This is a crew battle, Chosen Few vs The Next Level.
The rules are:
14-18 lines.
duedate: sunday midnight
500 posts to vote.
no crew votes obviously.
LG
McReaper
This is a crew battle, Chosen Few vs The Next Level.
The rules are:
14-18 lines.
duedate: sunday midnight
500 posts to vote.
no crew votes obviously.
check.
16.
Good Luck.
check
aight 16 it is g/l
extensions are graunted till tuesday if yall need one.
yea sry bout that ive beeen busy didnt get home till 3 am yesterday
yer i need untill tuesday as well lol.
o well he's no showed...
Quick 10.
Im ruthless in writtens, so best believe ill show no remorse duke
Cuz you’ve dropped so many flat liners… Julia Roberts is filing a lawsuit
How did you make it this far? I only say ure ass cuz it’s true
So when I say your TNL’s Anchor man… ure just the butter the crew
Kids no showed… watch from the sidelines and take a seat dude
Cuz you aint battling Gucci, but I only need a words worth to beat you
Your shit is wack as fuck, theres no need to sugar coat
But you will be given compliments… cuz reapers analogy to dope
Everyone here knows you’re a fag, anything you say is bent
Your idea of hidden agenda… is storing men in your basement
dude you were about 13 hours late also so its not a no-show
im letting meters post late you can do the same
^ roflz meters is showing late on a topical this is a 10 lines text verse.... but w.e he can drop till midnight tonight eastern since thats when meters has till....
true you the chosen few, cuz ive promoted yall as my pawns
but dude your crew is ghostly,
...especially when i make you Lyrically Gone
ill play soccer with your socket so you can see i dont joke dude
cuz you'll be a head of the game,
when mine comes out and pokes you
and lg aint even gully, he not even close to ghetto
saying youve written a real verse,
just makes us think your the wanksta version of jipetto
TNL known to bash heads, but please ama cut down your crew thread
yall needed to remove wack members
... so you dusk and wordsworth were the chosen few dead
and you beating the reaper?? guess ama have hit you wit deja vu
could tell you and your buddies wanted a beating
...so i felt generous and gave you two
blah watever lol
Im ruthless in writtens, so best believe ill show no remorse duke
Cuz you’ve dropped so many flat liners… Julia Roberts is filing a lawsuit
eh...ok
How did you make it this far? I only say ure ass cuz it’s true
So when I say your TNL’s Anchor man… ure just the butter the crew
lol...nice
Kids no showed… watch from the sidelines and take a seat dude
Cuz you aint battling Gucci, but I only need a words worth to beat you
meh..
Your shit is wack as fuck, theres no need to sugar coat
But you will be given compliments… cuz reapers analogy to dope
nahh.
Everyone here knows you’re a fag, anything you say is bent
Your idea of hidden agenda… is storing men in your basement
lol...cool closer. but the gay stuff is played but you had a nice concept to go with it.
vs
true you the chosen few, cuz ive promoted yall as my pawns
but dude your crew is ghostly,
...especially when i make you Lyrically Gone
no... weak.
ill play soccer with your socket so you can see i dont joke dude
cuz you'll be a head of the game,
when mine comes out and pokes you
eh..ok
and lg aint even gully, he not even close to ghetto
saying youve written a real verse,
just makes us think your the wanksta version of jipetto
no...
TNL known to bash heads, but please ama cut down your crew thread
yall needed to remove wack members
... so you dusk and wordsworth were the chosen few dead
eh...needed better wording.
and you beating the reaper?? guess ama have hit you wit deja vu
could tell you and your buddies wanted a beating
...so i felt generous and gave you two
lol...nice closer
Well this was an ok battle here. Both were pretty good. Lg cameharder in this battle though. It seem's like Reaper you forced some of your line's. You should have worded your line's alot better also. I think LG had the upperhand in punche's which were alot more direct. Reaper I have seen alot better but I don't know what happend here. Overall LG took this in my perspective.
v/LG.
Im ruthless in writtens, so best believe ill show no remorse duke
Cuz you’ve dropped so many flat liners… Julia Roberts is filing a lawsuit
How did you make it this far? I only say ure ass cuz it’s true
So when I say your TNL’s Anchor man… ure just the butter the crew
vs
nothing
very one sided battle, i felt that LG's openers were pretty hot. they were dope but he fell off a bit towards the end. Mcreaper your verse seemed to be half assed, and saying 'blah' at the end of it showed that lol. so yea pretty one sided. mcreaper used some weak ass lines and ive seen you drop much better than that. LG i liked that anchor line lmao, but a few of ur lines were played i.e agenda line.
pz
vote LG
Im ruthless in writtens, so best believe ill show no remorse duke
Cuz you’ve dropped so many flat liners… Julia Roberts is filing a lawsuit
cool. movie wordplays meh.
How did you make it this far? I only say ure ass cuz it’s true
So when I say your TNL’s Anchor man… ure just the butter the crew
meh.
Kids no showed… watch from the sidelines and take a seat dude
Cuz you aint battling Gucci, but I only need a words worth to beat you
good.
Your shit is wack as fuck, theres no need to sugar coat
But you will be given compliments… cuz reapers analogy to dope
meh. OK.
Everyone here knows you’re a fag, anything you say is bent
Your idea of hidden agenda… is storing men in your basement
lol, gay jokes are bleh to me.
LG - weak verse. a couple concepts i liked, but nothing too spectacular.
vs.
true you the chosen few, cuz ive promoted yall as my pawns
but dude your crew is ghostly,
...especially when i make you Lyrically Gone
no, weak nameplay. never use nameplay like this again.
ill play soccer with your socket so you can see i dont joke dude
cuz you'll be a head of the game,
when mine comes out and pokes you
nah.
and lg aint even gully, he not even close to ghetto
saying youve written a real verse,
just makes us think your the wanksta version of jipetto
no, jepetto punches are played. pinochio is too. this ones poorly executed.
TNL known to bash heads, but please ama cut down your crew thread
yall needed to remove wack members
... so you dusk and wordsworth were the chosen few dead
weak personal.
and you beating the reaper?? guess ama have hit you wit deja vu
could tell you and your buddies wanted a beating
...so i felt generous and gave you two
no. wack.
Reaper - by far one of your worst verses ever. this was horrible ..sorry.
v. LG, shitty battle.
Well this w quite one sided. LG had a decent verse. Only about 2 punches I didn't like. Somewhat consistant. But its mostly one sided `cuz of McReaper's drop. Very quickly keyed, I can tell. You need to take your time. I hope you do not drop like this on our battle. But yeah, vote goes to LG for a better verse.
v. LG
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I Am... Advisory
Im ruthless in writtens, so best believe ill show no remorse duke
Cuz you’ve dropped so many flat liners… Julia Roberts is filing a lawsuit
iight
How did you make it this far? I only say ure ass cuz it’s true
So when I say your TNL’s Anchor man… ure just the butter the crew
meh
Kids no showed… watch from the sidelines and take a seat dude
Cuz you aint battling Gucci, but I only need a words worth to beat you
nice
Your shit is wack as fuck, theres no need to sugar coat
But you will be given compliments… cuz reapers analogy to dope
iight
Everyone here knows you’re a fag, anything you say is bent
Your idea of hidden agenda… is storing men in your basement
lmao, nice
nice flow, multis i seen, i believe your punches were str8, some good, some could have been replaced with a better concept, i liked your closer, strong structure, nothing wrong with that verse
vs
true you the chosen few, cuz ive promoted yall as my pawns
but dude your crew is ghostly,
...especially when i make you Lyrically Gone
good opener
ill play soccer with your socket so you can see i dont joke dude
cuz you'll be a head of the game,
when mine comes out and pokes you
ok
and lg aint even gully, he not even close to ghetto
saying youve written a real verse,
just makes us think your the wanksta version of jipetto
naw
TNL known to bash heads, but please ama cut down your crew thread
yall needed to remove wack members
... so you dusk and wordsworth were the chosen few dead
meh, ok
and you beating the reaper?? guess ama have hit you wit deja vu
could tell you and your buddies wanted a beating
...so i felt generous and gave you two
iight closure
the structure was meh, that was your negative aspect, that you couldnt keep a pace with your rhythmn and flow and had to stretch. but some punches had witt, the opener, you just came a little bit short here.
v/LG
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