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this kid is wack, that would explain why u cant get in a crew
and it really sux, when after all ur pens are sicker then you
all the bitches in ur family suck me, there all i need for groupiesOriginally Posted by Pens Ill
and you kno its sad, when u catch urself biting from movies
im not talkin bout ur mom when i say cut the bitch' N
infamouz. beat u straight up, and you resort to snitchin'
u would think im will ferrell, the way i'll leave u kicking and screamin
and you'll neva beat me, so u might as well jus keep on dreamin'
watch how i throw away pens, this pig is low on ink
send punches to Bic, cuz i'll only have paper left to think
easy, done before 2 hours
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NY could never get a bitch, Im speaking literal cuz you hate em
Yeah this niggas nuts dropped, then some squirrels came n ate em
Pens, he fucks hoes on regular basis I know that it hurts
Cus the only time you do dates, is when you postin a verse
Im connectin your face to my hands man, the punches are landin
Muthafucka im known to drop raw, so just expect to be standin
But now NY is back and he thinks hes got some respect
But check reality homie, No one gave a fuck that you left!
If we did we woulda noticed, just retire, I hope that you quit
Cuz ill make you give ups, like when no one votes on ya shit
-quote me now bitch
Punches: Ny
Flow: Ny
Wordplay: Ny
Structre: Neither
Creativity: Ny
Personals: Nwither
Metaphores: Neither
Multies: Ny
Overall this was really one sided.
Vote///Nyisback.
Vote Dq'ed. Banned for 1 week. -feeble
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im not talkin bout ur mom when i say cut the bitch' N
infamouz. beat u straight up, and you resort to snitchin'
vs
But now NY is back and he thinks hes got some respect
But check reality homie, No one gave a fuck that you left!
this battle was decent but you both have to work on wording your punches to make them hit harder imo but koo battle but i thought pens verse was a lil bit more consistent then ny's so pens gets my vote
v/Pens ill
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im not talkin bout ur mom when i say cut the bitch' N
infamouz. beat u straight up, and you resort to snitchin'
vs
But now NY is back and he thinks hes got some respect
But check reality homie, No one gave a fuck that you left!
NY-ok verse you had sum dope personals which helped you and your punches connect to hit tha opponent...that line i quoted was tha best line in your verse and tha whole battle...you had sum meh ok wordplay but work on it to improve it and get mo ideas about it but you had good flow and structure...you had tha overall better verse
Pens-ur verse wasmeh ok...not as good as NY's...not many personals but ok punches...tha line i quoted was tha only eyecatchin line i saw frm you so work sum more on ya shit and be more consistent thru out ur verse...good flow tho and ok structure elevate
\/=NY
this kid is wack, that would explain why u cant get in a crew
and it really sux, when after all ur pens are sicker then you
no
all the bitches in ur family suck me, there all i need for groupies
and you kno its sad, when u catch urself biting from movies
worded horribly, made it weak..
im not talkin bout ur mom when i say cut the bitch' N
infamouz. beat u straight up, and you resort to snitchin
weak its not even a punch, its a statement
u would think im will ferrell, the way i'll leave u kicking and screamin
and you'll neva beat me, so u might as well jus keep on dreamin'
god no
watch how i throw away pens, this pig is low on ink
send punches to Bic, cuz i'll only have paper left to think
meh ok
NY could never get a bitch, Im speaking literal cuz you hate em
Yeah this niggas nuts dropped, then some squirrels came n ate em
lol
Pens, he fucks hoes on regular basis I know that it hurts
Cus the only time you do dates, is when you postin a verse
meh ok
Im connectin your face to my hands man, the punches are landin
Muthafucka im known to drop raw, so just expect to be standin
no
But now NY is back and he thinks hes got some respect
But check reality homie, No one gave a fuck that you left!
no
If we did we woulda noticed, just retire, I hope that you quit
Cuz ill make you give ups, like when no one votes on ya shit
meh okish. barely
pretty weak battle, pensills open and 2nd bar won it for me, i didnt really like any of ya stuff NY is just seem'd weak and you had a few decent looking concepts with the personals, but your execution sucked and you ended up just making them into statements.. with no witt.
pens - your first couple of bars were ok, then you slowly fall off i thought, but it was enough.,.
vote - pens ill
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