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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    Warning for global warming

    My Truest Shit (violent) ( 1 2 3 )
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    Charges!! ( 1 2 )
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    Lions, Tigers, and Bears (first thing i've ever written)
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    Cruel History/ft Dusk 2 Dawn
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    Noncentz be cancerous gangrenous
    to all internal organs bordering the pancreous
    Assault and battery your artory
    with artillery and precision like archery.
    Parden me….
    i could of swore you the one hating cause I beat you in flow…
    Claiming I rap like you…
    the only time you even the score is at 0 and 0.
    Anatomically your technically straight just playing the role of a hoe
    Similar to Shannon Doherty on 90210.
    When I display this viscious array of wordplay,
    Any attempt to fuck with me leaves your rhyme display,
    looking more like weak foreplay, kid you beyond gay,
    fags lock you back in the closet and throw the key away.
    Claiming to be off the head but spit the same shit for 2 singles and a remix
    Must be channeling the dead cause all your scripts are ghost writ.
    Fronting hard looking across between ice cube an el debarge
    Any verse you do is so far,
    from freestyle your hype mans holding your cue cards.
    Drowning everyone within range My flow deranged
    challengers get rearranged like a sex change
    Yeah you were the man till you battled me and got raped.
    For not knowing who you fucking with a BLIND DATE.
    My mind states…I aint got time to deal with these kids
    On some fuck Faith….. like Biggie did….
    Noncentz the rapper you cant control alt or delete
    Will show you da feet while stomping you into the concrete
    Da Order cumm~eth *skeet skeet* all over the beat
    Any cameo appearance, will save your single from being sold on clearance.
    You aint seeing this here, lets get it clear,
    cameos is something you cant afford
    Like battling an accord against a ford escort
    Gave you a career from me sonning you shit my cd is like child support.
    Last edited by noncentz; May 4th, 2006 at 12:24 AM
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    man i liked this so much the vocab was so intence
    mad style the best part kid you beyond gay,
    fags lock you back in the closet and throw the key away.
    idk what that is called but it was seirously dope

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    Quote Originally Posted by M-A-D
    man i liked this so much the vocab was so intence
    mad style the best part kid you beyond gay,
    fags lock you back in the closet and throw the key away.
    idk what that is called but it was seirously dope
    thanks twin i do appreciate that atleast one person read this weather they like it or not
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    i thought this was gonna be herbish gibberish...however i was quite wrong.

    I was feeling your flow,which included some nice word choice, and vocab. in my opinion your structure was a lil shaky..however that is a minor flaw. You had some nice wordplay,and some funny/good things to see...however the topic itself wasnt all that complex..or no real twist took place...the title is a bit misleading in where it was basically a free verse/self glory/diss... however you did a nice job on making it a nice read. i would try to straightn up the looks, just to make it at first sight a lil more appealing..however that isnt irrelavant to what you ahve to write..and you did a good job!

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    originally posted by Spekz.
    I was feeling your flow,which included some nice word choice, and vocab. in my opinion your structure was a lil shaky..however that is a minor flaw. You had some nice wordplay,and some funny/good things to see...however the topic itself wasnt all that complex..or no real twist took place...the title is a bit misleading in where it was basically a free verse/self glory/diss... however you did a nice job on making it a nice read. i would try to straightn up the looks, just to make it at first sight a lil more appealing..however that isnt irrelavant to what you ahve to write..and you did a good job!
    i agree with speks

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    thanks yeah this is just battle style ish topicals got old to me so many do that battle peaces take more effort to me so i love to abuse them i agree its shaky and im working on that but for now im glad you liked the product
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    uppin for feedback
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    damn i get views but no comments whats the deal
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    safe noncentz... sick lyric

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    thanks twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    yooooo shit was ill fo sho flow was off tha chain man......... Damn..
    Drop some feed i'll RTF

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    thanks twin hit me if you ever want to collab
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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