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Thread: 'I Must TRY' Leave links and please check it hotttt

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    'I Must TRY' Leave links and please check it hotttt

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4136660
    the spoken word in the beginning is 3rd eye samuri the yukalaylee (or w/e) the mini guitar...is from the movey waking life along with that little bt of poetry... the rap intro is quelf the first virse is me the chorus is me and quelf the second verse is me the third is 3rd eye and its mister mistery in the brige skit thing....SS on beats and production....
    leave links and def hit them upp

    uppen for feed on this....

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    wow...nap time is over children...leave some fucking feed and a link and ill return the favor.....

    uppen on you sleepen mother fuckers

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    wow @ da chorus

    chorus: blahhhhhhhhhh
    lyrics: da fuck?
    beat: so-so, weak at times
    intro: blah aswell

    ok 1st of all, that beat was ok....but it seems like afta every verse u dropped, tha beat started fuckin up....like it wasnt in tune, like ah fuckin scratched cd skippin parts of da beat....that shyt threw off da whole mood especially wit dem lyrics in ya 1st two verses, u was od'n tryna be twista jr....only thing is wit Twista u can understand half da words he's sayin, its clear....ya shyt was beyond blah, i dunno wtf u was sayin or tryna say, no diss eitha....jus honesty, and da intro didnt help da situation, that lil voice rappin wit u durin da chorus did NOT help da situation....i think niggas on here have a problem w/ chorus' cuz all da chorus' i've heard on here so far have been petrifyin....dead ass....only good part in da song was ya last verse, da quickest verse, u rapped very clear in dat verse....otha than dat, NO

    3/10
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    HAHAHAHA...ok w/e ill tkae it your ignorent and missed out on the whole point of this and twista can lick my ball sack...but thanks for the feed...

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    it was wack then,

    i tried 2 be subtle...but i guess thats what u wanted 2 hear


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    would someone who has good taist in hip hop music please leave some feed back..i've had enough of these lil jon clone regurjatated mother fuckers

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    oh yeah and you probably didnt no what i was saying cuz you dont have that well of vocabulary or something i make music for equals not retards...lemme hear your audio's.....uppen for non idiot feed back

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    whoa..

    that was different. i didnt like the ukulele in it at all...and what was up with that high pitched voice? and the beat? and your flow? no hate it was just wierd to listen to. i think your OVER exagerating your voice. trying to put TO much emotion in it. just keep it chilled out. no hate to your feed on my piece im just being honest. it seemed like you were trying to be in the listeners face. like ''listen to this or else'' type of thing goin on. i dont like that style. the beat was pretty good in some places. could have chose a better beat personally. the rhymes were again really strange and seemed misplaced. the flow was strangely on point with the beat you chose. honestly, no hate or beef or nothin dont take this the wrong way but i didnt really like the track. im assuming some of your other stuff might be better..or at least im hoping..out of ten..4 or 5 out of 10
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    thanks for the feed uppen

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    this wigga mad cuz i downgraded his shyt, i bet if i praised it u wouldnt be callin me an "idiot" or non-hip hop head now would u? come again fagget

    and trust, if i had audios i'd be doin a helluva lot betta than u doin....

    *waits 2 be called anotha name*


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    Quote Originally Posted by -IsIs-
    whoa..

    that was different. i didnt like the ukulele in it at all...and what was up with that high pitched voice? and the beat? and your flow? no hate it was just wierd to listen to. i think your OVER exagerating your voice. trying to put TO much emotion in it. just keep it chilled out. no hate to your feed on my piece im just being honest. it seemed like you were trying to be in the listeners face. like ''listen to this or else'' type of thing goin on. i dont like that style. the beat was pretty good in some places. could have chose a better beat personally. the rhymes were again really strange and seemed misplaced. the flow was strangely on point with the beat you chose. honestly, no hate or beef or nothin dont take this the wrong way but i didnt really like the track. im assuming some of your other stuff might be better..or at least im hoping..out of ten..4 or 5 out of 10
    and he's just bein modest...^


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    Quote Originally Posted by Hav
    and he's just bein modest...^
    word..ahaha.
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    fuck the bolth of you fags.. get out of my fucking thred....hav your whack in lyrics and i aint seen your fucking audios bitch... and isis i didnt diss like your shit but fuck yall...yall just cant open your mind to new things and when something new ketches on and whack ass fake music is no longer the horrable fad yall will be licking my nut sacks and buying my CD's... im your fucking favorite rappers favorite rapper bitch...suck my fucking dick and stop free posting.... hav your not a hip hop head ... your a wonna be bitch...yall want beef...lets audio battle....no one will be able to feel isis cuz his flow and emotion are shit and hav doesnt do audio...you want some then hall a back mother fuckers...uppen with some feed not hatter ass convo's in my fucking music thred
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    the intro...is kinda wierd...then the talkin isnt that bad....

    the guitar is kinda annoyin after awhile ahahhahah


    god damn...i cant understand what your saying...in some parts i can...but some parts i cant...no hate fam forreal but...the hooks is alright....but your need to make your vocals alot more clear....pronounce your words better so i can understand it a bit more...but some parts i can hear clear but others i can understand a damn word !! NO HATE AT ALL!! just leavin feedback....decent flow...fast flow like twista..just work on your clarity......


    keep droppin and keep up the practice....you'll get it...

    thanks for the feedback fam....bb whenever you drop another track

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    fuck the bolth of you fags.. get out of my fucking thred....hav your whack in lyrics and i aint seen your fucking audios bitch... and isis i didnt diss like your shit but fuck yall...yall just cant open your mind to new things and when something new ketches on and whack ass fake music is no longer the horrable fad yall will be licking my nut sacks and buying my CD's... im your fucking favorite rappers favorite rapper bitch...suck my fucking dick and stop free posting.... hav your not a hip hop head ... your a wonna be bitch...yall want beef...lets audio battle....no one will be able to feel isis cuz his flow and emotion are shit and hav doesnt do audio...you want some then hall a back mother fuckers...uppen with some feed not hatter ass convo's in my fucking music thred
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