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Thread: Life's outside forces

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    Life's outside forces

    Irony's a bitch just like karma it always strikes back
    it's different with fate and destiny its controll you lack
    it is death A.K.A the grim reapa who controls all wit his master plan
    each person goes when its their turn doesnt matter women or man
    you can't cheat death it will always get you in a ironic way
    make you suffer more as you watch your kronic body decay
    what is destined to happen will happen one way or another
    theres no possible way to change it so why bother
    everybodys fate is the same we all will die
    but its just some of us get more time to say our goodbyes
    irony has a way of sneeking up on you and striking when you least expect
    knocking you down turning ya smile upsidedown kind of reality check
    brought on by something you have down kinda a cause and effect
    Karma we bring on ourselves by our actions
    live a good life and good things will happen just like a chain reaction
    And vice versa live a life of evil and bad things will fall upon thee
    and these are our lifes deciding forces you see
    Last edited by LyRiCaL sLaYeR; April 25th, 2006 at 05:04 PM

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    hey pretty nice drop man..i was feelin it...
    The rhymes were pretty tight...i liked them
    flow was pretty nice throughout....
    vocab was descent..complexity was aight...
    This peice was somthing i really liked...
    Keep at it man..you got sum potential to be dope...
    peace~

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    aight thanks uppin for more feedback

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