would be a huge no no.. and you know it... I'd be glad if this thread could be cleaned up...

now lets stop the swaying, explaining and posting please..