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    Mothers/Mothers Day Feat. Ja Eazy & lOOk$

    lOOk$
    Mother is such a simple word
    But 2 me there’s meaning seldom heard
    I learned about love from you
    Watching your caring ways
    I learned about joy from you
    In fun-filled yesterdays
    For everything I am today
    My mothers love showed me the way
    From you I learned forgiving
    Of faults both big and small
    I learned what I know about living
    From you, as you gave life your all
    The example you set is still with me I'd never want any other
    I'm thankful for all that you taught me
    And I'm blessed to call you Mother
    I’ll love my mother all my days
    For enriching my life in so many ways
    She set me str8 and den set me free
    And that’s what the word mother means 2 me
    .
    .
    .
    Ja Eazy
    Dear mamma i wanna say like Tupac, your appreciated
    if i could u would have everything on a silver platter an
    now i feel wat ya had to go threw trying to raise me
    a lil hustla running aorund didn’t have respect for ya completely
    running from the cops u took me and gave me sense
    getting wat ever i needed and nuttin for u off of welfare expense
    kicking me out was for the good and i know it hurt ur loven heart
    but that made me write rhymes, mom u gave me a kick start
    even if this doesn’t go platinum it doesn’t matter cuz it was for u
    wen ya said i didn’t care for ya it hurt me cuz it was all untrue
    standing by my side i know now u would never leave it
    it was him it was u mamma that got me my first baseball mitt
    i disowned ya wen i was a teen for going selling rocks
    u told me not to and its surprisingly tru like a lik kid and cracker jack box
    till this day aint no one going to take my mommas place
    i know it was hard tryin to raise a thug like goin in a rat race
    but hey all those years r over and this one is for my mom
    one word to her and ill leave yall dead or wit shellshock Vietnam
    so this is all to tell ya that mom i love ya
    aint never leave me noon will take ya place this is for ya
    .
    .
    .

    U.S.P.
    Coming once a year, but shown in constant emotion through actions
    Mother showing her children love through any situation or distraction
    Raising me from birth, and taking me in with a loving heart
    Not like some mothers who see there kid then slowly depart
    Even if sometimes you weren’t there, your presence was surely felt
    I could talk to you about any situation no matter what hand I was dealt
    But it hurt when I was around 8, seeing you leave broke my intent
    Did you not love me anymore, all of those memories, where had they went
    So for days I cried myself to sleep, not knowing what I had done
    I didn’t know it wasn’t my fault and my life without both parents just begun
    It started off hard, but I learned quickly and I began to grow up fast
    Knowing that seeing my family together and happy was just a thing of the past
    I knew my from that day, standing in the driveway at the tender age of 8
    That my life had changed dramatically and this was my unchangeable fate
    Moving on was hard of course, and I hoped I would see you return
    Like a child waitin for his parent to return from a war, my heart had concern
    But as the days turned to weeks, months turned to years, I finally understood
    That this wasn’t my fault, but how could God Punish me if I only did good
    Seven years later, I’m still missing you dearly; times to see you aren’t long
    But ever since that day I became a man and my heart grew strong
    Knowing you’ll never see a High School football game that I play
    Looking into the stands to see nothing, but somehow I pray
    Somehow I kept my head high, brighter days to come is all I could think
    The only way to take the pain away was to write down poems enlaced with ink
    Ever since I witnessed you and dad argue and fight I promised myself that day
    That I would treat my girl right and never hurt her in any kind of way
    I also made another promise, something just as big and as true
    That I would stay with my wife and watch our kids develop as they grew
    Cause I know that’s what hurt you, not seeing me mature like a piece of life taken
    Not knowing what you have right now, cause this material joy has us forsaken
    But through the rain and pain, im going to keep my promises in sight
    Cause I never want my child to experience the pain I felt when you left that night
    I broke down, thought about if I caused it, what I didn’t do to help its process stop
    Imma always be there for my kids and wife and never let there heart drop
    With my wife, she will never be treated wrong, im always remaining true
    She’ll always have a happy home, emotions wont lie back in a corner subdue
    What you instilled on me in that day that you left, was something I never knew
    I found out that you loved me all along and that my heart was always with you
    What I’m trying to say is thank you, even without your presence, I learned a lot
    Before you moved away our family had love that in my mind will never be forgot
    I’ve known since I was 8, our family wouldn’t be together again no matter if I pray
    But even if your not here in person right now, I just wish you a happy Mothers Day



    links:
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89#post4457489

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    Quote Originally Posted by U.S.P.
    lOOk$
    Mother is such a simple word
    But 2 me there’s meaning seldom heard
    I learned about love from you
    Watching your caring ways
    I learned about joy from you
    In fun-filled yesterdays
    For everything I am today
    My mothers love showed me the way
    From you I learned forgiving
    Of faults both big and small
    I learned what I know about living
    From you, as you gave life your all
    The example you set is still with me I'd never want any other
    I'm thankful for all that you taught me
    And I'm blessed to call you Mother
    I’ll love my mother all my days
    For enriching my life in so many ways
    She set me str8 and den set me free
    And that’s what the word mother means 2 me
    .
    .
    .
    Ja Eazy
    Dear mamma i wanna say like Tupac, your appreciated
    if i could u would have everything on a silver platter an
    now i feel wat ya had to go threw trying to raise me
    a lil hustla running aorund didn’t have respect for ya completely
    running from the cops u took me and gave me sense
    getting wat ever i needed and nuttin for u off of welfare expense
    kicking me out was for the good and i know it hurt ur loven heart
    but that made me write rhymes, mom u gave me a kick start
    even if this doesn’t go platinum it doesn’t matter cuz it was for u
    wen ya said i didn’t care for ya it hurt me cuz it was all untrue
    standing by my side i know now u would never leave it
    it was him it was u mamma that got me my first baseball mitt
    i disowned ya wen i was a teen for going selling rocks
    u told me not to and its surprisingly tru like a lik kid and cracker jack box
    till this day aint no one going to take my mommas place
    i know it was hard tryin to raise a thug like goin in a rat race
    but hey all those years r over and this one is for my mom
    one word to her and ill leave yall dead or wit shellshock Vietnam
    so this is all to tell ya that mom i love ya
    aint never leave me noon will take ya place this is for ya
    .
    .
    .

    U.S.P.
    Coming once a year, but shown in constant emotion through actions
    Mother showing her children love through any situation or distraction
    Raising me from birth, and taking me in with a loving heart
    Not like some mothers who see there kid then slowly depart
    Even if sometimes you weren’t there, your presence was surely felt
    I could talk to you about any situation no matter what hand I was dealt
    But it hurt when I was around 8, seeing you leave broke my intent
    Did you not love me anymore, all of those memories, where had they went
    So for days I cried myself to sleep, not knowing what I had done
    I didn’t know it wasn’t my fault and my life without both parents just begun
    It started off hard, but I learned quickly and I began to grow up fast
    Knowing that seeing my family together and happy was just a thing of the past
    I knew my from that day, standing in the driveway at the tender age of 8
    That my life had changed dramatically and this was my unchangeable fate
    Moving on was hard of course, and I hoped I would see you return
    Like a child waitin for his parent to return from a war, my heart had concern
    But as the days turned to weeks, months turned to years, I finally understood
    That this wasn’t my fault, but how could God Punish me if I only did good
    Seven years later, I’m still missing you dearly; times to see you aren’t long
    But ever since that day I became a man and my heart grew strong
    Knowing you’ll never see a High School football game that I play
    Looking into the stands to see nothing, but somehow I pray
    Somehow I kept my head high, brighter days to come is all I could think
    The only way to take the pain away was to write down poems enlaced with ink
    Ever since I witnessed you and dad argue and fight I promised myself that day
    That I would treat my girl right and never hurt her in any kind of way
    I also made another promise, something just as big and as true
    That I would stay with my wife and watch our kids develop as they grew
    Cause I know that’s what hurt you, not seeing me mature like a piece of life taken
    Not knowing what you have right now, cause this material joy has us forsaken
    But through the rain and pain, im going to keep my promises in sight
    Cause I never want my child to experience the pain I felt when you left that night
    I broke down, thought about if I caused it, what I didn’t do to help its process stop
    Imma always be there for my kids and wife and never let there heart drop
    With my wife, she will never be treated wrong, im always remaining true
    She’ll always have a happy home, emotions wont lie back in a corner subdue
    What you instilled on me in that day that you left, was something I never knew
    I found out that you loved me all along and that my heart was always with you
    What I’m trying to say is thank you, even without your presence, I learned a lot
    Before you moved away our family had love that in my mind will never be forgot
    I’ve known since I was 8, our family wouldn’t be together again no matter if I pray
    But even if your not here in person right now, I just wish you a happy Mothers Day



    links:
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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...89#post4457489

    this was a real good piece
    i felt alot of emotion in this piece
    espically from U.S.P. his was da best
    da Ja And l00kz ya verses was good too
    but U.S.P. had max emotion
    it flowed real good, and had flawless wordplay

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    thank you Kid, i appreciate the Feed...I centered everything about my life..So Everything bout mine is true, expect me remembering memories of my family happy together, cuz there were none

    thanks, more feed...

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    uppin for some feed on dis

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    This piece is a perfect example of what this rap shit is all about.......The piece contained imagery, vocab was on point, emotions poured out....along with truth and real life situations...and for a collab I felt that each drop went together perfectly.....I mean this shit was so inspiring I even had to let my MOM read it and she thought that it was good (she thought I did it But I didn't take ya'll props).....Keep up the GOOD WORK.....It's piece's like this that keep O-M alive.......GOOD SHIT FAM!!!!


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    aight data thanks for the feed mayne lol and thanks for the props but lets get more feed one dis

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    bumpin this up for some more feed on dis

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    uppin dis for sum feed

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    up for feed...dont sleep on us please...read everything then give us sum feed..this is a deep and good piece

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    this was a cool collab. topic was deep, for real, and ya all had the emotion on high.
    lOOk$, your flow is a short one, but it works pretty nicely for most of the verse. had nice lines in there, alot of meaning to them, and your rhymes were simple, but pretty effective with the emotion. could have made it a bit lengthier though

    Eazy, your verse had a nice flow, you kept it up through the verse, but slipped like, once, but it didn't do anything to the verse. ya rhymes were cool, had some alright vocab in there, and they weren't too basic.

    last, but definetely not least, U.S.P. ya came the hardest on this track. flow was tight, ya lines weren't too short or too long, the flow was on point the whole time. your vocab was cool, and your rhymes were reall effective with the structure. the emotion was dope, definetely

    overall, a sweet collab, keep it up guys

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    aight thanks for da feed now lets get more on dis

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    this is mint!!!

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