10 lines
dropping for both of us
STAY-Z
blacksilence
10 lines
dropping for both of us
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STAY-Z
this lumberjack aint done a rap, these pages aint heard'a him
you could snap pens all day, because you'll never murda inc
black silence in a jar now, opposite of rule he must submiss
blow up dolls for a pedophile, the only way you bust on kids
i'll leave the rest in pieces bitch, its easy to see the proof
evidence submitted
....................black silence acquitted to believe the truth
wantin to have more battles, finish this one you gotta first
i already threw two, n'still im waitin for you to drop a verse
what you gotta curse? n'you to cheap to speak your voice
this kid bust like jackson, always relieved to see more boys
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Blacksilence
It’s funny how ppl get rated n’ shit, well I’m a A or B
But ya telling the truth…
….how ur text just always seem to stay at Z
Ya wants to be good, & then trys to grab fame by the neck
but he’s only mentioned, for being the WACKESS in text
U are shit, & being dope is something u’ve never been
I’ll drop like u SHITTY…
….& still manage to walk away with the win
There’s no room for ya to elevate, stay reachin for the sky
Roomer is FL has gone to shit…
…..witch is true….that ur a prime reason why
I throw this nigga out, they say I litter
But I’ll give em’ head shot…
…..knowing he thinks i’m taking his picture
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uppin1.
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i didnt even agree to this battle, and that verse there was a throwy
i posted it in our other thread before you called me out kid
i was tryna get you to drop somthin, but not against that
looks like its still got you by the balls tho...
why not resubmit the first verse you cat little cunt
......................thats twice you prooved to be a sneaky little fuck
^ my bad i thought u would want to use that verse, cuz u told me to post in the old thread that's going to be closed, so i post that verse
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im cool.... i'll go wif it................................................
.................................................. ........... sa'll good homie
this lumberjack aint done a rap, these pages aint heard'a him
you could snap pens all day, because you'll never murda inc
vs.
It’s funny how ppl get rated n’ shit, well I’m a A or B
But ya telling the truth…
….how ur text just always seem to stay at Z
There’s no room for ya to elevate, stay reachin for the sky
Roomer is FL has gone to shit…
…..witch is true….that ur a prime reason why
I throw this nigga out, they say I litter
But I’ll give em’ head shot…
…..knowing he thinks i’m taking his picture
decent battle on stay's part, but black killed it. doper punches, better wordin and iller concepts. stay, work on flow and shit, wordin and tryin to come with harsher punches.
v/ blacksilence
uppin2.
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uppin3.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299871
STAY-Z -
this lumberjack aint done a rap, these pages aint heard'a him
you could snap pens all day, because you'll never murda inc
lol, cool.
black silence in a jar now, opposite of rule he must submiss
blow up dolls for a pedophile, the only way you bust on kids
meh. it's OK. don't like the concept.
i'll leave the rest in pieces bitch, its easy to see the proof
evidence submitted
....................black silence acquitted to believe the truth
nope.
wantin to have more battles, finish this one you gotta first
i already threw two, n'still im waitin for you to drop a verse
na. weak.
what you gotta curse? n'you to cheap to speak your voice
this kid bust like jackson, always relieved to see more boys
played.
weak verse. i liked that first line though.
vs.
It’s funny how ppl get rated n’ shit, well I’m a A or B
But ya telling the truth…
….how ur text just always seem to stay at Z
decent.
Ya wants to be good, & then trys to grab fame by the neck
but he’s only mentioned, for being the WACKESS in text
cool.
U are shit, & being dope is something u’ve never been
I’ll drop like u SHITTY…
….& still manage to walk away with the win
na.
There’s no room for ya to elevate, stay reachin for the sky
Roomer is FL has gone to shit…
…..witch is true….that ur a prime reason why
i've never seen him? lol.
I throw this nigga out, they say I litter
But I’ll give em’ head shot…
…..knowing he thinks i’m taking his picture
stupidity punches are meh/played/weak.
okish verse, average. best you've done lately.
battle was all around weak, but judging by the breakdowns, my decision is obvious. decent battle, average at best.
v. Black
uppin4.
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this lumberjack aint done a rap, these pages aint heard'a him
you could snap pens all day, because you'll never murda inc
---lol, good
black silence in a jar now, opposite of rule he must submiss
blow up dolls for a pedophile, the only way you bust on kids
---meh, aight
i'll leave the rest in pieces bitch, its easy to see the proof
evidence submitted
....................black silence acquitted to believe the truth
---umm, no
wantin to have more battles, finish this one you gotta first
i already threw two, n'still im waitin for you to drop a verse
---wtf? no
what you gotta curse? n'you to cheap to speak your voice
this kid bust like jackson, always relieved to see more boys
---hella played, wacc
punches aint connect, saw no personals, not very good/original concepts, flow & structure was good, all u had was an opener, overall-5.5/10
vs.
It’s funny how ppl get rated n’ shit, well I’m a A or B
But ya telling the truth…
….how ur text just always seem to stay at Z
---meh, ok
Ya wants to be good, & then trys to grab fame by the neck
but he’s only mentioned, for being the WACKESS in text
---meh, ok again
U are shit, & being dope is something u’ve never been
I’ll drop like u SHITTY…
….& still manage to walk away with the win
---umm, no
There’s no room for ya to elevate, stay reachin for the sky
Roomer is FL has gone to shit…
…..witch is true….that ur a prime reason why
---lol, good
I throw this nigga out, they say I litter
But I’ll give em’ head shot…
…..knowing he thinks i’m taking his picture
---meh aight
aight verse, sum punches connected, aight concepts, good flow & structure, saw sum name-play, overall-7/10
v//blacksilence
rtf on tha link n muh sig plz
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