The Witness vs SMZ [Topical]

[Chris Black]

The Future Thugs vs Hence Forward

No line limit.
No biting or recycling.
No hate, crew or d/r votes.
Due Friday, July 7th.

The Witness.: In your check in, suggest five topics.
SMZ: Pick one of the five topics in your check in.



1000 posts to vote.

[Witty]

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Rain seeps
Sleep untill tomorrow
Eyes wide shut
Heart skips a beat
Time froze

[SMZ]

Rain Seeps

[Witty]

Withered by a excessive life on the thoroughfare
I clamber to the flank of the road and subside
A glance to the sky, and see but a single star
Twinkling like a night light, freeing me inside

I stare blankly into heaven, in blissfull peace
Philosophising on the value of life, and its gifts
As a spirit appears alongside me, and takes a seat
And sings a song so sweet, and impeccably high pitched

‘Life is a bequest, don’t misuse or fling it away
For you get only one, and when life is defunct
Will you suffer on your judgement day?
Will your soul have already sunk?’


This mantra consumed the clamour of the road
Violently implementing my heart and my psyche
And commence paying for the seeds that I’ve sown
I pray for humanity, even the people I dislike

I cry tears of redemption, breaching my heart to God
And gaze in awe, as what I have been taught dissolves
And disappears, as I forget everything else
My health, myself, wealth, and just concentrate on God

I search through my being
and come to a conclusion
The spirit I am seeing
Is merely an illusion
I’m going frenetic
I must die in pain

One viscious gouge
Leaves me in a heap

Blood pours out and I die

As the Rain seeps.

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[SMZ]

rain seeps as the train leaves
two tugs on the horn's the only goodbye to main street
out with the old - in with the new
once the puddles dry up, she'll begin anew

Adam was her first love
high school sweethearts in search of
a happy dreamland made from futures
she was erratic, but Adam was a trooper
wasn't just try'na move her
when he says he loves her - he's tellin' the truth
irrelevant moods
kind, considerate, steady and thoughtful
but she's no apostle to his gospel
which prolly explains why she feels so awful
cause when she thinks of him - all she feels is responsibility
a launched guillotine
she wants to live life!
not just drift by as his wife
wasted days and missed nights - ‘cause you don’t live twice
so she’s thought about it - and gotten fairly numb
decided that no - not her - she ain’t scared to jump
so to Adam sure, the rain seems past dismal
but to her, it’s just washing things clean as a whistle
an' now he’s standin there with flowers
might be there for hours
she’s no coward - but two horn tugs are his only farewell
hopeful rain showers
and she’s feelin’ near well

so rain seeps as the train leaves
two tugs on the horn's the only goodbye to main street
out with the old - in with the new
once the puddles dry up, she'll begin anew

[Philly®]

let's get some votes here please... g'd luck to both

[Witty]

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[Witty]

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