[TA]Opus vs. [ME]ta2_tears

[D. Josey]

The Artis'Tree vs. Minds Elavated

This is a topical match. I really don't care what topic you pick, and if you pick the same. It's up to you.

20 Lines.
Due Sunday at Midnight
Blind Spit.
House Rules.
No Post Limit to Vote.
Check-In by Thursday

Topics
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Dear Mr. Creator
Fat Tuesday
Blushing in Love
If I was Tommorow
Week's Death
Propaganda
Love
Lusting at Bet
Man O'War
Zoological Beams
Magic Show
Crustacean Rock
Murderer's Notice
Rating Pending
Arts of a Trade

[Opus]

I'm feelin' Crustacean Rock, If I was Tomarrow, and Propaganda, but I just thought of The Tamborine Tree. Straight with you to use that one?

[D. Josey]

Yeah, but if ta2_tears wants to come up with one, he can. Goodluck to both of you.

[Kalos Graphē]

checkidy.. is it ok if i post a little late cuz i am going out of town 4 da weekend.

[Kalos Graphē]

My topic is The Cookie Jar... hope that's cool wit y'all

[Kalos Graphē]

The Cookie Jar
(A Love Song)

The child entered the kitchen, mischievously creeping in slowly
For upon the counter, behold, the cookie jar rested, sleeping so holy
His emotions seeping out wholly, his actions overtaken by anxiety
No consequences seemed to come to mind during this forsaken propriety
His heart screams for the cookie, his gut says no need to debate
Even though dinner is coming, and his mother says he has to wait
The feeling of hunger and longing enters him emitting a presence of strangers
He sets his eyes on the adventure, the lustful present of danger
His stomach aching, he is making his way over, shaking his fist
For the task was nearly impossible, should he be taking the risk?
What's so bad about this, why is he told no, he is doing no bloody wrong!
He looks at the towering counter, how can he reach it with his stubby arms?
His insisting yet resisting stomach was twisting as he began to reach
Sense of freedom, knocking down barriers, and all closed doors he ran to breach
His conscience screams, telling him to turn back, it's man against himself
He could sense he was near his prize, as his hand was upon the shelf
Tippie-toed, his hand approached, but he was only able to scratch the surface
He was not able to grasp the jar, nor could he grasp his purpose
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He decided he'd have to eat it later, so he found a place to wait and sit
Waiting... waiting... waiting... is that all that is to remain of our relationship?

if u dont understand the huge metaphor... plz dont vote... and opus best of luck 2 u i wont b here till tuesday so it'll prolly b closed by then

[Axe.]

up for opus

[Kalos Graphē]

ummm... opus? verse? when?

[Kalos Graphē]

i take it he's not spitting cuz its like 4 days overdue?

[D. Josey]

Listen, I don't mind if you guys count this as a no show. ta2_tears, it really wouldn't be fair to you, that your verse has been dragged out this long, and it wouldn't be fair to Opus as he already had a four day overdue verse. Close this. Opus is cut.

[Kalos Graphē]

aight aight u heard the man... i dont need a win 4 it either w/evs... i like 2 earn my winnings..

[Tim]

dqued no-show