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    Schizmatic (3-2) Vs. Untold (2-1)

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    Who cares about matching, if I drop 20 and you feel you can beat me with 10 go for it. And if you drop 20 and I think i can drop like 12 to beat you I will. BUT if you drop like 10 I wont go and drop more, ill match. Do the same if I end up dropping first

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    Last edited by schizmatic; April 29th, 2006 at 04:33 PM

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    Quote Originally Posted by Schizmatic
    20 max, no more
    Who cares about matching, if I drop 20 and you feel you can beat me with 10 go for it. And if you drop 20 and I think i can drop like 12 to beat you I will. BUT if you drop like 10 I wont go and drop more, ill match. Do the same if I end up dropping first

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    rofl.. someone seems a lil uneasy^

    explainin rules got ya so tense, you'll get slept in for service
    bitch, i got ya scared as fuck.. soo bad you'll never nervous
    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    i'll still teach this geek a lesson, freak him 'n leave him guessin
    sorry to leave a clete in ya chest son..
    ..i just wanted to make a deep impression
    see tol's stressin schiz to get personals from some dun
    but what friends can you ask, when you don't know 'Un..
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did
    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in
    shiz paint a good verse? ya the worse to attempt it dude
    you couldn't pass an Artest unless Ron was helpin you
    keep steppin duke.. or i'll quiet ya with a violent kill..
    ..so bad, i'll mute schiz and drop 'em off of Silent Hill

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    casinos depress me, so many losses just bring more scotch
    that's the LAST time i shoot crabs unless i aim at your crotch
    you dirty fuck, thats the truth, ask ANYONE this whore knows
    n' ur girls brutal....that horrid scare the fuck outa any1 with morals
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    i love insulting ya, your such an easy rattling dude
    and ide lay off... but im way too comfortable battling you
    i thought u were decent, seems like this guys so lazy
    stop pm'n me ur verses...i get enough shit from my ol' lady
    you know your garbage, just face it, no more fakin cunt
    your whole verse was a croc of shit like aligators takin dumps
    this ugly blind dates cuz he HAS to, i frown at that shit guy
    and whenever your centemetre she just laughes at your dick size

    ive been thrown alota vets this league, just my luck, shits jew
    i pm'd MM about, and what a' ya know...he matched me up with you

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    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    ^^lol
    see tol's stressin schiz to get personals from some dun
    but what friends can you ask, when you don't know 'Un..
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did
    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in
    ^^hehe

    impression double meaning's just overused

    vs.

    casinos depress me, so many losses just bring more scotch
    that's the LAST time i shoot crabs unless i aim at your crotch
    ^^hehe
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    i love insulting ya, your such an easy rattling dude
    and ide lay off... but im way too comfortable battling you
    i thought u were decent, seems like this guys so lazy
    stop pm'n me ur verses...i get enough shit from my ol' lady
    this ugly blind dates cuz he HAS to, i frown at that shit guy
    and whenever your centemetre she just laughes at your dick size

    not bad fellas, but I got Schiz takin it by 1...oooh, close

    v/Schiz

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    casinos depress me, so many losses just bring more scotch
    that's the LAST time i shoot crabs unless i aim at your crotch
    ^Lol.good opener.
    you dirty fuck, thats the truth, ask ANYONE this whore knows
    n' ur girls brutal....that horrid scare the fuck outa any1 with morals
    ^Lol.better.
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    ^aiight.
    i love insulting ya, your such an easy rattling dude
    and ide lay off... but im way too comfortable battling you
    ^okay.
    i thought u were decent, seems like this guys so lazy
    stop pm'n me ur verses...i get enough shit from my ol' lady
    ^ha.coo.
    you know your garbage, just face it, no more fakin cunt
    your whole verse was a croc of shit like aligators takin dumps
    ^Good.
    this ugly blind dates cuz he HAS to, i frown at that shit guy
    and whenever your centemetre she just laughes at your dick size
    ^Lol.pretty nice.made me laugh.
    ive been thrown alota vets this league, just my luck, shits jew
    i pm'd MM about, and what a' ya know...he matched me up with you
    ^Umm not really feelin this.



    vs.

    explainin rules got ya so tense, you'll get slept in for service
    bitch, i got ya scared as fuck.. soo bad you'll never nervous
    ^sorta forced,aiight tho'.
    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    ^good.
    i'll still teach this geek a lesson, freak him 'n leave him guessin
    sorry to leave a clete in ya chest son..
    ..i just wanted to make a deep impression
    ^yeah i agree with Vaskez on this,played..but still I like it..aiight.
    see tol's stressin schiz to get personals from some dun
    but what friends can you ask, when you don't know 'Un..
    ^Good.
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did
    ^straight.pretty good..but statement like.
    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in
    ^Nice.lol.
    shiz paint a good verse? ya the worse to attempt it dude
    you couldn't pass an Artest unless Ron was helpin you
    ^okay.
    keep steppin duke.. or i'll quiet ya with a violent kill..
    ..so bad, i'll mute schiz and drop 'em off of Silent Hill
    ^not really feeling this closer...no hate just a lil bland.I guess its the wording..didnt have much impact.

    Overall/-Schiz got this by having harder hitting punches...Un you had a nice drop but just didnt hit as ahard this week...no hate tho'..schiz did his thing this week..


    casinos depress me, so many losses just bring more scotch
    that's the LAST time i shoot crabs unless i aim at your crotch

    you dirty fuck, thats the truth, ask ANYONE this whore knows
    n' ur girls brutal....that horrid scare the fuck outa any1 with morals


    you know your garbage, just face it, no more fakin cunt
    your whole verse was a croc of shit like aligators takin dumps

    this ugly blind dates cuz he HAS to, i frown at that shit guy
    and whenever your centemetre she just laughes at your dick size
    ^Damn nice punches.

    vs.

    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin


    see tol's stressin schiz to get personals from some dun
    but what friends can you ask, when you don't know 'Un..

    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in
    ^Nice.


    See 4 to 3....Good battle.

    v/=Schiz.

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    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did
    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in

    vs.

    you dirty fuck, thats the truth, ask ANYONE this whore knows
    n' ur girls brutal....that horrid scare the fuck outa any1 with morals
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    i thought u were decent, seems like this guys so lazy
    stop pm'n me ur verses...i get enough shit from my ol' lady

    Okay, I didn't pick just any lines. I seriously picked the only good one's out of each verse. Sadly, there has to be a winner. I don't wanna piss anyone off now, because I've decided a winner, and I know I will piss someone off. Sorry. But let's break 'em both down now.

    Untold:
    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    ^ Thought it was kinda cool because I don't look at members this way.
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did
    ^ Thought this was a funny personal in general. Good shit.
    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in
    ^Well put. Well done, I liked just for the sheer style of it.

    Schizmatic:
    you dirty fuck, thats the truth, ask ANYONE this whore knows
    n' ur girls brutal....that horrid scare the fuck outa any1 with morals
    ^Okay wordplay. Not bad.
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    ^I liked this one, sorta witty. Not super great though, I mean.. Yeah.
    i thought u were decent, seems like this guys so lazy
    stop pm'n me ur verses...i get enough shit from my ol' lady
    ^ Thought this was cool too. Though most shit lines are played, I'll pass it off because of the style in it.

    Now, this was a hard one indeed. But, when I compare the worst lines vs. the worst lines, Schiz comes more wittier. giving him better consistency points, which makes my vote overall...

    Schiz.

    Sorry untold. At first I thought you had it then I took a re-look at it just to be safe incase you would get mad. You'll get 'em next time.

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    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did

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    casinos depress me, so many losses just bring more scotch
    that's the LAST time i shoot crabs unless i aim at your crotch
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    this ugly blind dates cuz he HAS to, i frown at that shit guy
    and whenever your centemetre she just laughes at your dick size

    v/ Schizmatic

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    blah i had a weak verse, mental block like crazy this week

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    yea both were kinda weak but matic had the quotables, the harder shit...
    untold i expected u to do better than that u had every chance to win but fell up short.

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    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did
    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in
    ^straight lines, not harsh ones though.

    vs.

    you dirty fuck, thats the truth, ask ANYONE this whore knows
    n' ur girls brutal....that horrid scare the fuck outa any1 with morals
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    i thought u were decent, seems like this guys so lazy
    stop pm'n me ur verses...i get enough shit from my ol' lady
    casinos depress me, so many losses just bring more scotch
    that's the LAST time i shoot crabs unless i aim at your crotch
    this ugly blind dates cuz he HAS to, i frown at that shit guy
    and whenever your centemetre she just laughes at your dick size
    ^lmao. some hard flip lines there, and a couple other good ones.

    Schiz had a real solid verse this time around. both did good but was just feelin' schiz on his A game a bit more. straight battle.

    V. Schiz

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    Yeah...Schiz all the way...

    Just better...harder hitting.

    That's all.

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    v-schiz
    both came weak, i thought Untold had a god structure and flow, but punches and well punches lacked, Schiz barely pulled it off with a few original punches. not much else to say, both were on each others level but for LLL it was an overall weak battle.

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    herb newbs chase 'em, ya 'n imposter in this case, son
    i thought he was a threat till i saw which 'matic i was facin
    plus you gave me some tips, and i admit i used 'em bitch
    but after i dropped 'em, i had a top battle before you did
    quick to floor this kid and don' big for this son'n to begin
    i'll put ya in a slump.. if ya ever come out of the one ya in

    vs.

    you dirty fuck, thats the truth, ask ANYONE this whore knows
    n' ur girls brutal....that horrid scare the fuck outa any1 with morals
    uve acheived NOTHING but rb's horse, its upsetting u could too
    the last time you were a big deal we was just betting you would lose
    i thought u were decent, seems like this guys so lazy
    stop pm'n me ur verses...i get enough shit from my ol' lady
    this ugly blind dates cuz he HAS to, i frown at that shit guy
    and whenever your centemetre she just laughes at your dick size

    I got schiz here with harder hitting punches. Pretty cool battle. Liked the matic punch though, lol. But ya, schiz got this one.

    v/ Schiz

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