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    Irrelivent Conversing FROM MINORITIES

    Falling Into A Ever So Deep Oblivian
    After Deabating Irrelivent Discussions Wit Fellow Gentlemen
    Thoughts Of Negativity Filled The Air As My Lungs Enhale The Gentle Smoke
    For The Postive No One Cared And Were Only Interested In The Development Of Their Hope
    Minority's This And Minority's That Says One Who Doesn't Indulge In This Behavior
    For He Only Know's The Answer's And So On Goes This Seemed To Be Savior
    As There Mentality Elevates So Does There Physical Form
    I Have Not Yet Seen One Who's Vision's Were Not Scared And Torn
    Brutilized By Societies Ravishing Ways
    Has Led Them To Get High And Wonder Why There Not Establish Today
    As The Conversing Goes On None Still Seem To Relivse
    Only Much Un Needed Discussion About Ass Rationalized
    Going Deeper Into Their Feeble Minds Now The Topic Has Changed
    Now They Debate Over Who Led The Strongest Gang
    1 Screams Larry Hoover Another Screams Jeff Ford
    Then Another Said It Wasn't Real Until King David Came Aboard
    Now That The Fires Gone And All The Smoke Is Clear
    Could Any One Tell Me The Relivence Of What I Here ????



    Not My Best!!! Just Something I Keyed Up Quick As I Eat My Lunch
    DIDN'T HAVE TIME TO FIX MY STRUCTURE....

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    nice vocab usage here and there.
    topic was descent.rhymes were nice.
    flow was aight and strucutre was a bit off
    overall this was a descent a peice.keep elevating
    peace~

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    This piece was different from any piece that I've read in O-M...The imagery was on point.....Voacb was great.....The flow was easy to read yet choppy at some points...overall i'd say that this was a good piece... Good Work ... Keep at It ....Elevation is the key....

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    uppin 4 feed !!!!!!!!!!! don't sleep on this quick keystyle!!!!!

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    Don't sleep on this piece !!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by DrunknMonkey
    Don't sleep on this piece !!!
    PLESAE DON'T!!!!

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    2 responses DAMN this piece getting slept on !!!!

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    *he snores*
    *Awakes to find*
    *No Responses*
    *his head lays*
    *His eyes shut*
    *It's Back to sleep*

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    Quote Originally Posted by DrunknMonkey
    *he snores*
    *Awakes to find*
    *No Responses*
    *his head lays*
    *His eyes shut*
    *It's Back to sleep*
    *Again He does the same*

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    Quote Originally Posted by DrunknMonkey
    *he snores*
    *Awakes to find*
    *No Responses*
    *his head lays*
    *His eyes shut*
    *It's Back to sleep*
    *again he does the same*

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