Exact Vs. Esculator. [500]

[Oxymoron]

10 lines
10 check
40 drop
house

GL

[Oxymoron]

Check...

[D. Josey]

Check.

[D. Josey]

Are you seriously trying to mask something dude?
….. I really don’t need that veil kid,
I have 38 wins, damn, that’s a mask and a costume,
You seriously think you have talent? I'm laughing at the bitch,
Me "noting" that this kid is dope is seriously horribly off pitch,
10 Lines? No excuses, no buts or ifs, because
………..If you wanted it swift,
You could’ve just PM’ed your “dope crew” for it,
Battling this kid is like wallowing right in the lime light,
…….. He forfeits as a left, “he can’t rhyme right”
Because it’s a game whoring him. The price is never right.
Do you realize how wrong you were trying to step to me?
I don’t need to “irritate” this kid because his acne did already,

[Oxymoron]

Exact your gay, you'll never be cool, jus' a has been fool,
n' i had never herd of ya, untill i took a shit in ya gene pool.
i'm on a killing spree, fucka knife ima strangle you whore,
and between you and me, that Vs. is alot better than yours.
fucka exact, your rap games off, beating you'll be a pleasure,
coz if "X" marks the spot, we'll never reach the treasure,
i'ma mash this fool, smash him over the head with a chair,
n' we only 'Can't believe the thugness' coz it was never there.
i'ma slice ya crew, cuting them down to size, whore,
n' im getting respect from ya now,
the way i make The Artis'Tree Adore.

[Wyte]

Are you seriously trying to mask something dude?
….. I really don’t need that veil kid,
I have 38 wins, damn, that’s a mask and a costume,
meh
You seriously think you have talent? I'm laughing at the bitch,
Me "noting" that this kid is dope is seriously horribly off pitch,
nah
10 Lines? No excuses, no buts or ifs, because
………..If you wanted it swift,
You could’ve just PM’ed your “dope crew” for it,
ok
Battling this kid is like wallowing right in the lime light,
…….. He forfeits as a left, “he can’t rhyme right”
nice
Because it’s a game whoring him. The price is never right.
Do you realize how wrong you were trying to step to me?
I don’t need to “irritate” this kid because his acne did already,
ok nice personal

you had some ok punches and personals but i feel ur wording was terrible........6.7/10


Exact your gay, you'll never be cool, jus' a has been fool,
n' i had never herd of ya, untill i took a shit in ya gene pool.
shit concepts kinda played, but ok
i'm on a killing spree, fucka knife ima strangle you whore,
and between you and me, that Vs. is alot better than yours.
ok
fucka exact, your rap games off, beating you'll be a pleasure,
coz if "X" marks the spot, we'll never reach the treasure,
meh.....wasnt feeling this
i'ma mash this fool, smash him over the head with a chair,
n' we only 'Can't believe the thugness' coz it was never there.
nah
i'ma slice ya crew, cuting them down to size, whore,
n' im getting respect from ya now,
the way i make The Artis'Tree Adore.
ok


i thought you'd win this by the looks of his verse.....but ya punches werent good man.....ya last line was yur best.........u used whore too much.....wordplay bad too......6/10


v/exact

both drop an honest vote on the battle on sig

[NYisBack]

Are you seriously trying to mask something dude?
….. I really don’t need that veil kid,
I have 38 wins, damn, that’s a mask and a costume,
no
You seriously think you have talent? I'm laughing at the bitch,
Me "noting" that this kid is dope is seriously horribly off pitch,
no
10 Lines? No excuses, no buts or ifs, because
………..If you wanted it swift,
You could’ve just PM’ed your “dope crew” for it,
um, does becuz and it rhyme, im lost here, meh
Battling this kid is like wallowing right in the lime light,
…….. He forfeits as a left, “he can’t rhyme right”
played
Because it’s a game whoring him. The price is never right.
Do you realize how wrong you were trying to step to me?
I don’t need to “irritate” this kid because his acne did already,
this is played on him, and its wrong u used a pic

exact- after all that shit u talked in my battle i thought u would be dope, i respected ur feedback but, here this is bad, u had played concepts, and ur structure was meh, ur punches were weak and stretched, didnt flow to well at sum points, weak verse, this is easy to beat, use wordplay and harder hittin punches when u rap

vs

Exact your gay, you'll never be cool, jus' a has been fool,
n' i had never herd of ya, untill i took a shit in ya gene pool.
played but ok flip
i'm on a killing spree, fucka knife ima strangle you whore,
and between you and me, that Vs. is alot better than yours.
lmao, ok
fucka exact, your rap games off, beating you'll be a pleasure,
coz if "X" marks the spot, we'll never reach the treasure,
needs better wordin, no
i'ma mash this fool, smash him over the head with a chair,
n' we only 'Can't believe the thugness' coz it was never there.
no
i'ma slice ya crew, cuting them down to size, whore,
n' im getting respect from ya now,
the way i make The Artis'Tree Adore.
meh, needs better wording

esque- this verse was weak from u to, there have been alot of upsets on rb lately, and expecially fl, but anyway, u came kinda weak wit played concepts and weak punches, u had a few harder hittin ones but still not to dangerous, u need to use wordplay and deffinately work on ur wordin cuz it sucked here

Vote- no hate but overal vote here goes to esque for havin harder hittin punches and less played shit, both fix wording, cuz that killed both verses

[Cody Nash]

Are you seriously trying to mask something dude?
….. I really don’t need that veil kid,
I have 38 wins, damn, that’s a mask and a costume,
no. wack.
You seriously think you have talent? I'm laughing at the bitch,
Me "noting" that this kid is dope is seriously horribly off pitch,
your topical style is ruining your lines.
10 Lines? No excuses, no buts or ifs, because
………..If you wanted it swift,
You could’ve just PM’ed your “dope crew” for it,
no. omfg?
Battling this kid is like wallowing right in the lime light,
…….. He forfeits as a left, “he can’t rhyme right”
Because it’s a game whoring him. The price is never right.
played concept, and you made it horribly stretched & ruined it.
Do you realize how wrong you were trying to step to me?
I don’t need to “irritate” this kid because his acne did already,
gay. played and worded shitty.

Exact - look, never seen you do text. & if you can't elevate any better than this SOON, i suggest you keep your reputation & stick to topicals.

vs.

Exact your gay, you'll never be cool, jus' a has been fool,
n' i had never herd of ya, untill i took a shit in ya gene pool.
nope.
i'm on a killing spree, fucka knife ima strangle you whore,
and between you and me, that Vs. is alot better than yours.
this concepts cool, wordings dumb/hard to grasp.
fucka exact, your rap games off, beating you'll be a pleasure,
coz if "X" marks the spot, we'll never reach the treasure,
na, teasure shits played, and if this was nameplay, it was weak.
i'ma mash this fool, smash him over the head with a chair,
n' we only 'Can't believe the thugness' coz it was never there.
meh, weak personal.
i'ma slice ya crew, cuting them down to size, whore,
n' im getting respect from ya now,
the way i make The Artis'Tree Adore.
this is played and you KNOW it's played. adore - a door. didn't i show you that like a couple months ago? lol..

Esq - the verse is OK, but you're starting to go back into that deep slump of shittyness again. you need to keep coming up with concepts and being direct and consistant. keep working on the wording, you'll get better. you were WAY more direct in this battle tho...

v. Ghost Writer, easily ..Exact isn't good with text at all.

[Agony.]

i'm on a killing spree, fucka knife ima strangle you whore,
and between you and me, that Vs. is alot better than yours.
Best bar of the battle.

I have to say exact it seem's like you were structuring your verse as a topical. you have to come more direct with punches & use more creativity. your whole verse seemed played. & as for ghost you came somewhat played also but not as much. you came alot more direct & use somewhat creativity.

v/Ghost.

[Oxymoron]

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[Oxymoron]

[2]

[Oxymoron]

[3]

[D. Josey]

Upping.

[Oxymoron]

[4]

[Tim]

Are you seriously trying to mask something dude?
….. I really don’t need that veil kid,
I have 38 wins, damn, that’s a mask and a costume,
weak opener
You seriously think you have talent? I'm laughing at the bitch,
Me "noting" that this kid is dope is seriously horribly off pitch,
nope not working
10 Lines? No excuses, no buts or ifs, because
………..If you wanted it swift,
You could’ve just PM’ed your “dope crew” for it,
wtf is this
Battling this kid is like wallowing right in the lime light,
…….. He forfeits as a left, “he can’t rhyme right”
Because it’s a game whoring him. The price is never right.
played
Do you realize how wrong you were trying to step to me?
I don’t need to “irritate” this kid because his acne did already,
needed to be worded better


vs.

Exact your gay, you'll never be cool, jus' a has been fool,
n' i had never herd of ya, untill i took a shit in ya gene pool.
wack
i'm on a killing spree, fucka knife ima strangle you whore,
and between you and me, that Vs. is alot better than yours.
its okay
fucka exact, your rap games off, beating you'll be a pleasure,
coz if "X" marks the spot, we'll never reach the treasure,
payed to death
i'ma mash this fool, smash him over the head with a chair,
n' we only 'Can't believe the thugness' coz it was never there.
weak
i'ma slice ya crew, cuting them down to size, whore,
n' im getting respect from ya now,
the way i make The Artis'Tree Adore.
weak closer

Ill give you this very equal battle both comming with played concepts and very bad worded punches some the stuff like the adore and price is right so your both one the same level but GW did have one ight punch

i'm on a killing spree, fucka knife ima strangle you whore,
and between you and me, that Vs. is alot better than yours.

needed to be worded better but other then that fine

so vote......GW


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