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Nevermind.
16 since 10 isn't allowed.
aight
You know ya body cold wit one hit from the shotti, hoe
You'll take more gasps for air...
...than you spittin' in your audio
Gun punches are played through, but what I'm sayin is true
A homeless man has more room...
...for IMPROVEMENT than you
Steve’s like an food store, old punches, he stores em’
He checks in for the first time in months...
...so Philly gave away the forum
You’ll never get a deal, unsigned until you’re fully grown
But you’re in the booth all day...
...Since you can’t AFFORD a cell phone
Clown bow down and admit it, I'll devour this gimick
Time's an illusion...
...and your talent is nothin but hours and minutes
I'm breakin wacks, dude realize these prudent facts
A true ch_mp...
...never won a title, so lets put YOU in that
I’m keyin this cause its been nothin to fuckin say now
If we was cut from the same cloth...
...you got HUNG on the way down
In the midst of fuss and confusion you look dumb and clueless
You've built a culture out of defeat...
...and became A CUSTOMED to losin'
16 Bitch.
peeped ya audio aswell, wasnt hopin it to be bland or dull
i listened & might i say it moved me.....
........to click close as soon as possible
dont eva criticize on audio, atleast they get my spits
cuz to eva understand what you say?.....
...i got a better chance learnin chinese arithmetic
^^but i liked ya setup so theres somethin we can concur
you sucked in this battle, but be happy you had good structure
this guys an open book, doesnt have enough to seal wins
cuz his styles like a bowling ball ... so many holes ta feel in
tried to hard, coulda kept it simple but chosed the stupid path
yeah you a comedy of errors, just not the type that make us laugh
dont wanna face my wrath cuz you'll get slayed, its a no-brainer
why you stay sweating my technique, i aint your personal trainer
lamer than i thought you would be with ya concepts of rhyming
ya name suits you well, cuz this son while neva come out shinin
i am done with this kid, but theres so many ways i could hurt ace
would send him sliding down baseline, but he was out in the first place
First to vote= me
DUSKYou know ya body cold wit one hit from the shotti, hoe
You'll take more gasps for air...
...than you spittin' in your audio
^NAH, APERSONAL, BUT KINDA BASIC
Gun punches are played through, but what I'm sayin is true
A homeless man has more room...
...for IMPROVEMENT than you
^^LOL, LIKED THIS
Steve’s like an food store, old punches, he stores em’
He checks in for the first time in months...
...so Philly gave away the forum
LOL, THIS WAS OK
You’ll never get a deal, unsigned until you’re fully grown
But you’re in the booth all day...
...Since you can’t AFFORD a cell phone
NAH, ITS NOT REALLY TRUE, OK WORDPLAY BUT NAH
Clown bow down and admit it, I'll devour this gimick
Time's an illusion...
...and your talent is nothin but hours and minutes
^^OK, NOT REALLY A HARD DISS THO
I'm breakin wacks, dude realize these prudent facts
A true ch_mp...
...never won a title, so lets put YOU in that
^^YEH, THIS WAS DECENT
I’m keyin this cause its been nothin to fuckin say now
If we was cut from the same cloth...
...you got HUNG on the way down
^^LOLISH, KINDA LIKED
In the midst of fuss and confusion you look dumb and clueless
You've built a culture out of defeat...
...and became A CUSTOMED to losin'
^^DOES THIS RHYME?..NETHERTHELESS IT WAS DECENT
STEVIEFRESH
peeped ya audio aswell, wasnt hopin it to be bland or dull
i listened & might i say it moved me.....
........to click close as soon as possible
^^LOL...LIKED
dont eva criticize on audio, atleast they get my spits
cuz to eva understand what you say?.....
...i got a better chance learnin chinese arithmetic
^^NAH, THIS AINT DISSIN HIM
^^but i liked ya setup so theres somethin we can concur
you sucked in this battle, but be happy you had good structure
^^NO. THIS WAY WAY BASIC
this guys an open book, doesnt have enough to seal wins
cuz his styles like a bowling ball ... so many holes ta feel in
^^NO..TOO BASIC, WORDPLAY WAS KINDA FORCED, JUST DIDNT FEEL THIS BAR
tried to hard, coulda kept it simple but chosed the stupid path
yeah you a comedy of errors, just not the type that make us laugh
^^NOPE, THE WORDPLAY HERE IS TOO BASIC, NOT FEELING IT
dont wanna face my wrath cuz you'll get slayed, its a no-brainer
why you stay sweating my technique, i aint your personal trainer
^^NO NO NO, THIS IS JUST A STATEMENT
lamer than i thought you would be with ya concepts of rhyming
ya name suits you well, cuz this son while neva come out shinin
^^NAH, YA WORDPLAY IS WEAK AGAIN
i am done with this kid, but theres so many ways i could hurt ace
would send him sliding down baseline, but he was out in the first place
^^OH DEAR, NO, BASIC TO THE EXTREME.
OVERALL...dusk, most of ya bars were just average, with a few above this, no doubt you came with better concepts and hit your opponent more.The improvement line was the bar of the battle without it being overly wow, you didnt come as good as ive seen but you came more direct & harsher than steviefresh
Stevie, your opener was the only bar you had that hit your opponent, you had a lot of simple, basic concepts that wre not harsh enuff, and some of ya wordplay was either forced or just seemed to be there for the sake of having it, rather than it contributing to your punch in a hard way. i fancied stevie to win this after i saw dusks verse but honestly i was only feelin one bar for ya entire verse.
No hate, maybe everyone will see it different but thats how it was for me
VOTE-DUSK2DAWN
A.I
Hip Hop Uk Resurrection
You know ya body cold wit one hit from the shotti, hoe
You'll take more gasps for air...
...than you spittin' in your audio
^^hehe not bad
Gun punches are played through, but what I'm sayin is true
A homeless man has more room...
...for IMPROVEMENT than you
^^mad mad MAD played
Steve’s like an food store, old punches, he stores em’
He checks in for the first time in months...
...so Philly gave away the forum
^^s'ok
You’ll never get a deal, unsigned until you’re fully grown
But you’re in the booth all day...
...Since you can’t AFFORD a cell phone
^^hehe quite good
Clown bow down and admit it, I'll devour this gimick
Time's an illusion...
...and your talent is nothin but hours and minutes
^^ok, needed better wording
I'm breakin wacks, dude realize these prudent facts
A true ch_mp...
...never won a title, so lets put YOU in that
^^bad wording, interesting idea
I’m keyin this cause its been nothin to fuckin say now
If we was cut from the same cloth...
...you got HUNG on the way down
^^bad wording
In the midst of fuss and confusion you look dumb and clueless
You've built a culture out of defeat...
...and became A CUSTOMED to losin'
^^ok coulda done more
vs
peeped ya audio aswell, wasnt hopin it to be bland or dull
i listened & might i say it moved me.....
........to click close as soon as possible
^^not bad
dont eva criticize on audio, atleast they get my spits
cuz to eva understand what you say?.....
...i got a better chance learnin chinese arithmetic
^^meh, way too basic
^^but i liked ya setup so theres somethin we can concur
you sucked in this battle, but be happy you had good structure
^^basic
this guys an open book, doesnt have enough to seal wins
cuz his styles like a bowling ball ... so many holes ta feel in
^^meh, forced fill/feel
tried to hard, coulda kept it simple but chosed the stupid path
yeah you a comedy of errors, just not the type that make us laugh
^^not bad just coulda used a better setup
dont wanna face my wrath cuz you'll get slayed, its a no-brainer
why you stay sweating my technique, i aint your personal trainer
^^hahaha I liked this
lamer than i thought you would be with ya concepts of rhyming
ya name suits you well, cuz this son while neva come out shinin
^^aight
i am done with this kid, but theres so many ways i could hurt ace
would send him sliding down baseline, but he was out in the first place
^^ok ish
not bad battle
v/Stevie
ehhh 1-1
uppin for more
You know ya body cold wit one hit from the shotti, hoe
You'll take more gasps for air...
...than you spittin' in your audio
haha ight
Gun punches are played through, but what I'm sayin is true
A homeless man has more room...
...for IMPROVEMENT than you
played dawg
Steve’s like an food store, old punches, he stores em’
He checks in for the first time in months...
...so Philly gave away the forum
ok, not that hard tho
You’ll never get a deal, unsigned until you’re fully grown
But you’re in the booth all day...
...Since you can’t AFFORD a cell phone
cool
Clown bow down and admit it, I'll devour this gimick
Time's an illusion...
...and your talent is nothin but hours and minutes
ok
I'm breakin wacks, dude realize these prudent facts
A true ch_mp...
...never won a title, so lets put YOU in that
hah, nice concept
I’m keyin this cause its been nothin to fuckin say now
If we was cut from the same cloth...
...you got HUNG on the way down
played
In the midst of fuss and confusion you look dumb and clueless
You've built a culture out of defeat...
...and became A CUSTOMED to losin'
didnt like the wording, cool idea tho
peeped ya audio aswell, wasnt hopin it to be bland or dull
i listened & might i say it moved me.....
........to click close as soon as possible
MEH
dont eva criticize on audio, atleast they get my spits
cuz to eva understand what you say?.....
...i got a better chance learnin chinese arithmetic
too simple
^^but i liked ya setup so theres somethin we can concur
you sucked in this battle, but be happy you had good structure
no
this guys an open book, doesnt have enough to seal wins
cuz his styles like a bowling ball ... so many holes ta feel in
i didnt like the wording, nice concept tho
tried to hard, coulda kept it simple but chosed the stupid path
yeah you a comedy of errors, just not the type that make us laugh
cool
dont wanna face my wrath cuz you'll get slayed, its a no-brainer
why you stay sweating my technique, i aint your personal trainer
meh
lamer than i thought you would be with ya concepts of rhyming
ya name suits you well, cuz this son while neva come out shinin
played
i am done with this kid, but theres so many ways i could hurt ace
would send him sliding down baseline, but he was out in the first place
nope
quotables;
You know ya body cold wit one hit from the shotti, hoe
You'll take more gasps for air...
...than you spittin' in your audio
You’ll never get a deal, unsigned until you’re fully grown
But you’re in the booth all day...
...Since you can’t AFFORD a cell phone
vs
tried to hard, coulda kept it simple but chosed the stupid path
yeah you a comedy of errors, just not the type that make us laugh
2 vs 1, but dusk had a way more consistant verse than stevie here, imo.. dusk had a couple of really played lines, stevie had 1, but stevies shit was just so basic too me, didnt really have any creaitivity at all really.. i think this goes to dusk2dawn quite clearing... imo...
vote - dusk2dawn
2-1 me
uppin, damn 3 votes come on people.
You know ya body cold wit one hit from the shotti, hoe
You'll take more gasps for air...
...than you spittin' in your audio
lol pretty nice personalz lolz.
Gun punches are played through, but what I'm sayin is true
A homeless man has more room...
...for IMPROVEMENT than you
ummm, sorry but i've heard ones just like this before
Steve’s like an food store, old punches, he stores em’
He checks in for the first time in months...
...so Philly gave away the forum
nice personal punch again. not very true though but chea, ok
You’ll never get a deal, unsigned until you’re fully grown
But you’re in the booth all day...
...Since you can’t AFFORD a cell phone
nice concept, coulda been better. ok
Clown bow down and admit it, I'll devour this gimick
Time's an illusion...
...and your talent is nothin but hours and minutes
lol, could be better but i liked it
I'm breakin wacks, dude realize these prudent facts
A true ch_mp...
...never won a title, so lets put YOU in that
lol nice
I’m keyin this cause its been nothin to fuckin say now
If we was cut from the same cloth...
...you got HUNG on the way down
ehhh..................>_<
In the midst of fuss and confusion you look dumb and clueless
You've built a culture out of defeat...
...and became A CUSTOMED to losin'
nice thinking einstein. nice closer.
vs
peeped ya audio aswell, wasnt hopin it to be bland or dull
i listened & might i say it moved me.....
........to click close as soon as possible
okish opener, dusks was better tho
dont eva criticize on audio, atleast they get my spits
cuz to eva understand what you say?.....
...i got a better chance learnin chinese arithmetic
simple, plz plz plz dont feed.
^^but i liked ya setup so theres somethin we can concur
you sucked in this battle, but be happy you had good structure
ehhhhhhh
this guys an open book, doesnt have enough to seal wins
cuz his styles like a bowling ball ... so many holes ta feel in
lol, nice .
tried to hard, coulda kept it simple but chosed the stupid path
yeah you a comedy of errors, just not the type that make us laugh
nice again, good work chapelle. this is simple but effective
dont wanna face my wrath cuz you'll get slayed, its a no-brainer
why you stay sweating my technique, i aint your personal trainer
lol, haha not exactly a hard punch but nice nice nice.
lamer than i thought you would be with ya concepts of rhyming
ya name suits you well, cuz this son while neva come out shinin
dusk nameplay is done on him over and over, but this is the best ive seen.
i am done with this kid, but theres so many ways i could hurt ace
would send him sliding down baseline, but he was out in the first place
lol, pretty nice again.
DAYUm this was a close battle. really it will go down to the wire i think. stevie started weak in comparison but picked it up and finished pretty strongly. dusk2dawn was consistent on the basis that his quotables werent as good as stevies, but yea overall he was probably more consistent
quotables
dusk2dawn
I'm breakin wacks, dude realize these prudent facts
A true ch_mp...
...never won a title, so lets put YOU in that
In the midst of fuss and confusion you look dumb and clueless
You've built a culture out of defeat...
...and became A CUSTOMED to losin'
steviefresh
this guys an open book, doesnt have enough to seal wins
cuz his styles like a bowling ball ... so many holes ta feel in
tried to hard, coulda kept it simple but chosed the stupid path
yeah you a comedy of errors, just not the type that make us laugh
dont wanna face my wrath cuz you'll get slayed, its a no-brainer
why you stay sweating my technique, i aint your personal trainer
thats 3 vs 2, and i felt stevies were harder. both did nice though. props.
vote steviefresh
dont sleep
Dusk 2 Dawn's a fuckin biter..
His verse.. Vs. This Aint Beef
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=298987
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He bit from Prime....
http://www.dashadyboard.com/showthre...ghlight=square
Peep the down, right, square line and the cotton line.
Officially Whored.
wtf dusk......
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