User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 11 of 11

Thread: Nearly A Month Missing

  1. June 27th, 2006, 02:34 PM #1
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12

    Nearly A Month Missing

    God gave me style and gave me glossolalia
    speaking within the native tongues of this rhyme-mania
    having my enemies dremped in lenity
    like two powerful forces clashing while their aurora is killing me
    i know my shit is a bit complex
    thats why i think 3-D style to build on top like an architect
    but on the other hand i got a license to kill
    got beef with rappers on the side of my dish mostly like a full course meal
    and nope i aint being dillusional this one's real
    from, spaced-out rappers to actors its time for my hate not to be concealed
    by any means nessecary to be crazed like a psychopath
    i have been fucked and shitted on and now I look back and laugh
    how I barely made it through the hard times and the rough tasks
    thought that i'd never get my freedom words published
    not trying to be the voice of God through all this mayhem and ruckus
    whatever, ya intelligent writers wouldn't never understand so...fuck this
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. June 27th, 2006, 02:37 PM #2
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...43#post4659043
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...75#post4659075

    uppin for feed
    Last edited by Don Q; June 27th, 2006 at 02:39 PM
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. June 27th, 2006, 02:40 PM #3
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    uppin, uppin, uppin
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. June 27th, 2006, 02:41 PM #4
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    i'm goin be patient
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. June 27th, 2006, 02:42 PM #5
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    u-p-p-i-n f-o-r f-e-a-d
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. June 27th, 2006, 02:44 PM #6
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    this is goin to take a while. remember to speak your mind and tell the truth. tell me something good or bad so i could do better. help your fellow member out. uppin for feed
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  7. June 27th, 2006, 02:48 PM #7
    Axe.
    Axe. is offline
    Chop Chop Axe.'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Posts
    3,432
    Battle Record
    24-4
    nice shit..nice vocab..bad strcure..nice wordplay..alright flow...you need work on mettas..and your multis were good...you nee to put more complexity and be more complex wit ya flow..even tho it was hot..keep it up tho dude..
    overall.8/10
    ~1~..
    CΛVEMEN
    Axe

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  8. June 27th, 2006, 10:18 PM #8
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    thanks man still uppin for you know what people.
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  9. June 27th, 2006, 10:19 PM #9
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    come on i need this
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  10. June 27th, 2006, 10:47 PM #10
    omnipresence
    omnipresence is offline
    read MY mind bitch omnipresence's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2006
    Location
    my house
    Age
    34
    Posts
    521
    Battle Record
    20-6
    iight vocab, that was your high point, your flow was also iight, you should add multi's to affect your rhyme skeme and flow, your imagery could use some work too... when people read a topical its important they see through the eyes of the persons eye-witnessed account- or atleast somewhat near, now im not sayin tremendous detail is necessary but it does show in the end. keep at it tho, you have alot of potential
    7/10
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  11. June 27th, 2006, 11:19 PM #11
    Don Q
    Don Q is offline
    S.N.I.C.....is no more... Don Q's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    The City Where Souls Are Lost
    Age
    34
    Posts
    1,330
    Battle Record
    6-12
    thanks for the advice. uppin for more
    I'm not necessarily the original, more like the new but don't ever compare me to another.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. Missing
    By _Lyrics in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: October 11th, 2010, 12:59 PM
  2. What are we missing?
    By Sting3r in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: February 19th, 2009, 03:50 PM
  3. i'll be missing you
    By YoungDrose in forum Poetic Scriptures
    Replies: 4
    Last Post: July 23rd, 2006, 01:23 AM
  4. Missing..
    By Jonezy in forum The Lounge
    Replies: 24
    Last Post: December 20th, 2005, 11:20 PM
  5. Missing You
    By ...wun... in forum Poetic Scriptures
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: March 1st, 2004, 08:10 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Forum Rules