Get low

[Hendawg]

Go ahead Have yourself a try, so I don't have to explain/
Days of shopping and nights of you using the lord's name in vain/
Body looking so good make's it hard for me to refrain/
Fuck them other hoe's they ant like you...they just ant the same/
We strickly bussiness..all they here to do is entertain/
These bitches love me..im so fly and cocky/
Go more rounds then Mr.T's fight with rocky/
Boss Playa...Don Mega...The King of tonsil hockey/
Not built but my game is built real stocky/
Go away come back..you reminsin all those times long ago/
And if you already had me then you already know/

[Mr.Scribbles]

short but sweet, I don't really like the topic cuz, but you came with some nice lil wordplay and bars. It wouldn't have probably been better if you would have made it longer or actually gave it a purpose instead of just announcing to everybody that your whipped by some girl...lol j/k

[ferocity.]

I wasnt really pleased with this peice either, it lacked alot, but had alot aswell. Emotion was not there, zero, zip, and I dont like a peice without emotion lol, but your flow was great, and you dont see that kind of flow in todays OM's, so I applaud you for that. Keep working man, and I'll be looking forward to seeing more OM's by you.