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  1. June 15th, 2006, 04:01 PM #1
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    Coded Descriptions

    The descriptive emotive encrypted
    Depicted in words yet unpredicted
    The letter lies at the mercy of time
    Creator ringing the deathly chime
    Read oh reader what you read
    Heed oh I reader what I heed

    The humming of crickets
    On top the barbed thickets
    Willows lilting underweight
    Damming their seeders to hate
    Yachts of old farmers united in pain
    Follow the stars to attain material gain
    Red herring amaze reader in many games
    Lovers internally bleed, yet name no names
    Coordinated auditions of irregular ideals
    Malfunctions matter damns loves and steals
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    Melancholy matters, mind knows no better
    ....See oh reader….
    If you can decode this letter!
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  2. June 15th, 2006, 04:24 PM #2
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=297433
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=297460
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  3. June 15th, 2006, 04:55 PM #3
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    this was a very creative peice..i liked it
    even though this was a bit short it was nice
    good flow, rhymes and creativity in this
    overall this was good...keep it up..

    by the way i decoded it, that was pretty cool
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  4. June 16th, 2006, 01:49 PM #4
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    yeah i know, i read da vinci ish before making it lol, uppin'
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL
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  5. June 16th, 2006, 01:56 PM #5
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    I like how this mad man thinks. Very creative, would have liked it longer but it was still good. Good voacb used and nice imagery. Flow was a little off but was still easy to understand. I liked the whole idea. Only thing I can say is I was mad it was so short.

    Anyway good drop man. Peace
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  6. June 16th, 2006, 02:24 PM #6
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    lol preciate it, i'm still in writers block phases na mean
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  7. June 16th, 2006, 02:28 PM #7
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    Creativity: 8
    Flow: 9
    Structre: 8
    Story: 9

    I thought this was a great peice. Short. But great. Keep it up.
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  8. June 16th, 2006, 04:49 PM #8
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    Preciate it
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  9. June 17th, 2006, 01:09 PM #9
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    Uppin'
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  10. June 17th, 2006, 03:41 PM #10
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    I loved the concept and the word choice, and the whole code thing was very creative and set this on a whole other level. The flow wasn't perfect but it still rolled right off my tongue (in my mind lol). Too bad it was so short but maybe you could use this concept on another, longer one. Anways good job on this
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  11. June 17th, 2006, 03:44 PM #11
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    Yeah i'll prolly make a longer one once i get my creativity back lol, but yeah preciate the comments
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  12. June 17th, 2006, 10:36 PM #12
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  13. June 17th, 2006, 11:45 PM #13
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    iy made me think...
    it was nice flow i was confesued at the beginnin
    i got it now
    nice flow mettas and multies

    nice drop..i liked this shit dude....
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  14. June 18th, 2006, 12:12 AM #14
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  15. June 18th, 2006, 02:44 PM #15
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    ha ha . yeah you crazy for real. nice artistic drop.i've done similar with the codes n ish a while back......... nice set up. poetry flowing f'sho...... yeah was an interesting take
    .nice way to fuck around w/ sum wordplay . rythym was tite........imagery was ace...
    all-in-all a short but hot joint....... keep em poppin

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