London, England

[Dat]

I knew she wasn't English
Because she spoke it far too well,
The gramma was goodly,
And the verbs as they should be,
And the slang was bang on the bell.

So as the language barrier
Clanged and banged,
I couldn't hear,
Hear or see,
England, London and Bow
Crumble into the sea



Whatever.. Critique it

[Poeta Demonio]

Short, but sweet. It had a nice flow to it, easy of the tongue. The structuring of the piece was pretty good, Very poetic style, furthermore i enjoyed the way in which you spoke in a 'proper' english tone... It added style and a touch of class!... Although it was taking a pop at the way in which english people speak now a days, it actually delivered a pretty valid message, well done i guess. Good to see you return.